BEST ONE YET!!! I think its epic!!! meant to post this last sunday......... also my entry to the le Tour de briques group! my catergory was star wars. heres a link http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/20073
About this creation
Eeth Koth and Captain Lock
thatcher with trevor
artielly gun with Plokoon and Commander Jock (ill post him today)
pic of them
ayala and bly
Kia-Mun Di and his squad
better view of them battling
close up of tramu and jedi
THE BRIDGE with the droids and grevious charging the outpost to over take it
Timmy Skywalker and the wolfpack defending it
showing off the turbo tank on the top of base.
gunner hes got some big guns!
IT MOVES TO! WATCH OUT DROIDS!
inside of the base
the jedi battling droids in the base
sorry for the darkness
gun and luminari
Lucas and his clones
my new kashyyk trooper!
212th battle with obi wan leading
landscape the waterfall
inside the outpost
a hole so the jedi can jump down (NOT FOR THE CLONES TO JUMP)
over view from the outpost on top of the base
jedi climbing the bridge to do a sneak attack on the droids
This is not as great as some people seem to think, the buildings are poorly built and there are plants on what seems to be pavement. I hope my comment was helpful! You are not a bad builder you just to pay more attention to detail.
Hm... There are lots of things which you can improve. First of all, It is a little odd, if there are grass and trees on grey ground. I suggest you cover the plate with brown or some other colour, but not grey... And it is better to have more details put in; to do so, you might want to reconsider the size of its MOC. Maybe you can look at this as reference: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/302474 I hope it's a useful tip! Keep it up!
Like Deff . said. Work on the landscape and make your figs look like they're running, and it'd be awesome. Great job otherwise! (And yeah, try not to be a rainbow warrior. I understand when it's something this big though....)
Could you some time put me in a base or something? Like leading a battle too? I'm planning to put you and me in a new clone base I'm planning to build. By the way, Nice job! The walk way is what's the best
Creativity: 4/5 Pretty creative, but it needs more landscape. Photos: 1/5 You need more photography practice. Build quality: 4/5 Nice builds you used in this, but remember to make buildings SNOT. Personal opinion: 1/5 Timmy, you were actually supposed to post a Vignette. This is much too big to be a Vignette, but I'll let you get by this time. Total: 10/20 Congratulations you made it to Round 2!
Creativity: 3/5 Photos: 3/5 Build quality: 3/5 Personal opinion: 1/5. Total: 10/20 You barely made it. You really need to take better pictures and you should have more build to your creation instead of plants everywhere and clones walking. It would be better if you put a few buildings down for the clones to go in. The build is very bare so you should work on it. Your pictures are very blurry you should try holding your camera still so it doesn't look bad and you need some lighting. I'm sure you can do better in Round 2.
I like it
April 22, 2012
I LIKE I LIKE! MEESA BUILT BASE. BUT MEESA DESTROY IT :( ME HAVE PICS HERE THOUGH! :)
Nice job!! I like your minifig collection. Only thing I would add is some obstacles and other details to the battlefield and put some more rooms inside the base. Otherwise very intense battle. Keep up the great wotk.