My entry for the second mission for The Great Force War contest.
The <a href=http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/20443>Link</a> to The Great Force Wars Contest
About this creation
Beginning Log:
After the fight on the ice planet, My master (Father) called me on my holocam. he told me that me and him had a new mission. I have always loved to be on missions with my Father. He said I was to meet him on Tatooine. So after a few days flying to Tatooine, I made it. My Father was awaiting to greet me. Once I was out of my ship, I walked up to him and gave him a big hug. Then he started to tell me what our mission was, He was told the he had to go and talk to the hutts while I go and look for the Sith that might be on Tatooine. So I said good bye to my Father and headed to town. My first thought was that the Sith would be in the dark places. So I headed there. Then I looked, I saw a person with a Lightsaber! So I ducked into a building an waited for the person to come closer s I could get a better look. But instead of that, I used the Force. I felt the dark force in him. Yep. It was a Sith alright.
I heard her nearing, then Artoo bleeps to me. Then I said back: "Shh!!! Here she comes."
I could feel it in the Force, The sith was a girl!!!!!
I sprang up out at her as soon as I heard her very near where I was hiding.
So then she starts to run out of the building. I started after her.
Then as soon as I got out of the building, she lit her Lightsaber.
So then I lighted my Lightsaber and hit hers. I could feel anger in her through the Force. This is not going to be as easy as I thought.
But Then she knocked me over. She then tried to cut me in half with her Lightsaber, but I was to quick for her enable for her to do that.
I did not want to kill her. Maybe I can bring her to the light side of the force. So then I used the force to knock her down. "She'll be alright." I told my self.
I was shocked, I could not believe the Sith that I fought was a girl. Maybe I should bring her back to dad. So then I deactivated my Lightsaber. Then I used the force to deactivate the Sith Girl's Lightsaber too.
I walked up to her to see if she was knocked out or not. (R2-D2 comes through the door way in the background)
So after recovered from the force throw, I slapped shock cuffs on her. Then we started to walk away.
End Log
From left to right: Alien dude, R2-D2 (Yeah, he's still around) An other Alien dude, Sith Girl, Crade Skywalker (Me)
Comments
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May 6, 2012 |
4/10 nice story and the lightsabers were cool. It would have been nice to see a bigger background with a bit more going on though |
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Man, you can do better, you already proved it (I'm refering to the story ... but I like the wall, somehow)
Nice animated lightsabers, though. |
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I like it |
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May 2, 2012 |
Wow, great storyline plus build! All around excellent creation:) |
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I made it |
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May 2, 2012 |
Quoting Fell Skyhawk
lol, like the story, but is that 16x16... it looks small on the depth, but that could just be an optical illusion. Not too bad, I like it, but the simplicity of terrain I'm only rating "Good", but I do like it. It's 16x16. Harry said it had to be that big. So I made it that big
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lol, like the story, but is that 16x16... it looks small on the depth, but that could just be an optical illusion. Not too bad, I like it, but the simplicity of terrain I'm only rating "Good", but I do like it. |
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I made it |
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May 2, 2012 |
Quoting Chocolate Chipmunk
This is a neat idea, I like the plot, but who were the aliens?
Just extras. |
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I like it |
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May 2, 2012 |
This is a neat idea, I like the plot, but who were the aliens? |
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