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Venom, the Shadow Viper (V 3.5)
I'm back, he's back, and he's got a new title: The Shadow Viper. Hope you guys enjoy! Please leave constructive criticism on how I can further make Venom better!
About this creation
In this update, I mainly made changes to him that have been requested by people that have seen his former form. While I've tried to fix the problems as best as I could, there is still some work I can do on Venom.



Front View



Side View



Rear View



The back of his lower legs. Though the exo-force arms prevent him from bending his legs too far, I believe it adds some much-needed detail to the lower leg (which was probably the most under-detailed part of him). Besides, I've never put him in a pose where he doesn't need to bend his legs really far.



I tried to get rid of the "]" shaped gap in his torso by adding onto the waist. Although the gap is smaller, it is still, unfortunately, quite noticeable. However, unless I am to get rid of his waist-movement, I am unable to cover up the gap completely.



The main thing people were asking for was to make the upper legs bulkier. So, I added a piece that has seemed to solve all of my problems in making Bionicle Mocs: Bohrak Eyes! Yes, with the addition of these two Bohrak Eyes, Venom now has a total of 16 of them on his body. I kind of find Bohrak Eyes to be my favorite pieces, because they come in a wide variety of colors, and add some amount of detail (when put in the right places, anyway).



The front of the waist is mostly the same, with the exception of the little black light saber rod / chalice thingy in the middle.



The arms have gone through almost no change, with the exception of the upper arms. I replaced the Technic piece that was originally in the front with some Lego handle-bars.



The custom head, which I will be changing soon, once I get the right pieces.



Side view of the head.



Rear view



Venom's back has not changed at all since the last update (V 3.0)



The back of the upper leg. Nothing has changed there, except for the addition of some Lego handle-bars. (Soon, I'm going to be spamming those instead of Bohrak Eyes on my newest mocs xD).



Venom's new weapon. Yes, I said that the Thorn was going to be his permanent weapon, but I needed the black claw pieces for something else, and thus, had to make a new weapon. I really like this one, and will (more than likely) keep it. The staff has some magical properties to it, but for the most part, Venom uses it as a beat-stick.



Venom posing for a duel.



Full view of the staff.



Detail of the head.



The staff is held on Venom's back, like most of his other previous weapons.



Well, that is it. Oh, right. Go Kings Go! Yep, the Los Angeles Kings are in the finals, and they're up in the series 3-2 against the New Jersey Devils. Hopefully they can finish up the series tomorrow, or the Kings will probably be in trouble.

Side Notes:

Hopefully the changes were made to your guys' liking. I certainly think that Venom looks better then he did in the last update. Thank you to everyone that gave me constructive criticism, and please give me some more; I'm always looking for ways to improve my self-moc!

Anyway, the pictures should be a lot more clearer then they have been in the past, so hopefully that will help to show some of the parts more clearly.

Finally, I'm going to be posting three separate creations, each showcasing one of the three factions in my Bionicle Universe (The Toa, The Makuta, and The Web). Those should be coming by the end of the month, so look out for those. They'll basically give you information on how each faction was formed, what their tools are, and what their purposes are in my Bionicle Univers.

Well, that's all for now. As always, comment, and leave suggestions for this guy. See you guys!





Comments

 I like it 
  February 13, 2014
Excellent build, I dig the staff weapon.
 I like it 
  April 7, 2013
thats awesome. You should make a female moc i think you would do good. If you do make a female moc you should check out my page. Im good at making female mocs. I have a bunch of female mocs to poste.
 I made it 
  July 5, 2012
Quoting Terilis the Dark Angel Well, I am certainly glad that I found you! You is pretty good at this. And though I hadn't stopped mocing, your story of getting started with CB(complex--building), is much similar to mine. Keep up the great work, the Moc looks great!
Thanks! Cool to know there are other people that have the same kind of story :)
 I like it 
  July 4, 2012
Well, I am certainly glad that I found you! You is pretty good at this. And though I hadn't stopped mocing, your story of getting started with CB(complex--building), is much similar to mine. Keep up the great work, the Moc looks great!
 I like it 
  June 10, 2012
kool update :)
 
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