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A Galaxy Divided 16: Rogues
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The Wheel, two months after the events in A Galaxy Divided 15.

Tred Core walked slowly into the reserved section of the wheel, his lightsaber blade clutched tightly in his hand.

Tred Core: "Bane, I decided to come."



Cad Bane: "Wise move Jedi."

Tred Core: "I am not a Jedi!"

Tred's eyes narrowed as he noticed the Zabrack stood beside Bane.

Tred Core: "Who are you?"

Cad Bane: "New Bounty Hunter, kids got spirit and we could use him."



There was a hiss as one of the doors slid slowly open.

Tred Core: "Did you invite anyone else?"

Harash Soru: "Oh no, I'm afraid I'm something of a gatecrasher."

Cad Bane: "Stay of this grandpa, this doesn't concern you."

Harash Soru raised an eyebrow.

Harash Soru: "Grandpa? Do I really look that old? Hmm, look to your left and you'll see a proper grandpa."



A second door slid open and Michel Kringe stepped forwards.

Michel Kringe: "Just because I'm getting on in years doesn't mean I still can't kick your butt in a fight my old Padawan!"



Finally a third door opened to reveal Jedi Master Rohan Ab'lov.

Rohan Ab'lov: "If you two are quite finished, we do have a job to do. Isn't that right Master Oul?"



The young Zabrack took a step back from the table and drew his lightsaber.

Teeluk-Oul: "You should really think about who you take on as an ally Bane!"

Cad Bane: "It does not matter. A group of old Jedi and a youngling can't match our skills!"



Bane produced his two blasters, opening up a barage of fire against Masters Ab'lov and Oul. In the meantime, Tred Core charged Hara and Michel.



Rohan swung at Bane who spun away and was replaced by Core who engaged the Jedi in a fierce duel.
Cad switched targets to the charging forms of Hara and Michel and started to pound the two Jedi with blaster fire.



Tred Core: "You Jedi are pathetic! I am Tred Core, the Force lives and fights within me, I will be your doom!"

Tred's hand shot forwards and blasted both Rohan and Teeluk away, sending them sprawling on to the floor.



meanwhile Hara broke through Bane's wall of fire and swung at the Bounty Hunter, the Duros barely managing to dive out of the reach of the deadly blue blade.

Cad Bane: "Core let's go!"



Cad charged passed Hara and leapt on to the table, dodging Michel's strike which instead sliced through the edge of the table.

Michel Kringe: "Blast he's getting away!"



Rohan Ab'lov: "Focus on Tred Michel!"

Harash Soru: "I... No!"



The other two Jedi spun around to see Tred standing with his lightsaber buried in Teeluk's gut.

Tred Core: "Not good enough Jedi!"



Hara began to run towards Teeluk but Rohan stopped him.

Rohan Ab'lov: "You two go! I'll help Teeluk!"

Michel Kringe: "He's right Hara let's go!"



The two Jedi followed Bane and Core into the hallway outside of the room, deflecting the shots that Bane fired off as he ran.

Tred Core: "Blaster's wont work Bane!"

Cad Bane: "Don't tell me how to kill Core!"



Harash Soru: "It's over, for both of you."

The Jedi Master pulled back his hand and gathered the Force before unleashing it in a powerful push, knocking Ban into Tred and sending them skidding down the hallway.



The two rogues tumbled in to some sort of reactor room and scrambled to their feet as the Jedi entered.

Michel Kringe: "It's over, surrender."

Harash Soru: "There is no escape this time."



Bane looked up and his eyes found a balacony sticking out of the wall above them.

Cad Bane: "There is always an escape Jedi!"

The Duros Bounty Hunter jabbed his wrist device and the jets on the bottom of his boots roared to life, propelling him up towards the balcony.

Tred Core: "Bane you scum! Don't just leave me here!"



Harash Soru: "What happened to us being pathetic Jedi?"

Michel Kringe: "Afraid you can't beat us on your own Tred?"

Tred Core: "Shut up both of you! I will destroy you all!"



Tred charged Hara who easily deflected his sloppy attack.

Harash Soru: "Your anger has consumed you Tred, where you were once a noble Jedi you are now nothing more than a monster."



Michel Kringe: "And monsters must be caged."

The elderly Jedi Master jumped through the air, swinging around on a pole a kicking Tred squarely in the face.



As Tred stumbled backwards Hara slashed his blade down and severed the chord that powered Tred's protosaber.



Tred Core: "My blade! You fools!"

Harash Soru: "Surrender Tred!"

Michel Kringe: "We don't want to kill you."



Tred eyes blazed with hate as he jumped to his feet.

Tred Core: "That is the difference between you and I then!"



With a roar of rage, Tred charged the two Jedi. Both of them however, neatly sidestepped his attack and Michel used the Force to launch the rogue Jedi into the web of pipes and poles.



Tred scrambled to his feet and glared at Michel.

Tred Core: "The Dark Side flows through me now! I see my power for the first time and with it I will crush you Master Kringe!"

Tred reached out and began to choke Master Kringe.



All of a sudden Tred gasped as the blue blade of Harash Soru's lightsaber passed cleanly through his neck.

Harash Soru: "The Dark Side blinds everything Tred. Just as it blinded you to what you could have been."



Hara helped his former Master to his feet.

Harash Soru: "It's over Master."

Michel Kringe: "Yes, finally his rampage is at an end. And this war is a little bit closer to ending. Now, we should go and check on Rohan and Teeluk."



Rohan Ab'lov had moved Teeluk onto the table by the time Hara and Michel returned.

Harash Soru: "How is he?"

Rohan Ab'lov: "Not good. His life is fading rapidly."



The three Jedi gathered around the table.

Michel Kringe: "I am sorry Teeluk. But today you more than proved yourself worthy of the title of Jedi Knight."

Teeluk-Oul: "Thank you, Master Kringe."

Teeluk coughed weakly.

Teeluk-Oul: "Where is my lightsaber?"



Hara turned and used the Force to call Teeluk's blade to his hand. He rested the hilt of the lightsaber on the Zabrack's chest.

Harash Soru: "A true warrior to the end."

Teeluk-Oul: "Whatever end. The war is nearing its end my friends. I am sorry that I will not be there to see it finish."

Rohan Ab'lov: "You will always be with us Teeluk. May the Force be with you."



Comments

 I like it 
  June 9, 2012
Great! Really like the Vignettes ;)
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  June 9, 2012
YAY!! A lightsaber duel for Michel!!! Thank you Harry!
Harry 863
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Admiral Varkov
  June 8, 2012
At last Tred is dead. Also nice appearance for Bane! Great episode!
Harry 863
Griffin .
  June 8, 2012
Quoting Zor Ember Tred Core is finally dead!!! Yay! :)
Hey! Offensive much? :P Jk!
Harry 863
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Griffin .
  June 8, 2012
Nice story! To bad I died. :P I had that feeling coming anyway. :P I think I'll make another guy, a Jedi. I'll come up with his traits and stuff later.
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  June 8, 2012
Finally tred is dead! Hey wait that rhymes...
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  June 8, 2012
Cool episode!
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  June 8, 2012
Great work Harry!
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  June 8, 2012
NOoOOOO I died :( Good EPisode anyway
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  June 8, 2012
Awesome!!!
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  June 8, 2012
Quoting Gabe Martinez Finally Tred has fallen! And Teeluk's death was a lot better than the standard Jedi death you do, but I have one question: why does Tred's neck bleed? Lightsabers cause cauterization due to their heat.
Not all of the time. Obi-Wan's causes bleeding in episode 4 when he cuts the cantina guy's arm off and if they are set at low power setting they can cause bleeding to. Also they can cause internal bleeding or a blood clot that will eventually burst. It's very complicated and this was basically used to support the head for a bit :P
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  June 8, 2012
Finally Tred has fallen! And Teeluk's death was a lot better than the standard Jedi death you do, but I have one question: why does Tred's neck bleed? Lightsabers cause cauterization due to their heat.
 I like it 
  June 8, 2012
Excellent job!
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  June 8, 2012
An interesting episode :D Nice turn of events :) Cool to see Bane here, not the biggest fan of his escape though :P Anyway looking forward to more ;D Nice work man ;)
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  June 8, 2012
woww nice figures..
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  June 8, 2012
I like how you made the zabrak's death a little more 'noticeable' so to speak. Also, Tred Core is finally dead!!! Yay! :)
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  June 8, 2012
great job
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  June 8, 2012
Thank god he's finally dead.
 
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