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D34THBR1NG3R- Bio-Cup 2012: Round 1 vs. Raviel Ze MOCist
The Legend of D34THBR1NG3R. He's a Toa in search of a weapon worthy of his name.
About this creation


I tend to bring death wherever I go... It's a bit of a curse...kinda like the Cubs thing!



So don't try me...or the Cubs for that matter! (Chicago humor, plz excuse)



Rockin' the "Grindhog"!



I've got you in my sights.



O Yeauhh!



I am a strong proponent of gun safety...XD..SORRY! Couldn't keep a straight face on that one!

LET THE BACK-STORY BEGIN!
Warning, if red Legos remind you of blood and you don't care for the sight of blood, turn back now! Otherwise, Enjoy!



D34THBR1NG3R wanders the remote wastes on the outskirts of nowhere in search of a weapons dealer who can address his needs.


Could this be a sign?



A wretched hive of scum and villainy...Perfect!



DB: Whatchu Got?



Vendor: Medieval, Baby! Whaddya say?
DB: Not my style
Vendor: What's wrong with this??



DB: Plenty



Now we're talkin'



Vendor #2: Would you care to inzpekt ziss?



V#2: Itza verrry niiiiice!


DB: Not bad. It feels good, but where is the trig...



...ger? Um...



DB: Clean-up on aisle two!! Moving on...



DB: What the heck is that??



Vendor #3: It's a chainsaw, you bum.



But I don't think you're man enough to wield its raw power! Waaauughhh waaa!



*spllbbbttt*



DB: Neither are you, apparently. Isn't there anyone around here with a decent weapon?

Cid: Perhaps, I could help you.



Cid: I shall take you to meet my master!




DB: Gentleman Scarecrow!?! I thought you were a legend!



GS: I am. Might I interest you in a pulse-gatling-laser? It's one of my specialties.



GS: Behold "Grindhog"!
DB: May I give it a spin?
GS: By all means.



It's phenomenal!



DB: The long range power is incredible!



DB: How's the short range??
Cid: Wait! Stop!! *spiff*



DB: Not bad!



DB: I'll take it!
GS: Excellent choice.

THE END... BUT WAIT THERE"S MORE!



Would you care to inspect the "GrindHog" for yourself?



Of course you would...



Deadly range, deadly impact, deadly...deadliness!



Is the safety on?? I wouldn't stand there if I were you.



A birds-eye view. The bird was subsequently terminated for spying.



Another look...



Yes, I can wield it without the tripod...



But it's got a bit of a kick! Did I look like "Rambo" for a second? Maybe?



Enough of the gun! I must display my legendariness for all to see!



Obligatory close-ups for inspection of greeblage, starting at the top back...


Moving down...



Pardon me!



And me toesies!



That mask gets real itchy



Front torso...Enough already! Let me get back to the firing range!!



Tah-tah!

Fourth Wall Commentary: D34THBR1NG3R is my entry into the first round of the 2012 Bio-Cup. The assignment was "A toa or hero that physically carries one weapon (or more) of your choice that is intimidating and big for his size." I hope you enjoyed this entry and the Story. A couple of the story props were made by others. The giant sign in the desert was made by my 'ol Bionicle buddy Aidan Davick, and the chainsaw was made by my Dad. We had a fun afternoon of building weapons together and I promised I would put theirs on my page. I made the rest of the props and MOCs. The contest entry consists of D34THBR1NG3R and GrindHog. My opponent this round is Raviel ze MOCist whose home MOCpage is here. Good luck to all in the 2012 Bio-Cup, and thanks all for stopping by. Please Rate and Comment. Thanks!



Comments

 I made it 
  July 13, 2012
Quoting Toa Frostbite God of Ice I found something! his name is deathbringer with numbers and capitols letters!
You cracked the code! ;P
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  July 11, 2012
I found something! his name is deathbringer with numbers and capitols letters!
Gentleman Scarecrow .
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  July 3, 2012
Jaw Dropping! Thats awesome! Love the lil guy and all them weapons!
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  July 3, 2012
Nice feet, nice weapon. You get my vote.
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  July 3, 2012
If only your opponent concentrated on his toa, you could have been upset. Nevetheless, you still beat him in terms of the toa and weapon design. I vote for you.
  July 3, 2012
Looks like you'll win Nathan. ;)
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  July 3, 2012
Awesome! I loved the gun, but I thought the dude could've been a little better. The comic with all that blood made me laugh.
 I like it 
  July 2, 2012
Great presentation and great weapon! I would've liked the Toa to have gotten a little more attention because aside from his legs his design is very unimpressive. Still, a fine entry and enough to grant you my vote!
Gentleman Scarecrow .
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Suspicious Chicken
  July 1, 2012
Awesomesauce, love that gun! Great work.
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  July 1, 2012
That Gatling Gun's amazing! Good luck against Raviel!
  July 1, 2012
Well, good luck Nathan. I reckon this'll be a close one.
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  July 1, 2012
Honestly, not your best work. I'm not so sure about the torso, it seems very flat and plain, despite having some smart greeblage. I like a lot of your abstract limbs, but his legs looks more awkward. Exellent gun, though, very well designed, and I loved the commentary.
 I made it 
  June 30, 2012
Quoting Darren .Y Blood, gore and comedy galore! This is hilariously well presented. The weapon looks deadly and best of luck!
HA! Love the poetry! It should be my new MOTTO! Thanks for making me laugh! XD
 I like it 
  June 30, 2012
Blood, gore and comedy galore! This is hilariously well presented. The weapon looks deadly and best of luck!
 I like it 
  June 30, 2012
Nice! The figure seems fairly simple but the gun is insane looking!
 I made it 
  June 30, 2012
Quoting Puff the Magic Thunderbird Very funny! I love the minigun! I feel sorry for the vendors. :) Can you please check out my self-MOC? He is on my home page.
I saw your BC entry and it seems like you have been building for a while. Your presentation skills are pretty well developed too. It's great to have some new blood in the Bio-MOC circles on MP!
 I made it 
  June 30, 2012
Quoting Banjax 2077 Wow spectacular moc. The toa/hero himself may be a bit simple but I think that this theme focused more on the weapon anyway and might I add that the blood techniqe is really well-done I might use that some time.(with due credit) Well agian great build.
Thanks 'Jax! Yeah, sometimes bulking up isn't the answer for me. I mostly prefer playability, poseabilty, expressiveness, and what I feel is the right look over piling up parts. Big is cool too if I can make it look right. Thanks again.
 I like it 
  June 30, 2012
Wow spectacular moc. The toa/hero himself may be a bit simple but I think that this theme focused more on the weapon anyway and might I add that the blood techniqe is really well-done I might use that some time.(with due credit) Well agian great build.
 I made it 
  June 30, 2012
Quoting Vorred 03 Nice creation and a fantastic gun! Like said before, my first impression was that the legs are a bit weird, but when he is holding the gun without the tripod it works! The comic was very... gory, but somehow funny! Good luck in the contest!
Thanks! I guess that's part of the problem with being a cursed Toa...things can go wrong :P
 I made it 
  June 30, 2012
Quoting Terilis the Dark Angel Oooookay. Blood does unsettle me... and Bionicles don't bleed. But eh, the moc is good. Great in fact. It's just the knees that I have a bit of a problem with. It looks like they are putting a strain on those technic parts. But it is a great moc! Good luck!
We'll call it red hydraulic fluid! XD
 I like it 
  June 30, 2012
Nice creation and a fantastic gun! Like said before, my first impression was that the legs are a bit weird, but when he is holding the gun without the tripod it works! The comic was very... gory, but somehow funny! Good luck in the contest!
Gentleman Scarecrow .
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Arken .
  June 29, 2012
Very funny. I like the simple design of D34THBR1NG3R and the chain gun look of " The Grindhog ". Very funny story! A birds-eye view. The bird was subsequently terminated for spying. XD!!
Gentleman Scarecrow .
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DerpSpawn .
  June 29, 2012
I really love that lower leg design. Though the arms look a bit skinny, I would suggest tires :3 That gun is fantastic, it's nice and over the top ^_^
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
Oooookay. Blood does unsettle me... and Bionicles don't bleed. But eh, the moc is good. Great in fact. It's just the knees that I have a bit of a problem with. It looks like they are putting a strain on those technic parts. But it is a great moc! Good luck!
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
Very funny! I love the minigun! I feel sorry for the vendors. :) Can you please check out my self-MOC? He is on my home page.
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Steve99 L Cool look!
Gladjalikit!
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  June 29, 2012
Cool look!
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Grindhog is awesome, and I like DB's legs. Sorry to see the death of Cid though- it seems it wasn't the flower that did him in in the end.
It was a friendly fire accident. Durned guns. Oh well, he was so Last Bio-cup!
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
Grindhog is awesome, and I like DB's legs. Sorry to see the death of Cid though- it seems it wasn't the flower that did him in in the end.
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Chopperskull ! That's just too creative and awesome !
Glad you like it, 'Skull
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
That's just too creative and awesome !
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Dave Kaleta That grindhog is pretty sweet. Nice work. ~Dave
Tanks!
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  June 29, 2012
That grindhog is pretty sweet. Nice work. ~Dave
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
Although the MOC is lacking in complexety, that gun is freakin' AMAZING! The chainsaw was really cool too! 5/5!
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  June 29, 2012
WAO EPIC WEAPONS DUDE :D
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting StoveTop Creator Always a keen intelligence, bit of humour, and touch of rebel to your builds! Best of Luck! :)
Rebel? Cool! Thanks Tops!
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  June 29, 2012
Always a keen intelligence, bit of humour, and touch of rebel to your builds! Best of Luck! :)
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting mitchell niemand Awesome gun! 5/5
Glad you like it!
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  June 29, 2012
Awesome gun! 5/5
  June 29, 2012
Oh, and dang you for getting the 100th MOC onto the Bio-Cup. xD
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  June 29, 2012
I guess it's good... but I'm dissapointed by the torso... not your best. So I assume that gun is your big weapon? HA! Wait until you see mine...
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Clever Crowe N8M8, lad - you are in a class all your own, m'boy. THIS was a much-needed laugh with which to start the day. =D Sorry to comment on the (as always) Superb humor, but it overfloweth. The MOC: I love the custom (and tapered) lower legs of the Fig, and LOVE the G.S. Pulse Gatling 9000 Deluxe. Excellent combination of both trans fx elements and reasonably realistic structure (who KNOWS how much recoil a Pulse Laser REALLY has, anyway, right?=P). Good solid tripod under there, and I love the Weapons Advertisement Pylon Thingie, too. Young man, if I ever open up a branch on my page dedicated to FUNNY; there will be accreditation due YOU on its first page. NEVER do you fail, with the sharp sense o' humor, nor equally honed Skill. 5/5!!!
Wow, thanks Crowe. Glad I have a fan of the MOCs and humor both.
  June 29, 2012
The gun is awesome and the toa is ok but the torso isn't your best...
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  June 29, 2012
Very funny and awesome job!
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
N8M8, lad - you are in a class all your own, m'boy. THIS was a much-needed laugh with which to start the day. =D Sorry to comment on the (as always) Superb humor, but it overfloweth. The MOC: I love the custom (and tapered) lower legs of the Fig, and LOVE the G.S. Pulse Gatling 9000 Deluxe. Excellent combination of both trans fx elements and reasonably realistic structure (who KNOWS how much recoil a Pulse Laser REALLY has, anyway, right?=P). Good solid tripod under there, and I love the Weapons Advertisement Pylon Thingie, too. Young man, if I ever open up a branch on my page dedicated to FUNNY; there will be accreditation due YOU on its first page. NEVER do you fail, with the sharp sense o' humor, nor equally honed Skill. 5/5!!!
  June 29, 2012
I love the story. This is a really cool creation. P.S do you know where i can pick one of those guns up?
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
Great entry, I like the overall design of the Toa, but the weapon is awesome. The story made me laugh, excellent. Good luck :)
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  June 29, 2012
Nice work!
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting DerpSpawn . I really love that lower leg design. Though the arms look a bit skinny, I would suggest tires :3 That gun is fantastic, it's nice and over the top ^_^
Thanks!
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting John Tudor might need to pick some of those up for july 4th :D
Ha!
 I like it 
  June 29, 2012
might need to pick some of those up for july 4th :D
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Zor Ember This is incredible! It's also really funny! :D
Glad you like it, Zor! Thanks!
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Zeno, Being Of Energy Awesome, good luck!
Thanks, Zeno!
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  June 29, 2012
This is incredible! It's also really funny! :D
 I made it 
  June 29, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope XD that weapon is HUGE for that little guy! Lovely build and great story. Good luck out there Nate!
Thanks Gale!
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  June 29, 2012
Awesome, good luck!
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  June 29, 2012
XD that weapon is HUGE for that little guy! Lovely build and great story. Good luck out there Nate!
 
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