Wow, this might be a good MOC- *scrolls down* O_o, that's a little personal...

@lego, Thanks! (mein Gott I hate this mac keyboard! It took me four tries just to write thanks! >=O) On the ball-joints, unless lego starts to make them in black again, I can't really change them out D= @millenium, First off, excuse me for spelling your name wrong (did I?). I hate this new mac's keyboard and spellcheck. Second, on the sharpied mask... Lego never made a bunch of silver masks, and technically, her mask should be a silver kaukau, but I don't have one of those, and I'm not spending money to get just one mask. Besides, I think the silver huna looks fine. I know (and respect) that you don't like "painted" masks, but true to what someone (can't remember his use name >_<) said below, "Try to go with a specific theme." Trying to go with a smooth armor theme, which the v2 version (which I don't have a camera to upload at the moment) carries this theme on. Having the silver(or gunmetal) kaukau would both throw off the color scheme, and wouldn't look nice on Sehrii in my opinion.

This is excellent! My only gripe is that you sharpied a mask. Change that into something else and this will be amazing!!

Great moc! The colors are great and the build is excellent. I think that the red is a bit distracting from the color scheme and so maybe eliminate that, but hey, that's your choice :) This moc is great :)

Hahaha, I should! But, Sehrii took up ALL of my ball joints and technic connectors, so I can't make any more in this style D=

WOW! are you gonna build more mocs in this style? i think you should, anyway, awesome moc dude! your best one yet!

Would you guys believe that I spent most of yesterday figuring out how to fix what you guys told me to fix!? =O

Stuff to do, joyous! =D On the red ball joints, those are the most joints I have, so I can't change them out, hiding them probably is going to take some time, but I might end up finding a way. As for the the pieces? I'll find some parts at some point to change it all with, but I often just pick up whatever would fit on the MOC and use that first. And no, it doesn't offend me. Too often I see "cool moc" or something really plain and simple. Criticism please!

well the main thing is that the MOC isn't ordered in the least. It has spikey parts, angular technic and smooth parts everywhere. you need a little more order in it. Pick a theme or look and stay with it. you should also fill in all the gaps in the limbs. Speaking of limbs in regards to the arms they shouldn't have stuff sticking off them so straiten those out. as a last thing you should try to either remove or hide the red ball joints. Please don't take this as an insult, I'd hate to offend you.

You might have to define yourself a little better... What in specific should I change up? I'm not the best with these custom limbs and such, and I'm still getting the hang on the "MOCpages style" that is, custom everything and greebles. =/

This MOC has some nice parts but overall it's just kind of...ugly. You may want to straiten some things up and smooth it out a little.

Arm/leg porportions are little concern to me. Look at BIONICLE throughtout the years, proportions do not truly exist. Feet are not always supposed to be large, but I would like to make some sort of shoes for her, as I do love that foot design.

Which kind of tires? I wasn't able to get mine to fit. =/

Nice job! Very Fe-Mocy! (Yep. I just came up with dat.)

hahahaha, cool to see my own designs actually work out in something. The waist though, was armored by tyres to give it some more bulk.

Very nice Toa ya got there! She even has abs! ABS! (like Likus)! My only real negative thing is the wonky arm proportions and the small feet. For V2, I'd recommend either shorter arms or longer legs. Very good MOC though!