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Chapter 3 Part 2: The Keeper's Tomb
Created for Challenge 3, the Treasure Hunt at Eurobricks.com for the Guild of Avalonia
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Keeper's Tomb

Lord Rex,

I have recovered the Elemental Crystal!

After defeating the Wolfpack champion, I traveled another day northeast until I reached my destination. I looked to the burning sun just after midday wondering if I was lost, then suddenly, coming seemingly out of nowhere, the crypt stood directly before me, in ruin and smelling of death. The tomb was overrun with vines and weeds. Nearly all of the right side of the crypt had disintegrated in time and the two towers which once guarded the tomb crypt appeared to be on the verge of collapse. An old well to me left stank of stale water I noticed bits of bone and forgotten weapons peaking through the tall grass.



As soon as they spotted me, two vultures took up perch to await their next meal, or at least whatever scraps the Keeper’s chose not to devour. The tomb was so old the trees and earth were beginning to reclaim it. A sapling was sprouting through one of the dirty, stained glass windows and I could see a mature tree growing inside the tomb itself. The whole scene screamed, “Trap!” cautioning me of the dangers within.



I cautiously approached the door and firmly, but quietly press my hand against the door. The door was surprisingly sturdy, especially considering its decrepit surroundings. I pressed my ear against the door, but heard nothing. Needing eyes inside the tomb, I carefully placed my ally, still in newt form, near the base of a thin sapling and watched him scurry through an opening in the broken stained glass window. After a few very tense minutes, Barton slipped back through the opening and darted along the side of the crypt beckoning me to follow him to the much sturdier tree on the right side of the tomb. I decided I would need to lighten my load to climb the tree for a look so I placed the Centurion’s Shield and Barton’s staff on the ground. I slowly climbed the tree remembering some of the climbing techniques the Stag Clan taught me in my youth. When I was higher in the tree, I could see two enormous men, more than ten feet tall, guarding a small green crystal sitting atop an old altar. I had to grit my teeth to stop my self from yelling, “The Keepers do exist!”



The crystal was small, definitely small enough to hold in my hand. If only I had brought Barton’s staff, I might be able to cast a levitation spell to retrieve the prize. Before I knew what was happening, the tree shook violently and tossed me onto the floor of the tomb at the base of the altar. It almost appeared as if the crystal knew I had come for it and made the tree eject me from my hiding place.

The Keeper nearest me swung his enormous blade intending to cleave me in two. Fortunately for me, the enormous blade slammed into the edge of the altar, sending a layer of dust and the Elemental Crystal flying into the air.



With his blade momentarily stick in the stone altar, I scrambled to my feet. I swung my axe as hard as I could, hoping to separate the hulking man’s head from his shoulders. My axe connected and though the giant fell to the ground dead, my only weapon remained firmly lodged in his throat. The second Keeper sprung into action leaping over the altar with his blade over his head.



I dodged his attack, grabbed the crystal, now laying on the edge of the altar, and sprinted for the back door. Seconds after I crashed through the rotting exit, I heard the archway collapse atop my pursuer. The weight of the stone was too much, even for the hulking Keeper, and I instantly knew he was dead. I had done it. The crystal is ours!



I now travel back to the Enchanted Forest to seek the counsel of Priestess Miress of the Elfland Realm. She was a great ally in your father’s victory over Baine’s armies, and though her people suffered near extinction at the hands of the fallen House, I hope her people know more about the Elemental Crystals and the rise of fallen House of Baine. I believe the Elves even have a sorcerer capable of turning Barton back into a human. I can not help but feel the return of Baine is somehow tied to the evil that we have felt lurking in this land or the recent developments regarding the crystals. This is an errand I must not ignore. Even with the crystal recovered, I fear Baine’s return is but a sign of the horrors yet to come.

Your friend,

Trian Burress



Avalonian Heroes: Trian Burress and Barton Stormclaw



Enemies Defeated: The Crystal Keepers



Allies Acquired: None

Items Acquired: None

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Comments

 I like it 
  May 11, 2012
Wonderful build, so full of neat details! Those vultures are very effective, NPU!
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  May 9, 2012
amazing piece! I m more a comic book fan, so, it had a lot of text for me, but, the scene is nothing short of magnificent! the best castle ruins I ve seen so far, very impressive!
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  May 9, 2012
This thing is a feast for the eyes! So much to see. So many "stand alone" details. You could divide this MOC into 10 separate vignettes and each of them would be excellent. But all together it's simply astounding. The presentation is excellent as well. Every detail is easy to see and appreciate. I really like the circular window over the front door, but the best part...the Wig Vulture! Attack!
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  May 9, 2012
Great job! Incredible amount of detail!
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  May 9, 2012
Amazingly Wicked! The building is great too! The story is cool, and the guys, especially the guardians are great! This is a great moc! I love this creation! Keep up the good work!
Z Cerberus
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Büürli Burri
  May 8, 2012
Awsome! The floor is absolutely great, but the best thing is still the bird on the roof! NPU ;) You put so much detail in this... why only for smilies? I'm sure you'll get more; you totally deserves it :D
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  May 8, 2012
Wicked sick work. Very well detailed.
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  May 8, 2012
Incredible build! Like the others, I love that vulture build! A great story as well!
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  May 8, 2012
That is awesome! I may steal that vulture design sometime, (with credit of course).
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  May 8, 2012
Wow wow wow, maybe the best medieval creation i ever seen. The structure of the church is simply stunning, i love it! compliments an awesome creation.
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  May 8, 2012
The building itself is magnificent, and the whole scene is top notch.
  May 8, 2012
Epic. THose vultures= amazing. THat window= AMazinG. THose ... THINGS ... epic. JUST epic.
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  May 8, 2012
Wow! This looks brilliant! The ruined effect is great and that vulture is awesome! --Blast--
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  May 8, 2012
Amazing! There are just so many parts to like! I love the crystal keepers, the vulture, the architectural details on the building, the partly destroyed look, it all just works together so well.
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  May 8, 2012
That vulture...wow! Fantastic design! And the rest of the build is of course incredible as "well"! (That is to say I liked the well too, cheesy pun).
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  May 8, 2012
Wow! The level of detail is incredible!
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  May 8, 2012
Awesome! All sorts of nifty details on display here. Well done!
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  May 8, 2012
floor is stunning the patterns really fit. love the well very origonal, well designed.
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  May 8, 2012
This is very impressive. Tons of deatail everywhere making this look quite realistic. The story is great too.
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  May 8, 2012
Stunningly detailed!
 
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