My Entry for Round 2 of the Periodic Bionicle Contest 2012.
About this creation
Florentyne Lehta Anwar Hal'Ojin is the current Matriarch of the Hal'Ojin line and was the former Ninth Elemental Toa, the Toa of Fluorine. However, she was not always the calm and composed family head most know of her. In her youth, she was a fierce warrior, able to best those foolhardy to challenge, and those worthy of a fight. She often won not through strength, but through cunning and agility. Being able to outwit her opponents with her forms of tactics (which from time to time sank as low as deception), lead her to be nicknamed 'Flo the Sly'




Flo still maintains ownership of the family heirloom, the Hal'Ojin Sword. Once thought to have been lost a century ago, Flo had taken it back from those that had stolen it in a bid to restore her family's name. Although she rarely uses it these days, Flo still takes it out for a bit of a spar, all the while waiting for the next champion to pass it down to.

Charge!


Enemies to the left of me!

Enemies to the right!

With the days of battling evil and saving the world behind her, Flo keeps herself active in several government projects, as well as being a spokesperson for a popular insurance firm.

Several shots without the skirt for the technically minded.

Yes, that is a Bustle!

Still just as limber.

Don't think about captioning this!

Don't forget Mother's Day. Or Else. (I love this pose!)

Ponder that, evil doer!

CHLORA: Hi Grandma.
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Creator's Comments
A thoroughly fun build. I've tweaked my torso design for more bulk, partly inspired by Gringat's recent fem moc, Jasmine Sylph. The parts that probably took the longest to figure out was the head (which ended up being the simpler of my other complex designs) and the legs (which had to be continually redesigned so they wouldn't fall off every time I wanted to reposition her. The hands gave me the most frustration whilst photographing as they originally used the T-bar piece that I normally use. They kept popping out, so I redesigned them to what they are now. While functional, the hands annoy me aesthetically, what with that extra bit sticking out. Does anyone know if they make 2 stud long bars? lol
Had a few other things I wanted to photograph, but it's late, and I have a bunch of work to do. Having 7 days to make this, which basically translates into a 'portion of the weekend' proved interesting in being able to put something good together.
Yes, the overall look was based on Fate/Stay Night's Saber.
My opponent: Austin Durick's Fluotie, Toa of Fluorine
Periodic Bionicle Contest is here.
Oh yeah, keep an eye out for some of my old characters getting some upgrades. And some new transforming things lol
Constructive Criticism welcome ^_^
Comments
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January 24, 2013 |
Quoting Jeremy S.
I meant you should post more stuff lol not where you live. You are an amazing builder, please post new MoCs.
Haha, yeah I know, just messing >_>. As I said, I've been mega busy, but I have a few things under construction, so we'll see. ^_^ |
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I meant you should post more stuff lol not where you live. You are an amazing builder, please post new MoCs. |
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January 21, 2013 |
Quoting Jeremy S.
Where are you!?!?!
Uhh... New Zealand? Am I supposed to be somewhere? Been busy with a ton of stuff like normal people lol |
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September 6, 2012 |
This is REALLY unique. I am impressed :o. Keep it up! Very nice details everywhere. The color choice is just right, btw. The legs and arms are especially cool.
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September 1, 2012 |
WOW. This is stunning. By far one of the best Femocs I've seen. The shaping is amazing. Somehow, she reminds me of a Gundam. This is amazing work. |
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August 9, 2012 |
Quoting Yuri Fassio
I think I judged them all, except for the defaults.
Ahh ok, I just quickly did that for ones that appeared to not have a full listing. Looks like we're all just waiting on Berial then. |
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I think I judged them all, except for the defaults. |
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July 15, 2012 |
Nice! |
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July 4, 2012 |
Quoting Vorred 03
She looks pretty epic! I like how you made her look strong and well-armored, but still kept a feminine body shape! Too bad I've seen her too late, otherwise I would've wished you good luck in this round of the contest :)
Thanks, unfortunately I had to drop out of the contest due to a heavy workload. Still watching the contest with keen interest. There are some amazing entries being made. |
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July 4, 2012 |
She looks pretty epic! I like how you made her look strong and well-armored, but still kept a feminine body shape! Too bad I've seen her too late, otherwise I would've wished you good luck in this round of the contest :) |
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May 16, 2012 |
Quoting Monty Leng
How did this not beat the WHOLE competition! This is amazing and I shall rate it a five.
How you say? Simple: the contest isn't finished. Still got another and probably one after that to go. Thanks for the rating ^_^ |
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May 15, 2012 |
Hahaha, Hal'Ojin = Halogen. This is awesome, love everything about her. |
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May 11, 2012 |
Quoting Darren .Y
Wow this is quite a great design and probably one of the best entries I've seen, those arm design looks great and the hips look very interesting (in a good way) Good luck in the contest. And thanks for faving me. :)
Thanks. Female form has always been a fun challenge for me (note the number of times I've attempted them), so I always try different designs for them. In this case my part restriction was my colours. As for faving you, well I like your stuff! |
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May 11, 2012 |
Wow this is quite a great design and probably one of the best entries I've seen, those arm design looks great and the hips look very interesting (in a good way) Good luck in the contest. And thanks for faving me. :) |
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May 9, 2012 |
Quoting Strakk The Glatorian
Not really mean just rude about saying that not being able to put pictures up is not an excuse for not entering the contest.(sorry if that is confusing...lol)
Ahh, I don't particularly remember the moment, but it would have been in jest. Still a poor excuse though. Steal a camera! :P |
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May 9, 2012 |
Not really mean just rude about saying that not being able to put pictures up is not an excuse for not entering the contest.(sorry if that is confusing...lol) |
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May 8, 2012 |
woa this is a good female moc :D |
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May 8, 2012 |
Wow, awesome! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Quoting L.A. Miranda
I had a MOC idea with the same style and similar head... I can see Saber's style in her, but personally she reminds me more to Hakumen, from Blazblue. Such an epic character, as epic as this MOC!! =O
Quite right, though I've never played Blazblue (something my friends tell me has a great artistic style to it) I can see the similarities, particularly in shape and colour distribution. Except mine is female. Thanks for that, might actually start doing more game and anime characters now ^_^ |
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May 7, 2012 |
Quoting Banjax 2077
awesome work the color scheme is more evenly distributed throught this moc than other entrys and lego nmade a new bar piece that comes with one of the collectible minifigs, the minotaur not sure if its short enough though....
Thanks, I wanted to emphasise the colour notation to function i.e. yellow = armor, white = flesh/bodysuit, etc. I was a bit concerned about certain white parts standing out too much, which had me hunting around for suitable replacements in different colours. And you say the new minotaur has them? hmm... might have to check that out then. ^_^ |
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May 7, 2012 |
Quoting Strakk The Glatorian
Even though you were mean to me, I still like your mocs! Cool!
Me mean? It's only because I care! Incidentally, what was I mean about? lol |
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May 7, 2012 |
Quoting Chronos Omega
Very cool. The insurance firm comment was hilarious. XD Why did you add this to Gear Up?
Accidentally -_-; And it was around about 4am |
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May 7, 2012 |
Looks great, I love the hair! |
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May 7, 2012 |
You did an amazing job there! I like everything about that moc. The leg and the body are the two best part for me. A solid build and my favorite entry so far!
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May 7, 2012 |
awesome work the color scheme is more evenly distributed throught this moc than other entrys and lego nmade a new bar piece that comes with one of the collectible minifigs, the minotaur not sure if its short enough though.... |
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May 7, 2012 |
A stylish beauty - super work. Love the doubling of the smaller armor section on the forearms. Haven't tried that yet, myself; a nice effect, looks good. Cheers! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Even though you were mean to me, I still like your mocs! Cool! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Simply amazing use of yellow! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Simply wonderful! I like the sword and hair in particular. |
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I had a MOC idea with the same style and similar head... I can see Saber's style in her, but personally she reminds me more to Hakumen, from Blazblue. Such an epic character, as epic as this MOC!! =O |
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May 7, 2012 |
sick moc dude! love the design and color scheme. |
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May 7, 2012 |
Really nice .She reminds me of those tough old lady's like Tsunade from Naruto. You look at this moc and you feel the sense of power. Nice designs, and I really REALLY liek this character. I know you will win this round ;) |
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Very cool. The insurance firm comment was hilarious. XD Why did you add this to Gear Up? |
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May 7, 2012 |
SHIELD YOUR EYES!! THE AWESOMENESS WILL MAKE YOUR EYES EXPLODE WITH AWE!! |
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May 7, 2012 |
I see no issues with this moc, well done! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Cool skirt and ponytail. |
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May 7, 2012 |
Just fantastic. |
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May 7, 2012 |
DO WANT! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Very beast! This a radical build. :D Well done! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Quoting Austin Durick
Phew, talk about a close one! We both have great entries but I think you got me on this one! You have an advantage with your custom body and the detail you have packed into her. May the best builder win!
Indeed! You should try making a female moc sometime. You really do end up paying attention to the details more lol |
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May 7, 2012 |
Phew, talk about a close one! We both have great entries but I think you got me on this one! You have an advantage with your custom body and the detail you have packed into her. May the best builder win! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Best build so far!!! Hal'Ojin... hee, hee... I DO get it! Flo is a woman after my own heart!!! :) |
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May 7, 2012 |
Holy cow! This is awesome! |
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May 7, 2012 |
This is the best entry in Bionicle periodic contest (yes, also better then my entry). She is so amazing. Head is really cool, I like how you use Witch doctor mask. Body is incredible. I really like how you use HF parts on her shoulders. Legs are so EPIC!!! And hands are very nice!!! This is so amazing job. Good luck in the contest!!!!! |
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