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Mission 2: Alliance
My entry for the second mission for The Great Force War contest. The <a href=http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/20443>Link</a> to The Great Force Wars Contest
About this creation
Beginning Log:
After the fight on the ice planet, My master (Father) called me on my holocam. he told me that me and him had a new mission. I have always loved to be on missions with my Father. He said I was to meet him on Tatooine. So after a few days flying to Tatooine, I made it. My Father was awaiting to greet me. Once I was out of my ship, I walked up to him and gave him a big hug. Then he started to tell me what our mission was, He was told the he had to go and talk to the hutts while I go and look for the Sith that might be on Tatooine. So I said good bye to my Father and headed to town. My first thought was that the Sith would be in the dark places. So I headed there. Then I looked, I saw a person with a Lightsaber! So I ducked into a building an waited for the person to come closer s I could get a better look. But instead of that, I used the Force. I felt the dark force in him. Yep. It was a Sith alright.


I heard her nearing, then Artoo bleeps to me. Then I said back: "Shh!!! Here she comes."
I could feel it in the Force, The sith was a girl!!!!!


I sprang up out at her as soon as I heard her very near where I was hiding.




So then she starts to run out of the building. I started after her.


Then as soon as I got out of the building, she lit her Lightsaber.


So then I lighted my Lightsaber and hit hers. I could feel anger in her through the Force. This is not going to be as easy as I thought.



But Then she knocked me over. She then tried to cut me in half with her Lightsaber, but I was to quick for her enable for her to do that.


I did not want to kill her. Maybe I can bring her to the light side of the force. So then I used the force to knock her down. "She'll be alright." I told my self.



I was shocked, I could not believe the Sith that I fought was a girl. Maybe I should bring her back to dad. So then I deactivated my Lightsaber. Then I used the force to deactivate the Sith Girl's Lightsaber too.



I walked up to her to see if she was knocked out or not. (R2-D2 comes through the door way in the background)



So after recovered from the force throw, I slapped shock cuffs on her. Then we started to walk away.

End Log



From left to right: Alien dude, R2-D2 (Yeah, he's still around) An other Alien dude, Sith Girl, Crade Skywalker (Me)



Comments

 I like it 
  May 6, 2012
4/10 nice story and the lightsabers were cool. It would have been nice to see a bigger background with a bit more going on though
  May 4, 2012
Man, you can do better, you already proved it (I'm refering to the story ... but I like the wall, somehow) Nice animated lightsabers, though.
  May 2, 2012
3/10
 I like it 
  May 2, 2012
Wow, great storyline plus build! All around excellent creation:)
 I made it 
  May 2, 2012
Quoting Fell Skyhawk lol, like the story, but is that 16x16... it looks small on the depth, but that could just be an optical illusion. Not too bad, I like it, but the simplicity of terrain I'm only rating "Good", but I do like it.
It's 16x16. Harry said it had to be that big. So I made it that big
  May 2, 2012
lol, like the story, but is that 16x16... it looks small on the depth, but that could just be an optical illusion. Not too bad, I like it, but the simplicity of terrain I'm only rating "Good", but I do like it.
 I made it 
  May 2, 2012
Quoting Chocolate Chipmunk This is a neat idea, I like the plot, but who were the aliens?
Just extras.
 I like it 
  May 2, 2012
This is a neat idea, I like the plot, but who were the aliens?
 
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