The Great Force War, Mission 1: Revealed: A LEGO® creation by Ian in a Mech Suit!!! : MOCpages.com

The Great Force War, Mission 1: Revealed

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"Log 1 - Sith Empire" -- This is an urgent call to all nearby Sith Lords. Alzoc III is under attack, repeat we are under attack by Jedi! We need acolytes to help evacuate the planet whilst the Dark Masters engage the Jedi! We must crush this rebellion now! For the Empire! -- "End log"

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"Log of Darth Nihlus- I woke up early to the sound of an alarm. I thought it was another drill, but then I heard fighting. I got the other acolytes up and started heading for the rendezvous point, when suddenly two Jedi attacked. I told the younger acolytes to continue while I handled it. They were very poorly trained, so I easily defeated one. The other one stayed out of my reach. I will continue to fight for the sith. End log."

An overview of the whole mountain.

My sith sig-fig killing a jedi, giving the acolytes time to escape.

An acolyte going down a tunnel.

An acolyte on the ground.

An acolyte going around the mountain.

An acolyte at the prearranged meeting place.

A Mon Calamari Jedi trying to get the jump on me.

Birds eye view.

The minifigures all lined up.

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Chocolate Chipmunk

April 28, 2012

Lookin' good!

Josh.O Shadeslayer

April 25, 2012

your score 1/10

I made it

Grand Admiral Ian of the 222nd

April 25, 2012

Quoting Michael Rutherford Lots of action with the minifigs, but you could use them even more. The guy getting stabbed is great, and the dude way up on top is interesting, but the others are just sort of standing around. Maybe pose them running, or grabbing weapons? It would make this action scene even more dynamic. Your presentation is ok, but again, you can do much better. The picture of the person going down the tunnel is very blurry, but the next photo is very sharp. The bottom line is that you should never put up a blurry pic (unless it's part of a forced perspective project). You can review all your pictures before posting, so just pull out the blurry ones. Your use of the white slopes to crate the mountain environment is effective, but again, go for more! If you have them, more slopes would make your environment even stronger. Good job. Attack!

i dont have more, b/c i am a TFOL

I like it

Fell Skyhawk

April 25, 2012

Impressive, most impressive, but you are not a sith yet... oh wait, you are. :P Terrain could use work, great outpost, good story, great lightsaber.

Michael Rutherford

April 25, 2012

Lots of action with the minifigs, but you could use them even more. The guy getting stabbed is great, and the dude way up on top is interesting, but the others are just sort of standing around. Maybe pose them running, or grabbing weapons? It would make this action scene even more dynamic. Your presentation is ok, but again, you can do much better. The picture of the person going down the tunnel is very blurry, but the next photo is very sharp. The bottom line is that you should never put up a blurry pic (unless it's part of a forced perspective project). You can review all your pictures before posting, so just pull out the blurry ones. Your use of the white slopes to crate the mountain environment is effective, but again, go for more! If you have them, more slopes would make your environment even stronger. Good job. Attack!