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Pakvle: Toa of Phosphorus (3rd self-moc)
Toa of Phosphorus, 3rd Self-Moc
About this creation




BIO:
Name: Pakvle
Gender: Male
Species: P-Matoran (Matoran of Phosphorus)
Occupation: Defending the citizens of Spherus Magna from danger, leading a Toa team for the Council of Toa
Element: Phosphorus
Titles: Pak, Toa, Brother, Leader, "8"
Mask: Kanohi Sanok; Mask of Accuracy
Weapons: Phosphorus Rifle, Shield, 10-foot-long Spear, Arm-mounted dart launcher
Status: Alive
Story: Pakvle grew up in a small village of Phosphorus Matoran on the Northern Continent. He was very smart and grew to be a scholar within the village. As a result, he was praise and respected within the community. In the years following, he made many friendships and discoveries about the surrounding world.

One day, a team of Dark Hunters came and ransacked Pakvle's village. In the process, 5 Matoran were killed and 7 were kidnapped for unknown purposes, one of them being Pakvle. During the journey back to the Dark Hunter Island of Odina, a group of Toa came and intercepted the Dark Hunters. During the following battle, Pakvle and one of his friends ran for it and eventually made it to Mata Nui. The other Matoran were all killed, along with the Toa. Pakvle and his friend had to adjust to life on Mata Nui.

They eventually settled in Ta-Koro, and Pakvle took up a job as a teacher. He did this for many years, but he was happy with his job. Suddenly, one day his friend went missing during a Rahkshi raid.

Pakvle gathered a few Ta-Matoran and set out across Mata Nui in search of him. After many weeks, they lost hope. Pakvle was devastated upon the loss of his friend and the only P-Matoran within hundreds of miles. He soon after quit his job and took up fighting so that he could defend the village and his friends.

After months training under Jaller, he became a master spearman. He was excited with his new skill and made sure to keep it as sharp as possible. He then took up a job as a guardsman for Ta-Koro. He helped defend the village for many years to come.

During one Dark Hunter raid of Ta-Koro, Pakvle actually defeated 3 Dark Hunters single-handedly with his spear. With his help, the Ta-Koro Guard defended the village against the threat. Afterwards, he was celebrated by the whole village for his bravery and skill. He also recognized the attention of the Order of Mata Nui.

He was brought into the OoMN a few weeks later. While there, he trained under a variety of masters, but mostly those skilled in melee attacks. After a few weeks into his training, he decided that he wanted to learn about ranged attacks too. He then started training in ranged attacks and mastered it after about a month. About a year into being in the OoMN, he was deemed worthy of being a Toa and was given a Toa Stone. He was very excited about becoming a Toa, similar to the reasons as to why Nuparu was. As a Toa, he was given a Kanohi Sanok to aid in his ranged attacks. He also created a Phosphorus Spear and a Phosphorus Rifle. For the next 3 months, he trained to master his elemental powers as well.

He was sent on a variety of missions, completing nearly every one without any injuries. Eventually, he was put in charge of his own team of Toa, consisting of a Toa of Fire, Toa of Earth, and Toa of Carbon. He excelled as a leader and made sure to learn about all his teammates. His team completed many missions, including one that sent them to capture the very Dark Hunters that ransacked Pakvle's village.

When the Makuta Robot left for Spherus Magna, he and his team boarded at the last second and teamed up with the Toa Nuva inside. When they landed, Pakvle's team got separated from the Toa Nuva and helped in the defense of Tajun. During the battle, one of his teammates was killed (The Toa of Earth), but Pakvle kept on fighting to defend the Village of Water. Eventually, they fended off the invaders and had won the battle. Afterwards, he and his team helped care for the wounded (The Toa of Carbon helped a lot in this). Since they were in the same battle, Kirax and Pakvle formed a close friendship that day that they hold up to the present.

When he reported back to the OoMN, they told him that he was selected to be on the Council of Toa. He now resides as one of its leaders, along with Tarshduk and Tahu. Since then, he has formed a good friendship with both of them, helping them whenever possible. He now carries out missions tracking down Makuta and Dark Hunters with his new team, a Toa of Ice, Toa of Air, and Toa of Iron.

That was long XD

Front View



Side View



Back View



Side View



Feet and Shins



Side



Back



Thighs, a little too thin for my liking...



Side



Back, I like how those system pieces fit right into that gap :)



Chest, nice greebles



Back



Head



Left Arm



Top



Back



Right Arm



Top



Back



Upper Arm (Left Arm)



Lower Arm (Left Arm)



Upper Arm, Side (Left Arm)



Upper Arm (Right Arm)



Lower Arm (Right Arm)



Upper Arm, Side (Right Arm)



Firing his Phosphorus Rifle

Pakvle: Eat Phosphorus, Dark Hunters!



Aiming it at you...

Pakvle: What you say!?!



Wielding his Spear and Shield

Pakvle: Melee works too!



Blocking with his Shield

Pakvle: Nice Try!



Ready for battle

Pakvle: A good stance is key in a swords fight.



Aiming his Arm Dart Launcher

Pakvle: Would you like a headshot or a chest shot?



Comparison to Rotangor

You like Rotangor's updates? :)



Pakvle: Bye! Stay in school!

Phosphorus info

4th wall:
Okay, where to start? I've been wanting to make a Periodic Table Toa for a while now, and I've also wanted to make a yellow Toa as well. So I combined them and went for a periodic table Toa with yellow on it. I spent a few hours researching the elements and found that the only elements with the color yellow were Fluorine, Chlorine, Phosphorus, and Sulfur. After looking another time at them, I found that Phosphorus is waxy white, yellow, scarlet, red, violet, or black (not orange, like on Toa Phosphorus which I thought was kinda funny). I immediately decided to do Phosphorus because I decided the Toa's color scheme would be black and yellow. This moc took a while to complete because I needed an Evo 4.0 and another set to complete it. I started this on I think Wednesday or Thursday and finally finished it today! I finally got my mom to take me to Target and TRU.

I started with the arms and then did the legs. Then came the torso, then the head, then the feet. Finally, I spent the next day or two on greebling. I really love the greebles on this guy, like the upper arms, thighs, and torso. I also added a few banana greebles too XD

I just love this moc. I love all the weapons and just the moc as a whole. It really just came together really nicely and is not that bulky (I am kinda glad about this XD). The Shield is very nice and the Phosphorus Rifle is great too. I also FINALLY got a use to that fireman's pole from a firefighters set I got in about 2005 (When I was first getting into Lego). Once again, this guy is probably one of my favorites, probably 3rd (Behind Tarshduk, then Kirax)

Oh, this is also for a RPG in my resurrected group, The Council of Toa

This is also my 3rd Self-Moc!!!!

Thanks for viewing this. Don't forget to comment, rate, fave me, and give me constructive criticism!

Thanks
~12lego



Comments

 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Nice job! I love the huge shield!
 I like it 
  June 16, 2012
I dig how simple Pakvle is, which I like. But maybe the things on his foot were unnecessary. He's still a great MOC and I bet using regular yellow was difficult to use. ;)
 I like it 
  June 14, 2012
Holy cow thats awesome!!!! 5,000,000,000,000.00/.000005 XD
 I like it 
  June 14, 2012
Great use of mask!
 I like it 
  June 13, 2012
Hey, nice greebles. ;)
 I like it 
  May 26, 2012
So here is the future leader of the "Bearers"... very cool! You used many system parts, what looks good, because they are on every part of the body. I think the base structure (besides the waist) is simple, but still covered up very well with all the other parts! I especially like how you made his weapon, the use of that Metru limb is very cool! A nice character and 3rd self-MoC!
 I made it 
  May 20, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Pretty cool! I find that he is a bit too powerful... smart, quick and brave, good with both ranged and melee weapons... Blah. XD Anyway, keep on MOCing!
I created the Council of Toa so I think it's only fair my character is one of it's leaders and one of the most powerful :). Thanks guys! ~12lego
 I like it 
  May 20, 2012
Great moc! He seems a little powerful, but he is one of the council's leaders so not a big problem. Keep it up!
 I like it 
  May 20, 2012
Pretty cool! I find that he is a bit too powerful... smart, quick and brave, good with both ranged and melee weapons... Blah. XD Anyway, keep on MOCing!
 I like it 
  May 20, 2012
WOWZA! I can't waitr to see him in action in the RPG!
 I like it 
  May 20, 2012
Awesome work!!!
 I like it 
  May 20, 2012
sweet update
 I like it 
  May 20, 2012
Hey, great job!
 I made it 
  May 20, 2012
Quoting Kyle Peckham Nice job man! Love it! Was the shield idea inspired by me at all? ;) - KP
Maybe, I saw the shield design before, but I made it with my own mind. Sorry if I stole your design bro :P ~12lego
  May 19, 2012
Most of the designs are nice looking, but the lower legs seem a bit unnatural. And the color scheme seems dull. Black and Yellow normally mix well together, but not on BIONICLEs for whatever reason
 I like it 
  May 19, 2012
Nice job man! Love it! Was the shield idea inspired by me at all? ;) - KP
 
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