Quoting cyberfrank 2010
oh, and try to put text between pics, it will be easier to narrate the story, check my work for reference!
I us the old loader and I have trouble narrating it cause it moves the text do you know to fix it? And yes I could have broke the front more but you see when my friend comes over we drive train and when we crash head on the red train goes up the white train like a ramp.
say, you have a decent town here! and that white train is my definite fav amongst all lego made before, I own the red one x2, but, the white has always been my best, you have a lot of elements to build a very nice town! I haveto agree with the guy below, you need to break the front of the trains for it to be more convincing, take advantage that it s bricks! I d love it that you work on this town, it has potential! have you seen mine?
I liked how much you have going on here, but some more background information would be interesting. Also, I think that this build could use some more crash details. Feel free to not leave the trains very intact. Some jagged edges and flame might help this become a little more realistic. Overall, I think you have a nice start here.