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Rak'Ven Update
Basiclly an update of meh self-MOC.
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4th wall: Very pleased with the MOC. Partial credit for the body goes to Adam Toh. C&C if you make something out of the pictures.



Comments

 I made it 
  June 20, 2012
Quoting Vinyl Scratch Very Well done! You mind if i make him? And is he one of your Self-Mocs or just a Moc?
Thanks! No problem if you want to make him. And yes, he's my primary Self-MOC.
  June 19, 2012
Pretty good, but the photos look dark and gloomy. ;-) -LB Jr.
 I like it 
  June 19, 2012
Very Well done! You mind if i make him? And is he one of your Self-Mocs or just a Moc?
 I made it 
  June 19, 2012
Thanks guys. I know photo quality is bad :/ I'll get my camera back in the next few days, finally (after one year XD) Sadly, I have the system slopes only in light grey. Anyways, Thanks :)
 I like it 
  June 19, 2012
very nice moc, good colors good shape good over all I only have two real problems the first is more of a personal preference but I really, really hate it when people just flip masks. The second is that the arms look a bit...lanky, but if that's the look you were going for you got it perfectly.
 I like it 
  June 19, 2012
Constructive Criticism-wise, the biggest flaw is definitely photo quality. Even though that's not part of the MOC, it is part of the page, and it's an important aspect of a MOC to fall behind on. I love the shape of his shoulders, what with the pauldrons and system parts on his chest blending so well together texturally. My only gripe is that the system slopes stand out too much 'visually'. Make them match the armour, or make them a darker shade of grey.
 I like it 
  June 19, 2012
very kool moc :)
 
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