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Montu, The Unwanted Hero
Guten Tahg, people! Just got back from Frankfurt, in Germany, and decided to post a new MOC! This is Montu, The Toa of plasma, and an important Character in my story.
About this creation
The Original version

Name: Montu
Gender: Male
Species: Matoran/Toa
Element: Plasma/Shadow
Tools: Plasma Sword, Kanohi Kakama, mask of speed.
Personality: Montu keeps his emotions on a tight reign, and he doesn't like keeping people close, in fear they will catch his "sickness". The only exeption to this is Cilla.
History: What is known of Montu's past is scetchy at best. The first recorded sighting of him was when he was already a Toa. He was kidnapped by a Dark Hunter named Les Tenebres, and was experimented upon by his employer, Makuta Aroxion. These experiments are the reason for half of his body being covered in shadow energy. He was put in a cell to await execution, until he was rescued by a Toa named Cilla and a Makuta named Rugaki.
Whilst with these two and a renegade Makuta called "Light Aroxion", he was infected by an alien parasite called "the Leech". The beast manipulated him and transformed him into a monsterous Rahi. It was only with Cilla's help that Montu was liberated from the Leech's hold, and he was restored to his original self. Les Tenebres returned to kill Montu, but the Toa managed to defeat and kill the Hunter. Montu was officially stripped of his Title by the Order of Mata Nui, for breaking the Toa code. Montu redeamed himself by helping to Defeat Makuta Aroxion, and stop him from claiming the Spear of Strengh, a sacred and powerful artifact.
The four of them lived happily in the ancient city of Nolybas, until much later, when Makuta Soldok and Makuta Bestox of the Sombrak entered and engaged in combat with them. Montu and company were winning, until Bestox stabbed Rugaki in the heart and killed her. "Light Aroxion" also seemed to be struck down and killed, forcing him and Cilla to retreat. They met with Toa Parah and Toa Galika and moved into Racta Major, where they found that "Light Aroxion" was still alive. Montu accompanied Toa Raxonax, Toa Benu and Toa Parah into Racta Minus, where they met Soka, who gave Parah the Elemental Staff of Stone. Montu gathered with the rest of the Toa at the gates of Racta Major and battled the Sombrak here. Montu battled Makuta Reshak along with Toa Benu and Toa Raxonax; the group overwhelmed the Makuta and forced him to retreat.

After the battle, Montu discovered that "Light Aroxion" had perished. He and Cilla decided to remain in Racta Major, mourning the loss of both Rugaki and "Light Aroxion".


An Overview of the MOC. I tried to even out the Orange/red and black a little bit more than in the last verson. Tell me what you think. You think the colours are balanced more?

The back. At least you can tell the body's custom :D

Legs. They aren't custom, but I do like these. The bigger feet mean that he can stand up better :D

Body. Like the detail? YUMMY DETAIL!

Pure arm. Same as usual, except the sword and there's an extra spike on his shoulder.

Currupted arm.

Face. Same as always :D







With Cilla (She has since been upgraded :D)

With Jordan 2444 Lordanian

I made a more recent upgrade of Lordanian. You like, Legofreak?

BONUS!
A bird.

A matoran can ride it.... I don't know what more to say :P

That's all, folks!!! :D :D :D :D



Comments

 I made it 
  August 2, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Hey, nice updates! Much better than V1. I like the torso, and the bird is cool too. Keep on MOCing! :)
thanks :D
 I made it 
  August 2, 2012
Quoting Chopperskull ! colors work well and the body is really nice. But I don't like the head (The mask is fine) and I know you can cover everythign on the head and not show the grey. Also, I think the back could use some work, and try covering the shoulder designs. But I know you worked well on this, so just trying to give a bit of advice. But it's a really nice moc ;)
CC is always appreciated. But I'm not sure how I should cover the head...
 I made it 
  August 2, 2012
Quoting Rennoc ~ Pretty good moc! The colors are balanced out nicely, but I think the torso is a tad bit long.
Really? It looks normal to me... But thanks :D
 I like it 
  August 1, 2012
Hey, nice updates! Much better than V1. I like the torso, and the bird is cool too. Keep on MOCing! :)
 I like it 
  August 1, 2012
colors work well and the body is really nice. But I don't like the head (The mask is fine) and I know you can cover everythign on the head and not show the grey. Also, I think the back could use some work, and try covering the shoulder designs. But I know you worked well on this, so just trying to give a bit of advice. But it's a really nice moc ;)
 I like it 
  August 1, 2012
Pretty good moc! The colors are balanced out nicely, but I think the torso is a tad bit long.
 
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