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Lordanian, Resurrected Flame
He returns! My Self-MOC! New name, same guy! Plus, Hunters Hunted: Part 1.5!
About this creation
(Hunters Hunted: Part 1)

Hunters Hunted: Part 1.5

After Jordan made an alliance with Catok, Catok disappeared and didn’t return for a long while. Just when Jordan began to think Catok had run out on him, Catok appeared late one night carrying a sack. Out of the sack he pulled the Golden Hau. Jordan inquired as to where he got it, but Catok did not say. He just stared at the Hau, clasped firmly in his hand. Jordan called his name multiple times but it had no effect. Catok didn’t move. When Jordan finally shook him, he gazed at him with a starry expression, as if he was in a trance. When he finally came around he staggered and dropped the mask. Jordan dove and caught it, just before it hit the ground.
“This,” Catok said, panting, “is your way out, as it was mine, many years ago.”
Jordan stared at the mask, questions filling his mind. How was it that he was touching the mask and not getting burned up? How did Catok get the mask in the first place? Why didn’t he get burned up? The dead cannot touch the mask without getting burned up, he thought.
“Are you ready?” Catok asked.
“Yes,” Jordan said with determination.
Jordan lay down and closed his eyes. It was a long and brutal night. When morning finally came, Catok stood and wiped sweat and blood from his forehead.
“Jordan,” Catok whispered into his ear, “can you hear me?”
Jordan’s eyes shot open and he stared at Catok. Catok gave him a weak smile.
“It’s done,” he said.
Jordan looked down at his chest. The Hau had been surgically implanted there, as it had been on Catok before. Though Jordan didn’t feel any different, aside from having a mask built into his chest. He sat up and tried to stand, but he felt lightheaded and weak. He fell to his knees on the ground, grasping his chest. It was getting hard to breath. He yelled in pain.
“Wha-wha-hap-happen-?”
Catok rushed to his side but then something happened.
The Golden Hau glowed brightly, the light coursed all the way through Jordan’s body. Catok was blown back as Jordan screamed. The pain was intense, but when it was all over, he stood, transformed, but no longer Jordan, he was now Lordanian.
Catok stood, speechless, “How--?”
Lordanian breathed in the air, “I don’t know...but this is pretty sweet!”
“Come,” Catok said.
They walked to the place where the great battle had taken place and where the portal once was long ago. Catok looked at Lordanian and smiled. The portal opened right before them in a bright golden light.
“Are you ready?” Catok asked.
“Wait Catok, what about you?” Lordanian asked. The portal started to spin causing great turbulence so he had to shout to be heard above the noise.
“Come on! Let’s go!” Catok shouted, ignoring his question.
Catok grabbed Jordan's wrist and they went through the portal...



...But the world they came to was much different then they remembered...


Name: Lordanian (lor-day-nee-an)
Status: Resurrected
Gender: Male
Species: Ta-Matoran
Element: Fire
Alignment: Lawful Good
Occupation: Toa
Titles: Jordan, Ghost, Resurrected, Savior
Kanohi: Hau Abilities
Weapons: Fire Sword, Dual Heat Blades
Theme: Arrival To Earth




First of all, here's an EPIC poster Instant Noodles made for him. :D Thanks buddy! Also, give him a big hand for all the hard work he did on Man Hunt. That was some wicked photoshopping. He also did the main pic. ;)

Finally made it. :P Here he is!

So ya, he's a lot different from the previous version.

He actually looks more like the first version.

Lower legs. :)

Upper legs, I'll probably update these in the future.

Arm. His upper arms are not custom, I'm not entirely happy with that. I will definitely update those in the future.

Backside of his legs, I like the look here. ;)

His back, very humanoid looking.

His whole backside.

Aha! He has his old Heat Blades again, from the original version.

Attack pose. Sorry if you guys are bummed about the wrist blades. :P

FYA POWA.

With his new weapon, Fire sword!

I know, so original, but I like it. ;)

It looks very knight-like, which is what I was kinda going for with Lordanian.

His weapons.

Since the Hau is connected to him, he can use some of it's powers, like shielding, but not very extravagantly.

I got the FYA!

With Catok, to be posted soon.

With Adiemus, also to be posted soon. ;)

A closing close-shot.


4th Wall:
Whew! I thought I'd never get him posted. :P I built him a while ago, around April. Already some things about him seem outdated. I've already changed one thing. I made a handle for his sword so he can actually hold it now and not just pose with it. :P His upper arms also need some work. Like I said before, they're not custom. That's not a bad thing, but I really want custom arms for him. ;) So I'll be working on that.

I hope you've enjoyed this post!

C&C Appreciated.



Comments

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  September 2, 2014
Cool! Looks like a furno revamp.
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  June 28, 2014
Egad, that's beautiful on epic proportions. Really well done. Love the Hau chest.
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  June 26, 2013
I like how you used the Hau, very creative.
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  May 21, 2013
Amazing! The music work perfectly for the story and character. Great job.
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  April 7, 2013
Awesome! While the idea of the fire sword isn't very original, the design is totally new.
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  March 18, 2013
Very nice Bionicle here! I like his sword and the color scheme. Also, could you give my SM some C&C? Not looking for smileys here, just some friendly MOCcing advice. Here's a link if you're interested: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/353206
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NoWhereMan Returns
  January 25, 2013
I hope you haven't forgotten about me yet.
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  January 25, 2013
Quoting NoWhereMan Returns I hope you haven't forgotten about me yet.
Not quite...
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  December 23, 2012
A much more cleaner build compared to Ultimate Jordan2444, which was, excuse me, overloaded. I approve the not-including of the wrist blades, and also glad you concentrated yourself on ONE primary colour. Ultimate was, sorry, a mess of dark red, red, silver and black. There, you made the colours flow MUCH more nicely. Cool! :D
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  November 10, 2012
Great self-MOC- It's so compact, and I really like the golden mask on his chest. I've been playing with Photoshop for some time now, but I didn't find anything to create that cool glowing effect yet.
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  November 2, 2012
Wow, this is even more amazing than I imagined it. Well done.
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  September 11, 2012
FYA POWA.awesome :D
  August 15, 2012
Nice Photo Shop, to bad you got spammed. You should delete this MOC or do it the hard way...delete all the comments.
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  August 10, 2012
a really cool bionicle
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  August 10, 2012
One the most epic bionicles I've ever seen!
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  August 10, 2012
Thought I commented on this already, but I am WAY to lazy to check. Great job!
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  August 10, 2012
Impressive!
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  August 9, 2012
In case if I haven't said this before, this is a super epic self moc you have here! Btw, have you had the chance to see the teaser of what is most likely to be the final version of my self moc [It's only the lower right leg and foot, but it's big (In my opinion.).]? It's at- http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/335977
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  August 8, 2012
Quoting George Marshall Epic job! The editing on this is amazing! What program did you use?
The photoshopping is not mine. As I said, it's Instant Noodles'. ;)
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  August 8, 2012
I'm speechless, only because this is so awesome.
  August 8, 2012
Epic job! The editing on this is amazing! What program did you use?
  August 8, 2012
How did you get spam?
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  August 5, 2012
Sigh. Well, at least the spam got deleted... unfortunately so did the views...
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  August 5, 2012
Oh frack, it got you again? I'm glad Galvis never got hit....
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  August 5, 2012
Dude, that sncks. You don't even have so little true likes that you could just delete this and reupload. I've never seen this happen to a friend let alone nearly ten other people in one day. My sympathies from wherever they come from because I've never had a spamming performed.
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  August 4, 2012
3 huge spams in one day. You, me and galaxus. Now you know how i felt the first time. What are you planning to do to fix this?
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  August 1, 2012
So many pieces, and yet such a slick design. Brilliant. The golden Hau is a very nice touch.
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  July 31, 2012
Quoting Nathan Himself Hau (he he) do you put so many HF parts on 'im when each one requires a BALL JOINT to connect to?
Most of them are connected to ball joints, except for the silver ones on his shins. They're not. ;)
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  July 30, 2012
Hau (he he) do you put so many HF parts on 'im when each one requires a BALL JOINT to connect to?
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  July 30, 2012
Nice story! But I didn't know Bionicle robots bled.. or sweated.. or slept. :I
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  July 21, 2012
Cool MOC! I'll rate it 5 "Heads" for the mask (in his chest). I hope you'll get finished with your costum arm for your MOC. Good Luck... Oh, and also, if you want to join Makuhero City: Noir group, you're in... All you need is a revamp (read the rules of engagement).
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  July 20, 2012
Incredible but I'm not a fan of the Hau mask in his chest.
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  July 19, 2012
It's okay, I guess... JK, he's cool.
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  July 19, 2012
This is absoluty amazing!!! I really like how you use this tahu mask. I like bulk lags and his arms are awesome. Good job, keep it up!!!
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NoWhereMan .
  July 17, 2012
Congratulations on getting on the front page. Somehow he reminds me of Viewtiful Joe.
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  July 17, 2012
absolutely love it, also do you mind if i use the sword design
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  July 17, 2012
Thanks guys. :)
  July 17, 2012
I really like the new lordanian really nice compaired to the earlier versions
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  July 17, 2012
Nice! Do you know who he reminds me of? Explosive Dude Joe. Google it.
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  July 17, 2012
Front page! Congrats! :D
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  July 16, 2012
beast i love it! :P
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  July 14, 2012
Excellent photo effects. >Eric
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  July 13, 2012
Like those thickened limbs with the greebling on the reverse of the armored pieces. Made a nice, solid frame. Like the inverted helm. Cheers!
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Studkeeper Brickern
  July 12, 2012
Cool! I wish I could make something like that!
  July 12, 2012
Very very good MOC. The compact design allows the pieces to slow well. However, the gold hau chest plate looks utterly out of place. A silver or red mask/chest-piece would look better
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  July 12, 2012
About time! (Update your CBW page! >=O) I still can't figure out your designs, but then again, you're using HF pieces, and I don't have a bunch of experiencing with them. I love how you incorporated the mask into his chest, and my only complaint is that he looks a little chubby. Besides that, nice job! Keep up the good work!
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  July 12, 2012
Thanks guys!
  July 12, 2012
I like how the hau is in his chest
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  July 12, 2012
Great work I'm glad you fixed the arms from the previous version (not very poseable) but I do miss the darts oh and I think his upper arms need a bit more silver though and again awesome work
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  July 12, 2012
The back and legs are awesome! I really like the compact and muscular look. The sword hilt is really cool too. Btw, I hate to spam but I have some bionicle guys that are desperatly in need of comments. you don't need to comment but I would REALLY appreciate it.
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  July 11, 2012
Quoting Terilis the Dark Angel That is some serious Mocing you got. The Hau directly placed in the middle of his chest is, in short, Amazing. I agree with you, the back is very humanoid. I need to work on my SM's back. Anyway, excellent work.
Thanks!
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  July 11, 2012
Thanks guys!
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  July 11, 2012
That is some serious Mocing you got. The Hau directly placed in the middle of his chest is, in short, Amazing. I agree with you, the back is very humanoid. I need to work on my SM's back. Anyway, excellent work.
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  July 11, 2012
Great new name! I love it :)
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  July 11, 2012
If you don't mind, can my self moc avron be In the story ???
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  July 11, 2012
Great new updates Jordan! His chest is one of my favorite parts on the MOC! Wonderful new name too!
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NoWhereMan .
  July 10, 2012
80 likes for ya. BTW, maybe some Rahkshi heads on the shoulders just to fill in some gaps.
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NoWhereMan .
  July 10, 2012
Got any silver ones? aside from that, is Gardunis still intact?
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  July 10, 2012
Quoting NoWhereMan . Got any silver ones? aside from that, is Gardunis still intact?
Nope. Actually no Rahkshi heads period. :P No, Gardunis was dismantled a while ago. :(
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  July 10, 2012
Quoting NoWhereMan . 80 likes for ya. BTW, maybe some Rahkshi heads on the shoulders just to fill in some gaps.
Thanks. Alas, I don't have any red Rahkshi heads. :/
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  July 10, 2012
Quoting SaberKnight aka rj Im not dead He looks more of an ironman suit and hes a bit flexy now than the old version and oh hello jordans fans
Thanks!
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  July 9, 2012
Oh My Lordanian! :P Thats so amazing! Me Jealous. :P
Legofreak2444 ~
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NoWhereMan .
  July 9, 2012
Now to actually give a good comment. Like everyone else said, I'm not a big fan of the name. Also, In some pictures, the torso looks flattened, but it looks better in others. Either way, I think the torso could be lengthened a bit. I also think the torso could use more silver. I love the Hau in his chest. It's fits the MOC perfectly. Although, I can see it eventually turning red when it's not necessary any longer. After all, Catok clearly doesn't need it. I personally think the upper arms are fine, but It's your self-MOC. The fire sword is great. It looks very knightly, but I think a sword like the one on your old MOC, Post-apocalyptic Sixia might fit him more. Plus, his theme fits him more than ever. Great job. I hope to see more like this in the future. :)
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  July 9, 2012
He looks more of an ironman suit and hes a bit flexy now than the old version and oh hello jordans fans
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  July 9, 2012
Quoting NoWhereMan .
Thanks for the critique. We'll see what happens. ;) Cheers!
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  July 9, 2012
Thanks guys!
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  July 9, 2012
Nice! They keep getting better and better.
  July 9, 2012
Pretty good but the mask in the middle kinda spoils it for me.
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  July 8, 2012
AWESOME! This is by-far the best version of Jord-- Lordanian EVAR! Nice work! I love the Hau in his chest, looks so cool!
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  July 8, 2012
Thanks for all the comments!
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  July 8, 2012
Excellent build! I'm not sure I like the name too much, or where the story is going at this point, but I'm sure it will make sense in the long run. We still need to come up with a power for his true mask. ;)
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  July 8, 2012
very nicely done. i must ask, is the hau attached or just held on place? also i would prefer if the silver was swapped out for gold. it would all work better then.
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  July 8, 2012
Really amazingly well armored and bulked up. I love it ! :D
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  July 8, 2012
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  July 8, 2012
Hahaha, total beast lord!
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S.E.D .
  July 7, 2012
Such an amazing revamp! But why did you change his name?
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  July 7, 2012
Stunningly, amazingly epic! He looks like he's just gonna' go kick some Mukuta can! And the Hau integration is awesome! I like the idea of a personal energy shield.
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  July 7, 2012
Great work, Nuf said. I love him!!
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  July 7, 2012
Quoting Gregory Picazo Nice! Love the update on Lordanian. Was tha Hau in the chest inspired by the Matrix in Transformers?
Heck no. Thanks for asking though. ;)
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  July 7, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid And i thought he couldnt get any beter! Amazing work man, i love every bit of it, especially the shoulders, back, legs, and flawless system integration! Your upcoming mocs suggest that you've become ridiculously good! Cant wait to see them!
Thanks! =D
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  July 7, 2012
Very nice! I love it! I thought you said the upper arms weren't custom. They look like they are! I'm not sure about the name change though..... I guess it will grow on me. ,Shadow
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  July 7, 2012
Great remake of your self MOC! I'm really digging the new look.
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  July 7, 2012
Nice! Love the update on Lordanian. Was tha Hau in the chest inspired by the Matrix in Transformers?
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  July 7, 2012
And i thought he couldnt get any beter! Amazing work man, i love every bit of it, especially the shoulders, back, legs, and flawless system integration! Your upcoming mocs suggest that you've become ridiculously good! Cant wait to see them!
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  July 7, 2012
O.O I'm speechless.
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  July 7, 2012
No more wrist blades :'( Ah, it's okay, the rest of his awesomeness makes up for it ;)
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  July 7, 2012
dude this is just waiting to be turned into a video.
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  July 7, 2012
Thanks for all the comments everyone!
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  July 7, 2012
Quoting Lego Obsessionist Wow, fantastic work. It's nice to see him with a more Bionicle-style name. You really made him look solid and muscular. Fantastic everything. I love the hilt of the sword, I hope you kept it.
Thanks! Unfortunately, I didn't. It didn't really supply sufficient balance so I just added a handle for the handle. :P
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  July 7, 2012
Quoting Everox Toa of Plasma Wow, Amazing Upgrades! The Hau fits very nicely inside his chest. He is just so nicely detailed! I love the details in the back of the feet. Can I possibly use that design? This is a very well done self MOC!
Thanks! Sure you can!
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  July 7, 2012
Quoting Vorred 03 The story chapter was as great as the last! I'm really interested what will happen in the changed overworld... and the new version of your self-MoC is fantastic! He has a lot more bulk now, and how you integrated the Hau to the body is amazing! Since you may know that I made my own photostory and haven't made any texts yet, I would like to use his new name, it's less human :)
Well, Lordanian is technically his transformed name, but if you want to use it, I suppose that's okay. ;) Thanks!
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  July 7, 2012
You look great! Remind me not to call him Jordan any more.
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  July 7, 2012
This is the best version of him yet!
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  July 7, 2012
Very, very solid build. You gave him an overhaul, and a wonderful one at that. Looks like it is time for me to update my Selfmoc! =p
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  July 7, 2012
Wow, fantastic work. It's nice to see him with a more Bionicle-style name. You really made him look solid and muscular. Fantastic everything. I love the hilt of the sword, I hope you kept it.
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  July 7, 2012
I love it. I was almost freaking out from the preview pic, but now this self mod has blown me away. And another thing maybe INSTRUCTIONS ON EVERYTHING!!!!!
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  July 7, 2012
That is just epic.I love everything.My only complaint is the name.I like 'Jordan' better than 'Lordanian'.I will upgrade Jordan soon,along with Galaxus.They will be differant due to only having a corrupted Hau and no green pecieces used on Galaxus's head.
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  July 7, 2012
Awesome! He looks epic now! Time to revamp my version of Jorda... er, "Lordanian" :P
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  July 7, 2012
The story chapter was as great as the last! I'm really interested what will happen in the changed overworld... and the new version of your self-MoC is fantastic! He has a lot more bulk now, and how you integrated the Hau to the body is amazing! Since you may know that I made my own photostory and haven't made any texts yet, I would like to use his new name, it's less human :)
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  July 7, 2012
Really Nice! the only thing is, I liked always the kinda not much armor but skin thing you know? and now it's really became a warrior. But that won't take away that it is a wonderful job! Great work and go on with this amazing buildingway!
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  July 7, 2012
awesome, what a great upgrade! looks better than ever!
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  July 7, 2012
Awesome! As so is Catok!
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Arken .
  July 6, 2012
Awesome! Jordan takes place as one of my favorite creations of yours! Well, next to Jube. =P
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Suspicious Chicken
  July 6, 2012
Whoa... I'm quite blown away! This is easily your best MOC! Which is fitting, seeing as it's your self-MOC. He looks enough like Jordan to keep the old Legofreak feel, but he looks new enough to start a new standard of awesomesauce. The lower legs are simply epic, and the torso is amazing! Surprised how well that mask in his chest works (You've used that idea once before, and now it looks even cooler!). The non-custom upper arms look great, but could be custom just for maximum uniqueness. As far as the new weapons, hey fit him well. I think this is about the longest comment I've ever left on a MOC, but let's face it: This guy deserves it! I'd like it again if that wasn't considered spamming :P
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DerpSpawn .
  July 6, 2012
I have to admit, I've never really likes him before now, I always thought he was overrated, but THIS, is another story. He's got fantastic designs, everything is nicely filled out, there aren't any holes in the MOC that I can see, one thing, and this is really a very minor suggestion, the red hand connectors on the side of the legs, I think they look a little wierd, and I would suggest putting a ball joint piece in the hand connector. I like that chest design, it has a great look to it. using the golden mask is a simply great idea.
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  July 6, 2012
kewl :) and new buddy icon! :P
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  July 6, 2012
Wow, Amazing Upgrades! The Hau fits very nicely inside his chest. He is just so nicely detailed! I love the details in the back of the feet. Can I possibly use that design? This is a very well done self MOC!
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Jacobi Guardian of Water His lower legs are great! And I like his body a lot better without the visork feet. Good job! Should I change his name from Jordan ot Lordanian, or no?
Nah, you can keep it as Jordan. Lordanian is his transformed version. Thanks for the comment!
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  July 6, 2012
His lower legs are great! And I like his body a lot better without the visork feet. Good job! Should I change his name from Jordan ot Lordanian, or no?
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting RazorClaw (Skrall Razor) He looks awesome although with the sword, he looks a bit like Callan
For the record, I had them before Callan did. He was just more popular than me at the time. Thanks for the comment!
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Norrak The Last Toa Wow! He's looks much better than the previous version, and thats saying something! I do have one question though, why did you change his name? =)
Cause. Jordan isn't really a Bionicle name (I actually got several complaints the first time I posted it. :P Go figure.) and 2444 is a number, not a name. LOL. Thanks for the comment!
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Toa Phosphorus Looks epic. Never really like the visorak feet. Everything looks great! But i still like 2444 as a name better.
Really? I don't. :P Thanks anyway.
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  July 6, 2012
Such a great moc :D. I really like the torso design :D
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  July 6, 2012
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Thanks for the critique, I kinda like the silver though, gives it a nice highlight. I kinda had the red Hau thing in mind, we'll see. ;) Thanks again!
No problem. Perhaps add more Silver then, on the lower arms.
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  July 6, 2012
Wow! He's looks much better than the previous version, and thats saying something! I do have one question though, why did you change his name? =)
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  July 6, 2012
Looks epic. Never really like the visorak feet. Everything looks great! But i still like 2444 as a name better.
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  July 6, 2012
He looks great, the hau flows really well, and he is a great improvement from the last version! I also like how you gave him the large fire claymore, to compliment the smaller blades. He overall looks great, their is(as I always believe there is with just about any moc)room for improvement, but this is by far one of the best biomocs I've seen! Keep up the good work Legofreak =)
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  July 6, 2012
He looks awesome although with the sword, he looks a bit like Callan
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  July 6, 2012
AWESOME. Great job!
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  July 6, 2012
A truly epic moc indeed! I especially love the legs!
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  July 6, 2012
I love it! i wish i was this good at bionicle
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  July 6, 2012
AWESOME!!!!
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  July 6, 2012
Wow, truly excellent MOC their!
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  July 6, 2012
Woah...EPIC!!! The shoulders look kind of empty(Wings? He is sort of like an angel) but other than that he looks pretty awesome though I do miss the ICONIC wristblades...Whatevah...Great form of...uh...your selfmoc...
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Zeno, Being Of Energy First off, Amazing. Next you should probably remove some of the silver (too many colors) And maybe have a form of him with the red hau. Over all nice, but there is room for improvement.
Thanks for the critique, I kinda like the silver though, gives it a nice highlight. I kinda had the red Hau thing in mind, we'll see. ;) Thanks again!
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  July 6, 2012
First off, Amazing. Next you should probably remove some of the silver (too many colors) And maybe have a form of him with the red hau. Over all nice, but there is room for improvement.
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Arken . Awesome! Jordan takes place as one of my favorite creations of yours! Well, next to Jube. =P
LOL. Thanks!
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire Yeah, that's what I meant. :P Peace!
Haha. Okay. ;) Thanks!
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting The one and only, S.T.S The MOCist from the South I'm good, you? Oh by the way, mind if I send you an invite to a group?
Depends on the group, but sure. ;)
  July 6, 2012
Yeah, that's what I meant. :P Peace!
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  July 6, 2012
Thanks for all the comments everyone!
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Akara The Great Wonderful! Looking at the first photo of him, which was photoshopped, I didn't like how the mask clashed with the silver. But without the effects, it looks great nothenless!
Well, there's not really any clash, and if there is I don't really mind it. Thanks for the comment!
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting George G. Great job mate! The mask on the chest is an amazing idea :)
Thanks George! :)
  July 6, 2012
I'm good, you? Oh by the way, mind if I send you an invite to a group?
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire Now this is the Jordan I've been waiting for! Although I see it's "Lordanian" now. Not a bad name, but I hoped for something that sounded a little more like Jordan. But that's besides the point, this moc is fantastic! He truly does have a Cossy-esque feel about him, and that's definitely a good thing! And I didn't even realize the upper arms were noncustom till you said so, so props for that! And while I'm not the hugest fan of the Hau chest thing, it's done quite elegantly, so it doesn't take away much at all! Overall, brilliant work, Lordanian seems to be approaching as close to a "final form" as you can get! :D
Well I didn't really intend for him to have "Cossy-esque" feel, but I assume you mean "Cossy-esque" quality. :P Anyway, thanks for the comment! Glad you like him. :)
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  July 6, 2012
Quoting Suspicious Chicken Whoa... I'm quite blown away! This is easily your best MOC! Which is fitting, seeing as it's your self-MOC. He looks enough like Jordan to keep the old Legofreak feel, but he looks new enough to start a new standard of awesomesauce. The lower legs are simply epic, and the torso is amazing! Surprised how well that mask in his chest works (You've used that idea once before, and now it looks even cooler!). The non-custom upper arms look great, but could be custom just for maximum uniqueness. As far as the new weapons, hey fit him well. I think this is about the longest comment I've ever left on a MOC, but let's face it: This guy deserves it! I'd like it again if that wasn't considered spamming :P
Haha, well thanks for that. ;)
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  July 6, 2012
He looks great. I like his fire sword.
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  July 6, 2012
Awesome!
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  July 6, 2012
Wonderful! Looking at the first photo of him, which was photoshopped, I didn't like how the mask clashed with the silver. But without the effects, it looks great nothenless!
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  July 6, 2012
Now this is the Jordan I've been waiting for! Although I see it's "Lordanian" now. Not a bad name, but I hoped for something that sounded a little more like Jordan. But that's besides the point, this moc is fantastic! He truly does have a Cossy-esque feel about him, and that's definitely a good thing! And I didn't even realize the upper arms were noncustom till you said so, so props for that! And while I'm not the hugest fan of the Hau chest thing, it's done quite elegantly, so it doesn't take away much at all! Overall, brilliant work, Lordanian seems to be approaching as close to a "final form" as you can get! :D
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  July 6, 2012
Cool build!
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  July 6, 2012
My, my, my! Jor-I mean, Lordanian is looking awesome! I like the Cossy-esque greebling and added Hau! It seems everyone is uprading self-MOCs...better amp up my own schedule... :P
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  July 6, 2012
Jord-- uhh... I mean, Lordanian just looks awesome with that kanohi in his chest! THAT is what I call Originality.
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  July 6, 2012
I like it. Long time no see, eh?
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  July 6, 2012
you changed his name!!! *GAAAAASSSSSPPPPP* but yet soooo awesome i can't put it into words great job!!!
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  July 6, 2012
Great job mate! The mask on the chest is an amazing idea :)
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  July 6, 2012
wow awesome i shouldnt be surprised though since everything you do is awesome
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  July 6, 2012
Wow..... Just wow.... This is beautiful! Love the look and physique! Spectacular work on everything here! I'm just stunned! Lovely!
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  July 6, 2012
Great work!! This is truly epic :)
 
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