Hellow Fellow MOCers, Latley I've noticed a lot of people have there own Storyline, some star wars, some Historic, etc. etc. etc.
Now I bring you my own, Its got bits of Star Wars, and bits of regular Sci-Fi, Enjoy and remember to rate and comment
About this creation
-Stardate, 28-12-2368. Well, first off, this planet that i've recently landed on, Torenzax VI, is nothing more than a scrapheap of not only the buildings, but of the people too, every corner I turn, someone is smoking a large Jaaf-pipe, polluting the air with their filth. Enough about this crap-hole of a world. I arrived here two days ago with word that a Republic General needs to speak with me, Why? I'm not sure, but i assume its a job, after all, I am a bounty hunter. Lets just hope the pays well...-
I landed on this rundown planet two days ago, got here by my ship, "The Stricken Purge"
I'm walking towards the location the Genreral wanted me to meet him at, great, some rundown bar in the slums of the capital city, how original.
I pass a Yibazinian taking a stroll, in the slums? odd.
I walk into the bar, the smell of the Man at the corners pipe, wavering through the air.
I walk into the back corner of the bar, where the "nicer" crowd, hangs out, and by that, I mean the group of people who don't want to knock your teeth out for no reason.
There is a Vorkiz Male at the bar, enjoying a drink, and thers a couple humans too, A smuggler playing a game of Burst, and a patron watching him.
I walk over to the bar
Tender: What can I gets ya?
Baron: One Torrns.
Tender: Coming right up.
Tender: That'll be Five Credits
Baron: Here, keep the change.
To my right, a game of Burst is going on,(Burst is a game played in most bars in my series, the goal is to hit the middle of a target without aiming using a 2-3 round burst pistol)
The Smuggler tries to line up his shot,
but he misses
I realize that my client is sitting in the booth behinf me, so I approach the table and sit down.
???: Baron, glad to see you could make it?
Baron: Glad to see I could make it? I've been stuck here for two days waiting for you to come and give me my job and my money!
???: Now ,now, calm down there son. I have a job for you.
Baron: What is it?
???: You see, the Jedi are expieriencing some problems with a Jedi Knight, bottom line, hes gone rouge. And thats where you come in, You are the best out there that we could get, we need your expertise and skills to track and hunt down this man. The up front pay is 10,000 credits, with an additional 15,000 for the Jedi. So do we have a deal?
Baron:(thinks for a moment)....General, this looks like the start to a beautiful friendship.
???: Haha! Glad to see you agree, Meet us on Bespin for further news and reports.
So....the Hunt has begun.