In a desparate effort to stop the Makuta Sombrak declare war on the Cult of Thanatos, the Toa Racta sought to fight the Sombrak. Severly outmatched, the Toa were defeated, and one of their number, Toa Galika, was captured. She was handed over to the Barraki, a group of warlords mutated into horrific monsters by Mutagen. Finding no use for her, they plan to kill her...
About this creation
KEY:
Grey=Narration
Italics=Thought
linked statements will take you to where it happened. eg. "Montu Kills Les Tenebres" would take you to The Unwanted Hero Part 14
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Pridak: Now We shall consume her living hea... AAAGH!
???: I don't think so.
Kalmah: Pridak! What shot you?!
???: We Did.
Kalmah: Wha... AAGH!
Galika: You two?!
Galika: How can you two be here? Where are the others?
Korapa: To answer question one; We borrowed Kaukaus from a funny looking Matoran. To answer question two; The others don't know we're here. They gave you up for dead. We came to rescue you.
Leka: I'm sure those two freaks aren't the only two people here. We need to get out of here!
Mantax: Where'd the Toa go? She is ment to stay here!
Takadox: Obviously ran off. I doubted that she'd be trustworthy to stay here. If I was her, I'd have run off too.
The Toa jump down from the opening.
Galika: If that's so, then now's the perfect time to exersise that talent!
Mantax: Never!
Takadox: Looks like she brought buddies! Bad move, Toa! Now your vunerable!
Takadox swipes the mask from Korapa's face
Korapa: My Mask!
Takadox: All I have to do is to wait for you to die!
Galika: Ok Buster, get off my friend!
Takadox hisses and struggles...
...whilst Korapa re-fits his Kaukau, allowing him to breath.
Korapa: >GASP!< Thank the Great Spirit!
Mantax: AAAH!
Leka: I don't like it! They're not even trying!
Mantax: oohh...
Leka: Lets get the heck out of this place!
Korapa: There's the chute!
Galika: And two Barraki!
Carapar: Let us Crush them!
Ehlek: Yes... and feast on their living hearts! THEY WILL KNOW THAT THEY WERE DEFEATED BY THE MIGHTY...
Carapar: Stop. We get your point. Don't over do it.
Carapar: TOA! You have no hope against...
AAHH!
Galika: They're obviously not trying. Or else they wouldn't let these idiots be the last line of defence.
Korapa: Sweet dreams, crab!
Capapar: AAH!
Korapa: Damn this is too easy!
Galika: Well, we'll have to get out of the BoM fortress after this, so it won't be easy if these guys try or not!
Leka: Got this guy!
Ehlek: DIE TO.. AARGHH!
Leka: Lets get out of here!
Galika: Second that.
Korapa: Third.
???: >Ahem<
You think this is over? Not by a long shot.
Galika: I got this, guys.
If you get comdemned to the dark waters, so be it. But don't drag other people into it to try to get you out. Kalmah Told me to kill you. I tried, and then he stiched me up. You Never Play with a Toa...
>SHINK<
Pridak: ACK!
Galika: Understood?
Leka: You... You killed him?
Galika: No. But if his friends do something fast, he will be dead. It's not our problem. The Barraki have never been our problem. I don't see why they should.
Leka: Guys, No sign of any BoM Enforcers. Must be a bank holiday.
Galika: I know of a quick rute from here to outside. If there aren't any Steel Butts here, there won't be any there.
Korapa: We need to get our masks back from that wierd Matoran. I think his name was Wadjet.
Leka: after that, lets go home. I think we'll suprise our friends there...
EPILOGUE: (Bare with me, It'll all make sense sooner or later)
Hila: Keep shooting! We've almost got him!
IRM: AAAHHH!
Saria: I know you said the training mission would be difficult, but this is crazy!
Hila: This is obviously not the training mission. The IRM is a menace to the Matoran. If we can destroy it now, then we'd be doing Racta Magna a big favour!
IRM: FOOLS! I AM NOT THE IRM! I AM FAR GREATER! I AM A GOD! I WILL NOT BE DESTROYED BY A PAIR OF...
>BOOM<
IRM: AAAHHH!
Saria: Got 'im.
Hila: Great. It could've been saying something important!
Saria: No it wasn't. It was just rambling.
Hila: It seemed like rambling, but it could've been... >gasp
He He He...
HA HA HA!! Did you think a paultry gun could kill me?!
Hila: Mata Nui!
???: Call your deity all you want, he shall not help you. For I am your new deity!
Hila: W-What manner of creature are you?!
???: I am your deity! I am oblivion! I am the soul that claims the lives around you!
Hila: No!
I AM THANATOS!
AAAHHH!
The body goes limp and Thanatos drops it to the floor.
Saria: Hila?!
Thanatos: Your friend is beyond help, little one. She sleeps in the silence of oblivion!
You may join her if you want, but first...
...I must pick a shape that is more... ironic.
Saria: But... but... you are...
Thanatos: Does this form suprise you, Toa?
Saria: No, please... AAAAHHHH!
Thanatos: It should do. Because, who expects any trouble...
...from an innocent little "Matoran"?
Next Issue: The sting of the Scorpion
NOTE: Sorry for the poor quality of this issue, It was rushed, because I took the photos straight after the last episode, and taking photos with the curtains drawn for a long time on a hot day can drive you a little bit crazy.
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July 6, 2012 |
Quoting Norrak The Last Toa
The Epilogue was the best part. I realy like your stories. =)
the only bit that wasn't rushed :P |
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July 6, 2012 |
Quoting The Texan Bionicle Builder
Oh My! awesome! Wanna make a big moc now! :b
Do It! It'd be awesome! |
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I like it |
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July 6, 2012 |
The Epilogue was the best part. I realy like your stories. =) |
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July 5, 2012 |
nice ep |
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July 5, 2012 |
Oh My! awesome! Wanna make a big moc now! :b |
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