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Keldak, Toa of Fluorine
2012 Periodic Bionicle Contest, Round 2, Category: Toa of Fluorine, Opponent: Dark Crusader.
About this creation
Periodic Bionicle Contest
Dark Crusader

NAME: Keldak
GENDER: Male
SPECIES: Matoran
ELEMENT: Fluorine
ALIGNMENT: Lawful good
OCCUPATION: Toa Warrior
TITLES: Toa, Brother, Spitfire
KANOHI: Kanohi Intem, Mask of Data
WEAPONS: Machine gun, Jewel knife
STORY:
Keldak was a peaceful, quite Matoran that lived in a small village of Fluorine Matoran in the hills of the island of Mata Nui. They were a little-known race of Matoran and were often regarded as freaks from the rest of the Matoran community due to their abominable combustive capabilities.
Keldak was one day playing Kolhii with some of his friends when the ball got hit over a hill. Keldak volunteered to go get it and when he came over the hill he fell into the hands of some Ta-Matoran. The Ta-Matoran bullied him around and teased him. Keldak told them to give him his ball. When the lead Ta-Matoran said 'no' and laughed, Keldak couldn't hold it in. You see, Matoran of Fluorine, unlike most Matoran races, have some control over their element, which if why most other Matoran try to keep their distance. Keldak snapped his fingers and the air in front of the Ta-Matoran's nose combusted in a spark of flame. The Ta-Matoran flew backwards and the rest of the Ta-Matoran stared at Keldak in fear and ran for their lives. Keldak grinned as they disappeared over the hill and he took up his ball and ran back to tell his friends what had just happened.
Keldak and his friends thought this was a real fun joke, but when word reached the Order of Mata Nui of what had happened, they called him to their court. Keldak was very nervous for he thought they might condemn him to death for his act, for it was against their code to us any elemental abilities against a brother. But his fears were not necessary, the OoMN high council was fascinated with his capabilities and they put him into Toa training. He later earned his rank as Toa and was awarded a Toa Stone. When he was transformed he was given weapons and put into the infantry rank.
He now proves to be a great soldier and skilled strategist. He hardly uses his elemental abilities though, because of that on incident, he prefers to use his weapons instead.




Here he is!

He may not be my best, but I think I did pretty good considering the time constraint. ;)

The legs, I like the simplicity of the upper legs. ;)

Torso, I like this part.

Custom head, yes it looks a lot like the new Evo 4.0 mask. Which is why I gave it that mask power. (ask Cheesy Q ;D)

The inside of the custom head.

The backside.

A normal pose.

A pose-ability pose. He's actually pretty pose-able. ;)

Using his Jewel knife.

With his gun. :D

'Who you lookin at?'

'Peace out posse!'

Some sneak-peeks. ;) These guys are part of the reason Keldak isn't really up to my standards, I have some new MOCs coming. :D

Wall of a Fourth Kind:
Yeah, not my best, I know. But I don't think he looks half bad. ;) I like the sort of simple look. I was originally going to do a dentist with a lab coat and a big drill arm, but he wasn't coming out too good so I built this guy instead. Good thing to, someone already did the dentist.

Good luck to Dark Crusader!

C&C Appreciated.



Comments

 I like it 
  December 23, 2012
Not the biggest fan of the head design but I really like the lower legs and torso :) Good stuff :D
 I like it 
  August 18, 2012
Great custom head/helmet
 I like it 
  July 1, 2012
Cool!
 I like it 
  May 23, 2012
Sorry for not commenting so long... you always make comments on my creations and I'm not on yours :(.. But anyway, here's my rating! I think the most interesting part is the head! It's such a great idea to use the rather useless Knight's Kingdom parts as a part of the helmet! There is also a very nice part usage on his legs, the hero cores and the metru heads! I also like his body design very much! The overall MoC looks so fantastic, I think the non-armored upper legs really suit him! This is very amazing work!
 I like it 
  May 13, 2012
Excellent! I love the weapon!
 I like it 
  May 9, 2012
Pretty nice! The joint designs are great!
Legofreak2444 ~
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GroundQuake~ 9917
  May 8, 2012
That is Very Good!The Custom Head is Great,And the HF Cores for Kneepads?Marvelous! I need more Yellow!Good Luck.
Legofreak2444 ~
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S.E.D .
  May 8, 2012
Really like this dude! But his eyes seem kinda small.
 I made it 
  May 8, 2012
Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist Nice, that gun's pretty awesome! How come everyone does Fluorine, is it required?
Yeah, it was the category for the round.
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
wow simple and amazing!!!!! i love that head design when i saw ho you built it i built it for a new bionicle im making :D
 I made it 
  May 8, 2012
Quoting MCLegoboy ! That guy is pretty cool looking but I'm not so sure about the mouth. Maybe you need to add one of these: http://www.bricklink.com/search.asp?colorID=3&itemID=1619 or these: http://www.bricklink.com/search.asp?colorID=3&itemID=76495 there so it is more of like a protector or something. His head is proportionate and then you get to the jawline and sdrjjkjkwef. The rest of him looks cool though.
I see what you mean, but those pieces don't fit in between two KK joints on a 1x3. ;)
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
That guy is pretty cool looking but I'm not so sure about the mouth. Maybe you need to add one of these: http://www.bricklink.com/search.asp?colorID=3&itemID=1619 or these: http://www.bricklink.com/search.asp?colorID=3&itemID=76495 there so it is more of like a protector or something. His head is proportionate and then you get to the jawline and sdrjjkjkwef. The rest of him looks cool though.
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
Nice, that gun's pretty awesome! How come everyone does Fluorine, is it required?
 I made it 
  May 8, 2012
Quoting S.E.D . Really like this dude! But his eyes seem kinda small.
No smaller than an HF 2.0, unless you mean his pupils, than yeah, a stud is all that could fit in there.
 I made it 
  May 8, 2012
Thanks for the comments everyone!
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
Awesome! I like how simple the upper legs are. I love the preview of the feet!
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
Lookin' good Keldak! ;)
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
WOWZA! Good luck in ze contest mien frieund :)
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
I really like that custom head, it's so amazing! and the body is so cool! great job
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
sweet body design :D
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
Fantastic torso and custom head! Great job!
 I like it 
  May 8, 2012
Torso looks nice and solid. Might try that head design on something. Looks to have some interesting possibilities. ^_^
Legofreak2444 ~
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Pure Epicness
  May 7, 2012
Drill, I knew I forgot a dentist tool for flouron! anyways, Awesome. sometimes simple is good (although custom torsos are always a must).
Legofreak2444 ~
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Suspicious Chicken
  May 7, 2012
Nice build! I like everything, except the arms (mostly the one-brick lower arms) could have been better. But, my favorite part was most likely the WIP of the black clawed foot... I FREAKING LOVE THE FOOT DESIGN! I can't wait for you to post that new MOC!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
I love it! The only qualms I have ate in the lower arms, but that's easily made up for in the custom yellow Dume mask :D
 I made it 
  May 7, 2012
Quoting Cody G Nice work, he looks great despite the rushed build. I would love to see a V2 of this guy!
Good idea! ;)
 I made it 
  May 7, 2012
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire You thought my custom head was messy? XD Must be the only one. And at least I tried with the arms, you just stuck with lazy HF bones. :P Don't get me wrong, I think this moc is pretty decent, I just expected more from you.
You're the only one who thinks my head is messy too. :P I ran out of time on the arms, sorry I disappointed you. Cheers!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Nice work, he looks great despite the rushed build. I would love to see a V2 of this guy!
  May 7, 2012
You thought my custom head was messy? XD Must be the only one. And at least I tried with the arms, you just stuck with lazy HF bones. :P Don't get me wrong, I think this moc is pretty decent, I just expected more from you.
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Oo, nice!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Very good! Great to see you bio-MOCing again, I was worried that you would never pick up a bionicle peice again!! Anyway, I'm loving the gun, not so much the arms. I agree with you, this isn't your best, but I still like it none the less!!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Great job on the Moc LegoFreak! Sure am seeing a lot of fluorine toa... (P.S. I like the yellow.)
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Cool MOC! That head is one-of-a-kind, I've never seen anything like it before! He's a simple build, but he looks good! And I can't wait to see what's attached to that black foot!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
The black foot looks very interesting!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
love the legs and torso!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
That head is amazing!
 I made it 
  May 7, 2012
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire Not too shabby, although I think your opponent may have you beat after seeing his WIP entry on FB. Honestly I find this slightly disappointing, those arms could've been so much better, especially those forearms. The rest is pretty good, although that head is a little messy and those upper legs feel empty. Good luck, but I kinda expected more.
Yeah, well I could easily say the same about you, except I don't think Cheesy tried too hard on his entry.
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Great category build with a great face! :)
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Not too shabby, although I think your opponent may have you beat after seeing his WIP entry on FB. Honestly I find this slightly disappointing, those arms could've been so much better, especially those forearms. The rest is pretty good, although that head is a little messy and those upper legs feel empty. Good luck, but I kinda expected more.
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Really nice! I like the simplicity of him, and the lower legs look pretty well done. Although simple, this guy is probably one of my favorite being entered into the contest!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Sweet, but i think he looks a little more hero-factory than toa.
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
AWESOME! I CANNOT wait for the black guy!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Nice work.
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
He is pretty cool. I like the simplicity and the hero cores on the lower legs was a nice touch.
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Great head design! Good overall!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2012
Amazing!!! I really like his head, legs and body design. I can not wait to new mocs!!!! Good luck in the contest!!!!!
 
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