My entry for The Periodic Tables Contest 2012 against: The Millennium Warrior.
About this creation
Title(s): Toa, Mutant, Brute, Hordika,
Occupation: Toa, Mercenary, Swords man
Short story: Once a matoran, he lived on mata-nui. He was very misunderstood. He had no friends, except a few Ga-Matorans. One day, on the beached on Ga-Koro, he tripped on a stone and hit his head hard. He was missing for days. No one sent parties to look for him. One day, a Ga-matoran found him the matoran freaked out and went to the Turaga. The matoran came back with the Turaga. They woke up Kovard. The looked at him very strangely. "Do I have something on my face?" Kovard touched his face with his hand. His hand was huge. He looked at his arms. They were very long. "What am I?" he asked the Turaga. "A Toa." said Nokama. He was a very handsome Toa Mata. Until one day, the Makuta stole him and dragged him to the makuta lair. They twisted his DNA. He escaped as a horrid beast of a Toa, known as the first Toa Hordika.
I tried to make him very mysterious and misunderstood.
I love his arms alot
I also like his upper legs, please note all of his greeble.
Oh look at that! You're dead!
Size comparison between him and Jacobi. Krovard's smaller than you thought, isn't he.
Hey, I have some things to say.
Remember that moc preview I gave you last time?
Well, he's my new secondary selfmoc, Deranofax isn't too cool anymore (speaking of the devil, he got another huge revamp)
Hey guys, my name's Limpton!
Like after the tea?
Yes, after the tea...
Any ways, I got more news...
I'M MAKING A STORY!!!
What's it about?
It's when all the toa went to another planet to fight the makuta and left the matoran on Mata Nui, which all the characters are matoran.
SOUNDS AWESOME! Where can I sign up?
In the comments. But please say something about Krovard, first.
Great! Do you have any actors ready yet?
Sure do! I'll show you four!
There's Poison, the child of fire
Norrak, the last black smith
Akara, The blind,
and the newest of the bunch, Banjax, the lost.
PLEASE READ: If you are interested, please comment with the name of your self moc and the job you want (please read below)
Coffee store owner
Fruit stand keeper
Forrest navigator (guide)
Musician (Only two more spots left)
Pet shop owner
If you have any more ideas post them in the comments.
I kinda avoided the heroic presence most Toas own, instead, I went Hordika on him, which turned out nice, I think. He and his swords are based on Kratos from the God of war. And if you are wondering why I made the 4 matoran already, is because the first 3 (Poison, Norrak and Akara) liked and requested them on my facebook page. and I made Banjax because he's awesome and he agreed for me to make him into a matoran, which most wouldn't. So EVERY one except Norrak should request a occupation for the story, please.
Since mocpages uploader is cruddy on my comp, just a matoran of plasma wearing an Akaku Nuva (note plasma is orange and white.) If he can be a Nynrah ghost (weapon builder) then yes please. Otherwise a carver will be fine. Name is Huile (pronounced Hoo-wheel)
Great job! I like how you chose to go hordika, although I'm pretty sure they are supposed to have spinners. Great job though! Also if you could put Jaivonn in the storyline, I'd appreciate any mask as long as it's black or white. And his job would probably be a scribe/weapons tutor.
didn't think that any one would build a hordika looks awesome surprised by the lack of spinner
and i would like to join
my self moc holten turned into a matoran
and i would like the role of forest guide
I would like my self moc Demonon(i'm gonna post a new form tonight maybe) to be ...THE ARCHITECT because of his "abilities" of ? that let him ma stuff out of his ? armor.he will make Many things,if you want,lol
I must say.... good luck in round 3. even though my entry isn't up yet. I know I can't win against such an amazing MOCist (makes me wonder why I haven't added you as a favourite builder yet XD) also, can Jayko be in your story as a merchant if possible?
Great use of the nuju masks on krovard's shoulders good to see a toa hordika moc too. Your new secondary self moc is very nice too his color scheme is amazing. Also may mudslide have a place in your story as cronicler or teacher?
my self moc's name is psychlos and can he be a chronicler?
also good work on the hordika but i would use tarix blades if i were you,otherwise good job.
if you want a picture of my self moc then say it in my announcement or if you already have the position filled then that's okay cuz i don't have to be in your storyline
Quoting Monty Leng
I swear I saw a new design hero core somewhere. And I looked for the third time I was like "I see what you did there!" But anyway, this is a good toa and I like how you attaches Meltdown's helmet to Rocka 3.0's head. Also, could poison be (ready?)... A mask maker?
I wanted to use the 3.0 cores, but I could only find one white. And thanks, I like his head connection. And sure, he can be a Mask maker!
Very nice! Great greebling, and I like how you covered up the simple parts so that they look just as good as the complex ones. If you don't mind, could Pirai be the disk-forger? Thanks, and good luck! :D