Quoting Halhi 141
I like the use of plates for the sky, sun and cloud. The photography could use some work, though; try putting the MOC on a white piece of paper and use another piece of paper as the background behind the MOC. Also, the fire station has several gaps in it. These windows do not look much like windows due to the studs showing. And finally, I think that the Background would look better if the studded side was visible as the bottom of a plate looks somewhat strange... For small scale buildings, it's best to use plenty of tiles and SNOT as these make the creation more detailed and smoother. I do like the overall shape, and the bell tower is well made. Good luck in the contest!
I had to rush to build and post this, so, ya, thanks for the advice!