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Toa Veerion (Bio-Cup Round 1)
This mighty Toa warrior with his ornate mask and strong stance barrels headlong into the enemy and unleashes a fierce volley of......paintballs? My entrant for Round 1 of the Bio-Cup 2012 over on MOCpages. My category is #7 which meant that I had to make a Toa or Hero that had an odd or unusual weapon. This moc I'm especially proud of because I finally fixed the proportion troubles with this custom body, fitted a proper mask and even gave it a heartlight. Wish me luck ^_^ and good luck also to my opponent.
About this creation
I wasn't particualarly bothered about choosing favourite from the images so I just uploaded everything.
I'd also like to apoligize for some of the bad quality. Here in the SW of England the weathers' no good for photography.
Opponents Entrant - http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/329837




























































































Comments

 I like it 
  July 3, 2012
Very complex build, and an original choice for its weapon. You get my vote.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2012
A paint ball gun is your unusual weapon? haha. Nevertheless, the toa is suberbly executed. You have my vote!
 I made it 
  July 3, 2012
Quoting Berial . It's all great here, the build, the presentation, I just wish that you had given a little more emphasis on his weapon. None of the entries were quite what I expected, but from both your's is certainly the best. Well done, you got my vote!
Well thankyou kind sir :) I should have gone for a more daft weapon. Now I think of something like silly-string for a side-arm XD
 I like it 
  July 2, 2012
It's all great here, the build, the presentation, I just wish that you had given a little more emphasis on his weapon. None of the entries were quite what I expected, but from both your's is certainly the best. Well done, you got my vote!
  June 22, 2012
@Chronos-I realize that painting is not allowed but I was thinking more along the lines of multicolored grebbles all over the armor...IDK
  June 22, 2012
Trying to get back into reviewing MOCs so here goes. Overall aesthetic is pretty good, solid color scheme, shape, etc. My issues with this are a bit more general and apply to more of your MOCs (based on a brief browse through them). You seem to force some parts. The Bohrok eye on the forearm is a perfect example. The piece could look good, but the way it has to be attached is clunky and leaves those gray bushings exposed. Ideally either find a different piece that's easier to attach, or forget it altogether. Which brings me to my next issue, you leave too many exposed technic beams and connectors for me. It ends up looking rough and unfinished when those are on the outside rather than some kind of armor pieces. The lime 1x3 beams on the torso are the most obvious example on this MOC. From the waist down, though, I like what I see.
 I like it 
  June 22, 2012
Woah. Amazing body design! His lower legs look very nice. The only feedback I can give you is the heart light, It would look a lot better with the same color as the eyes. Also the paintball gun look a little too small for Veerion's size. Still, the overall toa is done VERY well! Nice work!
 I like it 
  June 22, 2012
Please accept group invite
  June 22, 2012
Yeah, I remember. Anyway, just do your best, and if all of your entries are as good as your MOCs usually are, I think you'll be fine, regardless of self-confidence.
 I made it 
  June 22, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega You easily have the skill necessary to go far in this competition. Have faith in yourself, Aaron. :)
I guess you remember my real name for when I just started and put my real name up :) Thanks but my faith is little and few.
Fenrek ~
 I like it 
Suspicious Chicken
  June 21, 2012
Awesome entry love the paintball gun haha ;)
  June 21, 2012
You easily have the skill necessary to go far in this competition. Have faith in yourself, Aaron. :)
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Awesome!
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Very stealthy looking.
 I made it 
  June 21, 2012
Quoting The Realm Of Chaos also, i'm hoping that theme matters over build, because that would mean i may be able to win. maybe. love the moc.
I'll just answer this comment from you instead of answering twice :) I wasn't confident with this and a paintball gun isn't entirely daft but it only would be if it was all serious like against Toa with energy weapons. I'm curious to see your entrant and still do wish the best of luck to you. I've been told that my mocs are good but to be honest, I have very little confidence in them :/
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
also, i'm hoping that theme matters over build, because that would mean i may be able to win. maybe. love the moc.
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Looks great!
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
i'm screwed. great moc, and may the force be ever in your favor with you...
  June 21, 2012
i need help with a body design but it's kinda tricky(undead/ribcage kinda look/feel)but i can't get anyone to help.if you can, can you help me?
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
This is amazing, the torso is definitely the best part, so many greebles and angles! Also, paintball is really fun.
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Great angular body! I love all of the greebling and the paintball gun is awesome! Good luck!
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Wow! This is great! I love that paint ball gun! Every one of the designs is perfect as always. :)
  June 21, 2012
Well that seems logical, but it's in the rules that you have to add a link to the group. Dunno why though. Also, @Strakk - customizing parts is against the rules.
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
I actually love this guy ! Although, with that creative concept (the paintball gun) you could have incorporated the theme into the character. Maybe add paint or splashes of paint on his armor. I don't think this will get you to win IF theme matters more than build (and height). If they consider this amazing new build with awesome designs, you'll win for sure ! (and I'm certain you will ) That was from my "negative" point of view. Being honest, the color flow, designs and proportions nailed it and look very soldier like indeed !
 I made it 
  June 21, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope This, mister Fenrek, is one of the best things I've seen from you. It's sort of strange to see a Toa from you, but I think you should do it more often! Great job and good luck! By the by, you need to put a link to the contest and your opponent's entry, (when it's up) on the page. If you haven't already, I can't quite remember seeing it XD I must have been too stunned by the awesomeness of the build to remember anything else ;)
Thanx for the kind words. I see no real point in putting a link to the group as it shows up next to the moc as the group it's featured in. My opponent hasn't uploaded his yet so I gotta wait :/
 I made it 
  June 21, 2012
Quoting Berial . Needless to say, this is great, but how tall is he? Because he looks a little over 25 cm to me which is the size limit as stated in the rules.
He is, sad to say about 26 1/2 cm tall. I don't know how this will affect him as an entrant though :'(
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Needless to say, this is great, but how tall is he? Because he looks a little over 25 cm to me which is the size limit as stated in the rules.
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Very cool! I couldn't tell though, is the thick part on the gun the hopper or the CO2? Sorry I'm a paintball guy haha
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
This is awesome but I would have added some paint splatters on his armor, but thats just me.
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
This, mister Fenrek, is one of the best things I've seen from you. It's sort of strange to see a Toa from you, but I think you should do it more often! Great job and good luck! By the by, you need to put a link to the contest and your opponent's entry, (when it's up) on the page. If you haven't already, I can't quite remember seeing it XD I must have been too stunned by the awesomeness of the build to remember anything else ;)
 I like it 
  June 21, 2012
Overall just vey well designed, good luck. :)
 
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