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Hey I'm back again.

Name: Narrzahk
Rank: General
Gender: Male
Weapons: Shadow sword.
Affiliations: New Lords
Age: ???
Element: Shadow
Race: Makuta
Powers: Makuta powers, all forty rahkshi powers.
Titles: Outcast, Warlord, Jungleburn
Armor Color: Whatever (Makuta are shape shifters) Generally green and black.
Eye Color: Red
Fun Fact: He used to be fat but now he's skinny.
Status: Particles.


What a boss! How do you like the new reviewing station/photobooth.

Feet. Liking the ankle guards.

Hero Factory armour FTW

Lower legs. Same as original.

Golden dot.

Upper legs.

Nice looking custom waist.

Torso. I'm not sure about this. Do you like it?

Under arm armour.

Upper arm armour. The Golden Arm Cup Returns!

Lower Arm.

Nice cannon there.

Shadow sword.

Face.

Bagels?????

Poster shot. What do you think overall?

Leader and General

Again?!?!?!?!???!??!??!?!?!?!

Back. Hope you enjoyed. Leave feedback on the strange body type.


Hey guys

Well hope you enjoyed this Moc. A lot different than the original. Much skinnier and in my opinion better. Might need a cape though. Sorry about my pretty sad amount of posts. This will be mocpages page number 68! Sad for almost two years considering I have 30 mocs, half of which have never been posted. A little disappointed by the number of likes the last one got but I have been devoting a lot of time to the project which I said would be my next post. Might as well tell you then. I'm working on an eight foot long and 3 foot tall Bionicle dragon. It's a huge parts drain and a massive challenge structurally getting it to stand up. So far i have the back legs, tail and body frame done. The back legs and tail are almost 100% armoured but the body is not. I've placed multiple huge bricklink orders to finish it and hope to complete it for Brickcon 2012! I'll try to start posting construction journals. Think it's pretty cool? Well being rather silly I decided to build the stupid thing in white (a very common colour) and...

Are you ready for it?

PURPLE! Why on earth did I choose purple. Not smart. So kids remember when building a dragon out of lego that is longer than your father is tall don't choose PURPLE!!!!!!!

Hope you enjoyed the second to last entry of the Villain team. Originally i was going to post all characters before I started posting my story but I might just start as soon as my villain team is all posted. Good day to you!


Pho





Comments

  May 30, 2012
Sorry if I sounded harsh. By the joints I meant the lime bohrok arms used on the shoulders, as they're only connect to the toso by the joint, and could fall or get into odd positions. I think it's better to have solid shoulders, as making them move is usually not an original intention of a moc.
Toa  Phosphorus
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  April 26, 2012
I dont like this version very much.
  April 24, 2012
Story? STORY! I can't believe i missed it!! D': anyway, to be compleately honest, I'm not too fond of this MOC. I like the colourscheme, and i like the aspects you were trying to get across, but, I think the arms are too long and the shoulders are too loose. If he was a real person, it would look like his arms were connected to his body only by a piece of cartledge. But, it's ok. Y'know me, I do like most of your stuff, but this i'm not too fond of. But keep trying :)
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  April 23, 2012
Quoting Cody G Looking good! His neck is a little long, but it's still decent.
Thanks.
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  April 23, 2012
Quoting Devon P @Toa Phosphorus: Good counter, but I meant what up with the super lerp?
Lerp?
  April 23, 2012
@Toa Phosphorus: Good counter, but I meant what up with the super lerp?
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  April 23, 2012
Looking good! His neck is a little long, but it's still decent.
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  April 22, 2012
The torso is different, but I like it. Overall well done! I'm looking forward to the dragon!
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  April 22, 2012
Some parts jut out a bit too much, but overall he looks pretty cool. I like your new light box too, and the dragon sounds awesome!
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  April 22, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid Well to start, the proportions are all over the place, parts stick out, everything's too skinny, and it has too many joints that either don't do anything (and take away from the structural integrity) or are in the wrong direction, impeding movement. I think you could have done much better, and to me it doesn't look like there was much planning in this, more of throwing ideas together. Sorry, that's what it looks like to me :/
The proportions are intended. I wanted a odd looking Makuta. The proportions are very much supposed to represent something very inhuman and alien. I'm not sure I can see any joints that you speak of. If you could name those I would be glad to fix them. Actually he's one of my most mobile creations to date because of all of his points of articulation. This was very planned and I feel your comment to be based on assumption not fact forcing me to view it not as constructive criticism but more as an insult.
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  April 22, 2012
Quoting Devon P Phos, What is this???
Lego.
  April 22, 2012
Phos, What is this???
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  April 22, 2012
Well to start, the proportions are all over the place, parts stick out, everything's too skinny, and it has too many joints that either don't do anything (and take away from the structural integrity) or are in the wrong direction, impeding movement. I think you could have done much better, and to me it doesn't look like there was much planning in this, more of throwing ideas together. Sorry, that's what it looks like to me :/
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  April 22, 2012
Awesome.....A purple dragon.....Amazing idea, cant wait to see it!
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  April 22, 2012
Nice work, some parts stick out a bit too much, but overall it's a fairly decent build. ;) BTW Pho, could you answer a question in the Periodic Bionicle Contest?: http://mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=20330&topicid=80011#comment-973927
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  April 22, 2012
Those ankles are really nice. The torso looks good, but I feel like it's missing something. The new background is nice as well- clean and simple always does the trick. Can't wait for the Eggplant Dragon... see what I did there? :P
 
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