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Toa Nebelung(v4): The Marksman
My self moc, i hope this is the final version. I'm gonna write a bio! (NEW)THEME SONG: Set The World On Fire by Black Veil Brides
About this creation

There once was a caring mother named Rhea. She had a child with the leader of the Toa Eden, Lycaon. A war was raging, her hometown was being destroyed. She hoped Lycaon would save her, but his second in command ran into her house and told her the terrible news. Lycaon was killed in action. She was devestated. She knew they would die in the house so she attempted to run away to Province City to be safe.

Half way there a Makuta ran into them. He circled the mother and her child, spitting swears and taunts at the mother. She started begging the Makuta to spare them, but the Makuta had no mercy. He decapitated Rhea with his scythe.

Just as the Makuta was going to kill the baby, the second in command of the Toa Eden slashed the Makuta's arm off and the Makuta flew away. The Toa saw the baby and took him to his home and cared for the baby and raised him up, along with his own baby son, Shaedeon. The Toa didn't know the baby's name so he named him Nebelung(from the German word Nebel, which means mist) after he saved the baby in the mist.

Nebelung has always had an interest in rifles, and as a teenager, he started shooting cans with a sniper he "borrowed" from the Toa armory. He seemed to have a talent with sniping and started shooting from 650yds. A Toa marksman spotted him and gave him a Kanohi Sanok. Being of Asukanian blood, he heightened the ability of the mask(Asukanians are able to use the true potential of a Kanohi and then some)and became the best sniper in Province City.

At the age of 18, all of the Toa Eden retired to Turaga and Nebelung and Shaedeon started the new Toa Eden. As soon as he became a Toa, he swore to get vengance on the Makuta who killed his mother.





With mah kitteh





FPS

The Sniper(inspired by Banjax)



Fourth Wall: I really had fun with this build. I also like how he came out. HIS ARMS ARE SKINNY BECAUSE I WAS GOING FOR A SLIM SNIPER LOOK. I think I achieved that. I might have to post the next part of the series next week cuz I had to take pieces from my other mocs and my cousins are coming over for a few days. MAKE THIS GUY MY MOST POPULAR CREATION!!!



Comments

 I like it 
  September 4, 2012
this is an amazing moc! i love your sniper rifle design!
 I made it 
  August 2, 2012
Quoting 12Lego Greendude Epic self-moc bro! Love the monochrome look on this guy and I think you captured the sniper look excellently! Can't say anything to improve really :) All I can say is that it's a lot different that Tarshduk XD Excellent!
Thanks man!!!
 I like it 
  August 2, 2012
Epic self-moc bro! Love the monochrome look on this guy and I think you captured the sniper look excellently! Can't say anything to improve really :) All I can say is that it's a lot different that Tarshduk XD Excellent!
 I like it 
  July 26, 2012
Nice!
  July 25, 2012
I just realized... Those are HF pieces on his thighs! =O
 I like it 
  July 22, 2012
Awsome i really like body and arms. Great job.
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  July 16, 2012
nice moc, he has a nice build to him, and the coffin song by black veil brides is good to!!!!!
 I made it 
  July 13, 2012
Quoting Patrick Mont Cookie!!!! I think I know who the Makuta is...(won't spoil if I'm right, is it the first one you made?)
You are correct my good man
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  July 12, 2012
This is amazing have you ever been to Brickfair if so will you be there this year?
 I like it 
  July 12, 2012
Cookie!!!! I think I know who the Makuta is...(won't spoil if I'm right, is it the first one you made?)
 I like it 
  July 12, 2012
Very cool!
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  July 12, 2012
Beast work like the sniper I would get rid of the blue pin though...well any way awesome again and glad to know I inspired you(yeah I was thinking about making adaptive onuas mask a sanok but with the mask change banjax can just shoot people through walls n stuff) and I'll just say banjax has metal bullets so he can be really accurate by using his element on the bullet anyway enough rambling great work.
 I like it 
  July 12, 2012
Nice job here! The story kinda reminds me of how Red Skull's life went (from Marvel Comics) except he's parents deaths were a little more inappropriate, so I'd rather not share it.
 I like it 
  July 12, 2012
Very nice, the backstory and build are pretty awesome.
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  July 12, 2012
I like this! The all-black look, the gun, the proportions, etc. The only problem I have is the bio. As I used to love the bionicle fanfic forum years back, I've seen loads of bios like these. It's a little old. =/ Other than that, I like this guy!
 I like it 
  July 12, 2012
great job
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  July 12, 2012
Looks sweet!
 
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