I'm an Acolyte, but hopefully this wil be good enough to get moved up!
About this creation
Mission 9, here's the logs!
"Log 9 - Sith Empire"
-- We're reading some strange signals from the lower levels. Looks like someone shipped some illegal... Wait... No It can't be... Jedi! They're here! Sound the alarm, Coruscant is under --
"The Jedi are coming. We have our allies, Wookies, Mercenaries, free men and women willing to lay down their lives in the name of idealistic fools. We are ready. We have allies, and we have the Force. Raw power. They will burn, we will purge them. Today is the day the Jedi fall."
Log before combat.
"I took troops down to the street levels. Jedi poured in, but they will not stop us. I attack, my black blade yearning for Jedi flesh. It will not hunger for long! FOR THE EMPIRE!"
My Jedi Sig-Fig (in GFW I am Sith, but this Gungan is my Jedi Sig, hence why he gets two Sith to himself, and force judgement) fights two Sith by Belegons destroyed speeder.
Belegon duels a Jedi above the entrance to the cantina (more on that later).
A Serpentine Sith takes on a Jedi and a group of Jedi troops.
The main firefight, as Jedi troops push down the street and Sith guards try to hold the barricade.
A Sith soldier takes cover behind some consoles whilst talking on a holopad.
A generator thing.
Another pic of the street duel.
EDIT: I may take a few more pics, as I didn't get many of the firefight and the Cantina, but oh well.
Decent work, um, its hard to tell what's what even with the descriptions. Placement and layout needs work, I can see you had a plan and layout but the layout could be better. The combat is great, minifigs good. Overall needs work, but the combat placement is awesome.
You've done a great job of conveying conflict, there is alot going on! If you were to make another scene like this, try to make the landscape a bit less jumbled so that others can better see and appreciate the details you've included! For example, the crashed speeder is excellent! Try making an intact wall, with a portion of it blown apart to showcase the speeder, or adding scorch by using black bricks to contrast the dark grey bricks! Keep on building, you're doing very well! -Danny