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Saviours 01: I'll Be Waiting
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The events in this story take place at the same time as the events in Conquest 01: Betrayal .


Jedi Master Ordan Minoh looked at his reflection in the mirror and sighed. Though he was now 05 in his mid 50's Ordan still looked like a young man, his hair was long and a dark brown, his eyes shone and his handsome face remained cleanly shaven.
Nevertheless he was beginning to feel old.

Dana Kowls: "You aren't getting tired are you?"



Ordan turned in his chair and smiled as Dana approached him. Dana was a full 10 years younger than Ordan but she too looked to be no older than 30.
The effect came from the Force, the concentration of light side energy on Tython was incredibly powerful, slowing the aging process of almost all the Temple's inhabitants.

Ordan Minoh: "Not yet I'm not."

Dana Kowls: "Good, otherwise I'd feel bad sending you away."



Ordan spun his chair around as Dana handed him a small data card.

Ordan Minoh: "Where am I going?"

Dana Kowls: "Bothawui, we think that Vulcan might have returned there. Hara wants you to check it out and then call us in if he's there."

Ordan Minoh: "Doesn't think I can take him on my own eh?"

Ordan and Dana grinned at each other. They both knew that if Vulcan had managed to give Hara trouble then it would be unlikely that either of them would stand much of a chance against him alone.



Ordan stood up and hugged Dana, they pulled apart and looked into each others eyes.

Dana Kowls: "Come back safely. I'll be waiting for you."

Ordan Minoh: "Dana I..."

Dana Kowls: "What?"

Ordan Minoh: "Ah, it can wait. I'll see you later."



Orbit above Bothawui.

Ordan Minoh: "Scan for Vulcan's ship R3, I'll see if I can find us somewhere to land."

R3 gave a short whistle before beginning his scan.

Ordan Minoh: "Hmm, thats odd. They want us to land outside the cities. Place looks desrted to me."

R3 whistled nervously.

Ordan Minoh: "Ah well, I'm sure we can handle it. Let's go."



Ordan slowly lowered his starfighter down onto the planet's surface. They had been directed too land in the middle of nowhere, the only thing Ordan could see was a derelict building sitting far off in the distance.

Ordan Minoh: "Hmm. What a lovely place."



Ordan jumped down from his ship and took a few steps forward, staring out into the dessert.



By the time Jedi Master Ordan Minoh felt the power Dark Side and heard the deadly hiss of an activating lightsaber, it was too late.



The Jedi temple on Tython, four days later.

Dana Kowls: "I'm worried Goruq, he's been gone for four days and we've had no word from him."

Goruq Da watched as Dana continued to pace up and down her room.

Goruq Da: "Ordan is a Jedi Master Dana, I'm sure he can look after himself."

Dana Kowls: "But what if he ran into an army? he could be hurt! I have to find him Goruq!"



Goruq Da: "Go to him Dana. I will cover for you. But you promise you come back safe otherwise I will never forgive myself."

Dana Kowls: "Thank you Goruq! I will, I promise!"



Dana sped to Bothawui, not bothering to check in, she hurried to the location of Ordan's ship.



Hopping on board she saw the ship had been disabled and R3 had been disabled. She quickly reactivated the Droid.

Dana Kowls: "R3, it's Dana! Where is Ordan?"

The droid let out a string of excited beeps. Though Dana did not catch all of R3's description she understood enough to know that R3 had been shut down by a hooded figure.
Dana sighed and looked around for some clue to Ordan's whereabouts.
Her eyes lit up suddenly as they fell upon the remains of a footprint in the sand.



The footprints led Dana to a lonely, derelict building in the middle of the desert. Inside Dana found Ordan chained to the wall.

Dana Kowls: "Ordan!"



Ordan Minoh: "Argh.. Dana... It's a trap.."



The hiss of a lightsaber suddenly cut through the air as a Bothan Sith appeared.

Darth Dreer: "Dana Kowls. We finally meet."

Dana Kowls: "Dreer! What do you want?"

Darth Dreer: "Your heart Dana, I wish to feast on your heart!"



Suddenly two more blades snapped to life as two more Sith appeared behind Dana.

Darth Dreer: "The Mon Calamari is Darth Cartin, the other one is Darth Belgon."



Dana Kowls: "Afraid of fighting me alone Dreer?"

Darth Dreer: "the are merely here to make sureyou and Master Minoh die. I ant to cause your old Master as much pain as possible."



With a snarl Dreer leapt at dana, his blade clashing powerfully against hers. From the corner of her eye Dana could see the two other Sith moving to surround her.



Jumping away from Dreer, Dana spun in the air and turned her blade on Cartin, sensing him to be the weakest of the three Sith.



As his allies charged Dana, Cartin swung for her legs. However, the Jedi Master nimbly jumped over his attack.



As Dana returned to the ground she reversed her grip on her lightsaber and slashed a deep cut in Cartin's back.



Dana barely had time to register the Mon Calamari's death before Dreer was on her again, his attacks raining down upon her defences.



Summoning the Force, Dana threw her lightsaber towards the two Sith. They both grunted as they jumped out of the way.



Darth Belgon: "You throw your blade away girl. You are asking for death!"

Dana Kowls: "I would never throw my weapon away. And I suggest you look behind you."



Dreer spun around to face the full force of Ordan Minoh's twin lightsabers, his chains cut by Dana's lightsaber throw.



Dana's blade snapped back to her hand and she swung at Belgon, causing the Sith to block her attack awkwardly.



With a blast of the Force, Dana threw Belgon back to land painfully beside Ordan.

Ordan Minoh: "Surrender!"



Darth Dreer: "Ha! You may have bested us today little Jedi. But I promise you, one day I will eat you alive!"



Dana and Ordan hurried after the two Sith only to watch them jump on a speeder bike each and disappear into the distance.
Lowering their weapons Dana took Ordan's hand and helped him back to his ship.

Dana Kowls: "And what has this mission taught you Ordan?"

Ordan Minoh: "That you wont be waiting like you said because you're too impatient?"

Dana grinned at Ordan.

Dana Kowls: "Come on. Let's go home."



Ordan Minoh: "Wait, before we go, there was that thing I had to tell you."

Dana Kowls: "Oh right."

Ordan turned around and dropped slowly to one knee.

Ordan Minoh: "Dana, I love you. Will you marry me?"

Dana Kowls smiled, tears stinging her eyes as Ordan finally said what she had been waiting to hear for the past 5 years.

Dana Kowls: "Yes Ordan! Of course I will!"



Comments

 I like it 
  July 25, 2012
Cool episode! Nice ending to top it off. Is that a custom starfighter? I really like it.
  July 18, 2012
The ending is very emotional...congrats to ordan and dana!Oh...wait...I thought jedi were forbidden from having relationships...there was a reason why but I don't remember what it was? Also will there be a sequel?
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  July 16, 2012
A nice turn of events and a cool chapter :) Nice work :D
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  July 13, 2012
Great work Harry!
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  July 13, 2012
Great episode! I don't know why, but I always confused Dana and Nayam. (Maybe because they have the same minifig heads and they both have something to do with Hara). When she wanted be together with Ordan I was shocked, but then I suddely noticed that they're to different persons.
Harry 863
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Admiral Varkov
  July 12, 2012
Fantastic episode! Great fight scene and a romantic ending to top it off!
Harry 863
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Griffin .
  July 12, 2012
Nice episode of Saviours! Cute ending. :)
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  July 12, 2012
Holy crap!!!!!
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  July 12, 2012
Great episode Harry! I put this in Bloodlines 06 and I just wondered if you saw it: "Sweet episode Harry! Great battle scenes and could I have a male human Jedi named Zadok Chain with a green lightsaber and throw whatever else you want to put on him. If you can't make that happen that's fine. Oh yeah, one more thing, if you make him, could he be in Saviors?"
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  July 12, 2012
Nice move Harry. Puttin' in a teeny bit o' romance now eh? XD
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  July 12, 2012
Awwwww!
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  July 12, 2012
I really like this one, Harry! Great job!
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  July 12, 2012
for a second there i thought they were both dead amazing story by the way well i thought the already married
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  July 12, 2012
This is probably my favorite episode! I really like this one! (Grey Jedi was pretty good too :))
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  July 12, 2012
Nice! I like the desert fight scene!
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  July 12, 2012
That was epic and to make it better a marridge
 I made it 
  July 12, 2012
Quoting Republic Commander good story plot I see you got saesee tiin's starfighter I am going to wait until it goes down in price, but I really want the malevolence :-)
Yeah I really want to get the Old Republic sets
 I like it 
  July 12, 2012
good story plot I see you got saesee tiin's starfighter I am going to wait until it goes down in price, but I really want the malevolence :-)
 
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