My entry for the Alternate selfMOC contest. In category #2, Hordika. Here's hoping!
About this creation
Hallo. Sorry about the bad pics... It was another rough day. I been having a lot of those recently lol.
The Alternate SelfMOC Contest
The original Esh and Aivren
Here they are! I might want to start to explain myself a little bit here. Aivren has been turned into a Hordika, but because of Esh's state as an already Hordika type being I made him into a normal Toa. If that ruffles a few feathers you can just count Aivren as my entry, or you can disqualify me. I simply don't care which. I had fun building these guys to the prompt and that is all I care about. Do what you will judges.
Aivren. I do really like his look. I tried to make him look like a deformed skeleton type thing covered in armor. How did I do?
Semi-Action pose!
Staring at you...
A pic without the shield.
Legs.
Torso, with armored heartlight!
Come at me bro.
Hyah!
Blocking.
Stabbing.
*Insert evil laughter here*
Looking epic.
Um, Bro, can I go now?
I know the limbs are simple, but I LOVE that torso.
Back.
A closed look at the torso. I love this thing for several reasons.
Here is one of them. Covered heartlight like his brother.
A better view.
Contemplating.
Ready for a fight.
Kick! I dont really like this kind of pose, but I guess it shows stability in a MOC.
'Nother staring contest lol.
Duel!
Hey, hey, hey. Hold the phone malone, who are these guys?
Have we been replaced?!
I don't think so Esh... If we had I should think that our replacements would look nicer...
Esh and Esh.
Aivren and Aivren.
Grrr.
Hyah!
*Shink*
*Smash*
*Thud*
Humph.
Teach him to attack a Garden warrior.
Everyone together.
Creator's Comments: Well, these guys were a really fun build. As a I said before if Esh is not satisfactory to the judges you can either not count him as part of it or you can disqualify me. I don't care which.
Also, I discovered a small fortune of orange pieces, as evidenced by alternate Esh's surplus of orange and none missing from normal Esh, So I'll be updating Esh with those pieces soon. :)
Note: These have no story importance. They were merely for the contest, they have no significance.
Thanks for viewing! :)
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November 17, 2012 |
Quoting Garrett A.
These guys are pretty good! I like the look they have to them, and custom torsos are always a good idea. I haven't built a BioMOC in forever, maybe once I get my collection sorted. *dun dun dun DUNNNN! XD* I'll be checking out some others of your MOCs, you seem to be a good BioMOCcer. Incidentally, would you check out some of my HF builds? I have like, ten built, but I haven't posted many. It doesn't help that I'm feeling rather under the weather. And one more thing: congrats for reading all of this rambling on XD! Thank you. Good luck with the sorting! I know how terrifyingly fun that can be XD I can't agree that I think I'm very good at this stuff, I'm terribly self-effacing, but I do appreciate the flattery. =) I'll check them out now. :) believe me when I say I get that under the weather thing! XD Thanks, do I get a cookie? :3
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November 11, 2012 |
Much better with proportions and colouring. |
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August 20, 2012 |
Quoting Toa Jaton
Nice job.9/10.Esh is nice too,but I'm not counting him as part of the entry. Ooo, wow. I expected a much worse score XD Okeyday, I expected as much.
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August 20, 2012 |
Nice job.9/10.Esh is nice too,but I'm not counting him as part of the entry. |
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August 13, 2012 |
Quoting Toa Jaton
Esh looks nice but I'm only counting Airven as the entry.Judging coming soon. I figured that would be the turn out here. Here's hoping!
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Esh looks nice but I'm only counting Airven as the entry.Judging coming soon. |
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Suspicious Chicken August 8, 2012 |
Awesome stuff! I like both of them, the only thing I'd change are the one-brick lower legs of the of Esh. If it's not custom, I'd at least add some armor or greebles for good measure. |
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August 8, 2012 |
Quoting Suspicious Chicken
Awesome stuff! I like both of them, the only thing I'd change are the one-brick lower legs of the of Esh. If it's not custom, I'd at least add some armor or greebles for good measure.
Thank you. I know, but that Esh is currently destroyed, no more, torn to bits, goose eggs. I ran out of good pieces to use when building too so that didn't help lol. |
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August 8, 2012 |
Quoting Realm Creations
This is what I lovr about your creations. You always find a way to make new body deigns, and make it look very unusual in a good way :D Great mocs, I finished revamping some of mine,too. Thank you, I do enjoy coming up with new designs but its usually because I get bored with other ones I make lol. I saw that, you are getting very good at buffing MOCs up.
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August 8, 2012 |
This is what I lovr about your creations. You always find a way to make new body deigns, and make it look very unusual in a good way :D Great mocs, I finished revamping some of mine,too. |
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August 8, 2012 |
This is what I lovr about your creations. You always find a way to make new body deigns, and make it look very unusual in a good way :D Great mocs, I finished revamping some of mine,too. |
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August 8, 2012 |
Quoting Saunax Toa of Steam
Cool! Aivren is my fav, both the original and hordika. i agree the torso of Esh is great, but maybe his legs are a tad thin? anyway great job on these, i hope to be as good as you someday! :) Thank you. Yes, they are, but that Esh is lying in a pile of pieces at the moment so how I can change him is kinda moot. XD
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August 8, 2012 |
Cool! Aivren is my fav, both the original and hordika. i agree the torso of Esh is great, but maybe his legs are a tad thin? anyway great job on these, i hope to be as good as you someday! :) |
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August 8, 2012 |
Cool! Aivren is my fav, both the original and hordika. i agree the torso of Esh is great, but maybe his legs are a tad thin? anyway great job on these, i hope to be as good as you someday! :) |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting 12Lego Greendude
Awesome :) They both look awesome :) Thank you, glad you like them :)
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August 7, 2012 |
Awesome :) They both look awesome :) |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting Toa Infernum
@ Gale Aww, this sounds like a fun fun contest. Too bad I didn't know about it till now and I'm leaving for vacation today. :( Bummer, I only heard about it a few days ago do this was kinda last minute XD enjoy vacation though :)
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@ Gale Aww, this sounds like a fun fun contest. Too bad I didn't know about it till now and I'm leaving for vacation today. :( |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting Talonmagic ~
Cool! Nice alternate versions! Thank you, as much for the fav as for the kind words :)
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August 7, 2012 |
Cool! Nice alternate versions! |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting av matoran
these are both very good,but I like the original better LOL, that's good because the originals will be staying around, these guys will not XD
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting Terilis the Dark Angel
Dang flabbit! I can't even build my normal self-moc! It's like I'm in a self-moc block, I can build other stuff just fine. Help. Aivren is Brickin' amazing, the extra arms add effect. Esh's legs seem a tad thin, work on those would be good. O.o you can't? That's strange because I remember commenting on it XD I don't know how to help, but I will say that you should just build what is like you. A selfMOC, in my humble opinion, is an expression of you, your personality, and your feelings. I'm glad you like these guys though, and yes the legs at thin but he will most likely be a pile o' pieces by tomorrow lol.
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August 7, 2012 |
these are both very good,but I like the original better |
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August 7, 2012 |
Dang flabbit! I can't even build my normal self-moc! It's like I'm in a self-moc block, I can build other stuff just fine. Help. Aivren is Brickin' amazing, the extra arms add effect. Esh's legs seem a tad thin, work on those would be good. |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting Toa Infernum
Neato! I love Hordika Aivren! I like Esh's covered torso. I might enter this contest... :) Thank you. If you do enter, HURRY!! The deadline is in two days lol. Good luck to ya if you try!
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August 7, 2012 |
Neato! I love Hordika Aivren! I like Esh's covered torso. I might enter this contest... :) |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting juan calle
very cool Thank you.
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August 7, 2012 |
very cool |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting L.A. Miranda
You have worked on them in a marvelous way, I really like them. Maybe the limbs or Esh are simple, as you said, but they only need a bit more of armor on the inside. However, I must say that I can't see a real Hordika look on them. Only a bit on Aivren, but it resembles me more a mutant Toa than a Rahi Warrior. Well, good luck! <3 Thank you. Well there is a reason for that, I originally made them for the dark Toa/Makuta category but it was too full so I chose this one. I figured they would work well enough with this category without too many changes. But either way, I had fun building them so I'm happy.
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You have worked on them in a marvelous way, I really like them. Maybe the limbs or Esh are simple, as you said, but they only need a bit more of armor on the inside. However, I must say that I can't see a real Hordika look on them. Only a bit on Aivren, but it resembles me more a mutant Toa than a Rahi Warrior. But I love him, seriously, specially the torso and shoulders! Well, good luck! <3 |
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August 7, 2012 |
Quoting Deimos MOF
They both look really nice. good job! Thank you.
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August 7, 2012 |
They both look really nice. good job! |
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