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Nergetia's Will - Attack
Stage One.
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Emergency. Emergency. Please leave the Palace inmediately. Follow the guards to a safe place. Emergency. Emergency. Please leave...



Neaboros: What happens!? Someone! Tell me inmediately!



Neaboros: Commander Ao-Rye! Commander Galor! Explain me the situation! What's the emergency?
Commander Ao-Rye: It seems we're under attack, sir!
Commander Galor: An explosive was detonated on the hall, Royal Counselor. The troops are searching for more bombs and looking after the wounded.



Neaboros: Damn! It can't be possible! Commander Ao-Rye, go to the hall and bring me all the information you can!
Commander Ao-Rye: Yes, sir!



Neaboros: Commander Galor! Go to the Throne Room and search Their Majesties! Protect them no matter how! If something happens to the Queen...
???: That won't be necessary, Neaboros.



Neaboros: Majesties! You shouldn't be here! Please leave the palace inmediately!
Koraune: Please calm yourself. We're fine.
Karauna: Dear Commander, may you explain us the situation?



Commander Galor: Of course, ma'am. It seems that some minutes ago a bomb exploded on the main hall. Our troops are searching the responsible and if there're more explosives on the building.



Karauna: This is a problem. Criminals' punishment is secundary. Please, order your troops to search the remaining people on the rest of the Palace. Then go and take the Nergetia Sceptre.
Koraune:I'll look after protecting the Queen, don't worry.



Commander Galor: As you command, Queen!
Neaboros: We count on you.



Neaboros: Their Majesties, please leave the building inmediately. It may be another explosion.



Koraune:You should look more after yourself, Neaboros. We will be all right.
Karauna: Yes, Neaboros. We won't leave the building until we make sure we're the last here.



Neaboros: What are you saying? Your lives are the most important! You must go to a safe place right now!



Karauna: What kind of Queen I would be if I left my people behind for my own security? No, Neaboros. I'm sorry, but I'm not going anywhere.
Koraune: I think like Karauna. I'll stay here until then. If something happens, I'll protect her.



Neaboros: You two must be kidding, right...?
Surait: Hey! Counselor! Their Majesties! Are you all right?



Neaboros: Vagabond!? Why are you still here!? You should have alredy left the building!
Surait: I was on the Royal Library when all this row started. I thought that something happens to Karauna again, so I came here as fast as I could. But it seems that I was wrong...



Neaboros: You won't be at this rate. Their Majesties insist on stay here until everyone is out of the building.
Koraune: Don't be so annoying, Neaboros. It's our duty as rulers of this world. We must set the example.
Surait: But Neaboros is right, Koraune. Your lives are very important to this planet. Both of you should leave now.



Neaboros: Hmmm?
Koraune: It seems that the emergency is finished.
Surait: It seems it. We're lucky.



Commander Ao-Rye: Counselor, it seems we've found a responsible.



Commander Ao-Rye: Keep walking. Don't stop.
Daimaeron: Hey! There isn't need of pushing! I can walk by myself!



Surait: Oh Goddess, no... Not again...
Neaboros: CHALLENGER!? YOU AGAIN!? WHAT HAPPENS TO YOU!?



Daimaeron: Neaboros, it isn't what it seems! I'm not culprit!



Surait: Hope you're not. Could you explain, Daimaeron?
Koraune: Calm down, buddy.
Neaboros: I'm going to kill him...
Karauna: Please, Challenger, explain yourself. What happened?



Daimaeron: Well, I arrived at the Palace, and saw a box in the middle of the hall. It had a card that said 'For the Queen'. The box was similar to the last one, so I decided to burn it. It exploded when I did it...



Commander Ao-Rye: I think it must be true. The soldiers on the hall didn't try to stop him before the explosion, and when we found them wounded, they didn't blame Daimaeron for the incident.
Daimaeron: Yes! Thanks for support me, dude!



Neaboros: Not so fast, Daimaeron. You still are the main suspect.
Koraune: The Counselor is right. You're the only involved one on the mysterious boxes' issue.



Daimaeron: D'oh... This happens to me for being a good person...
Commander Ao-Rye: Yeah, sure.



Commander Galor: Her Majesty Karauna!
Daimaeron: ?
Commander Ao-Rye: ?



Commander Galor: Troops have found this on the hall. It seems that inside was the explosive.
Daimaeron: Ah, that's the box I burned!



Neaboros: Well done. Now we can give it to the Analysis and determine who's the real culprit. Where he is?



Surait: Since he finished about studying Karauna's evolution, he came back to his laboratory two days ago.
Neaboros: ... Great.



Koraune: In that case, we don't have time to lose. If can choose, I prefer to lend this on the less people as possible. Neaboros, you will go to to the Laboratory and give Veore the box. I trust you the most. I want the results on three days, at the very late.
Neaboros: But, His Majesty, I should stay here organizing all this mess...!



Koraune: Don't dare to disobey me. I can afford the organization. Commander Galor, please prepare the things for the Counselor's travel. Commander Ao-Rye, please go with Daimaeron to the cells. I'm sorry, Challenger, but it's my duty.
Neaboros: ... As you order...
Surait: I'll go with you, if you don't mind, Neaboros.



Commander Galor: As you order, My King.
Daimaeron: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!?
Commander Ao-Rye:You heard it.



Neaboros: Will you do it?
Surait: Why not? I don't have much to do here, and if I'm going to stay, I prefer do it doing something... And I love travel, you know.
Koraune:Well then. I will be waiting news from you two.
Karauna: Take care, my dears.

Daimaeron: Man... I hate mondays...
Commander Ao-Rye: Yeah, me too. Keep walking.















Now... Let's go...











...to see that guy.




Comments

 I like it 
  August 26, 2012
Cool story bro...JK, Seriously, It's really good keep going!
L.A. Miranda
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  July 16, 2012
Thats awesome already!
 I like it 
  July 16, 2012
This is a really great start! Hope to see more!
 
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