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Kesef, Guardian of the North Gate
Well, another story MOC today. Enjoy :)
About this creation
"Kesef... For his age he is one of the best warriors I've ever known as well as the wisest. He is often quiet, only choosing to speak when he has something of value to say. He... While he hides something from his time before the Calling he is one of the most trust worthy people I have known. He also has denied any place among the tribes. Though the Lights' have offered, as have many others, Kesef says he belongs to all and none."

Name: Kesef (Key-siv)
Gender: Male
Species: Unknown
Element: Unknown, Seems To Control Both Several and None
Kanohi: Altered Kamukaw, Great Mask of Emotions
Powers: Unknown
Personality: Kind Hearted, Wise, Quiet, Old Fashioned, Sometimes Viewed as Cold and Emotionless, Generally a Fun Joker
Weapons: Staff, Shield, Death Stare
Bio:
He slammed the door behind him as he came in. Kesef could only manage three steps before he dropped to his knees.
This is it, He thought, They will be here tomorrow...
He had managed to save his sister, she was going to be safe from what was coming for him. She hadn't wanted to leave, but her friend had taken Kesef's side and helped him convince her.
How did it get to this....
Tomorrow he would be dead...
Knowing the exact moment when you were going to die was a scary thing. It really made you look back at what you have done over your life. Kesef hated his look back. He had almost gotten himself killed several times trying to provide for his family after his dad was killed. Nothing of what he did to support them was right or even legal. But he did what he had to.
Now, so many years later it was catching up to him.
At least... He couldn't finish the thought as he heard something coming from another room.
He instinctively drew a knife from his belt and quickly and quietly rose to his feet.
"You can put that away, Kesef. I've been waiting for you."
Kesef sighed at his own jump-y-ness over ever little sound. he should have recognised his best friend's scent.
Malia stepped out from the doorway.
"Where is she going?" She asked.
Malia held a knife in her hand as well, showing that she too was on edge.
"I don't know where he plans on taking Adela, but she will be safe. Between him and his brother, she couldn't trip over a stump if she wanted." Kesef said. He felt partially relieved by just hearing this confirmation.
Malia nodded, a slight smile appearing on her face. Any levity in the air at this point in time was a welcome change.
Malia walked over to Kesef, she lifted his head up from his gaze at the floor and looked into his green eyes.
"Are you ready for what's coming tomorrow?" She asked.
Kesef looked into Malia's dark blue eyes. She knew he was. He had been ready for it the moment he was born.
A slight smile broadened across Malia's face.
"Your on first watch. Just because they're supposed be here tomorrow doesn't mean that a scout can't come early." Malia said with an almost laugh in her voice. She walked out of the room without another word.
Kesef knew she was going to the back room to get some sleep. In five hours he would wake her and she would watch for anyone who spelled troubled, while he slept.
Kesef turned around to look out the window, but he did not see it. He did not see anything. Nothing but a pure, unbroken white landscape spread out before him.
He quickly turned around. Nothing but white.
"Malia!" he screamed.
Nothing.
"How... What..." Words escaped Kesef. he didn't understand how he could just disappear like that.
"Do not worry Kesef. You and your friend are fine." A calming voice said.
Kesef jumped at the sound drawing his knife.
Laughter erupted from everywhere around him. Though Kesef could sense it was but one voice.
"You have nothing to worry about Kesef. I mean you only good." The voice said again.
"Where are you?!" Kesef screamed, anger, confusion, and pain hang heavy on his voice.
He heard laughter again. This time it came from only one direction. Behind him.
Kesef whipped around ready to jump, or counter any attack coming his way.
"I'm right here." Said the small white being standing twenty feet away from him.
Kesef blinked. This being looked as a child. Yet his voice seemed to carry as an old man.
"What have you done to me?" Kesef asked. Anger was still hanging in his voice.
"I have called you."
Kesef looked at the being with a stupefied look.
"You and your people know me by the name of Esuras. But where I need you, I am known as Elohm."
Kesef's eyes went wide.
Esuras?! No...
"Yes. I am he. I am known by many names throughout many universes. But soon you shall know me as Elohm."
The being then held up his hand. It seemed to be guiding behind Kesef.
Kesef turned and saw an opening in the white that lead to what appeared to be a forest.
Kesef turned back to the being.
"Esuras... Why? And what of Malia?"
The being sighed.
"I have need of your strength in this world. Malia will be okay. You will see her again before your time is over. Trust me. Now go! They wait for you! It is a special day in My Garden!" The being said. A joyous laughter seemed to hang on his words.
Kesef turned back to the opening.
He ran.
Within seconds he was through and stood amid a large mass of people. The people began to cheer. Two beings moved through the crowd towards him.
When they finally broke through the last layer of cheering people he could see that they were orange and green. The orange one reached out a hand.
"Hello." The orange being said with a smile.
"Hi." Kesef returned, almost having to shout to be heard over the noise of the crowd.
"My name is Esh. I am very happy you have arrived. We all have much to show you!" The orange being said, the smile on his face growing.
Kesef shook his hand and introduced himself. When he spoke his name Both beings gave a slight look at each other, but quickly turned back to Kesef.
When Kesef looked down at himself he could see that he looked different. Very different.
The green being, the one apparently known as Aivren laughed.
"Happened to all of us kid. We are changed to provide maximum use of the energy within us." He explained.
"What is this place?" Kesef asked.

Eight thousand years. That was how long he had been in the Garden. Yet every day seemed to be new and as exciting as the first. Kesef had grown to love this place. Though the Changing had shaken things in the Garden up a bit it was still home.
Every once in a while Kesef thought of his past, his sister, Malia too. He missed them, but he was certain that he would see them again. He often asked Elohm, a name he had taken quite a bit of time to get used to, about them. Elohm would tell him how they are and sometimes, He would show Kesef them in the Lake. Besides this he kept most of his previous life a secret from everyone in the Garden. It was not that he didn't trust them, it was that he simply did not wish for them to know.
Kesef, as Guardian of the North Gate, is one of few people who is familiar with the Field. The area outside the Garden's outer edges in which perpetual storm clouds hung above. He is also one of few people to have been into and back out of the black forest. Though it has been a while since he had been in there as the oncoming war loomed heavily and movement seemed to be multiplying within the edges of the black forest...


Whew... On to the photos!




Standing because he is just that epic.



Front.



Back.



Legs. I quite like these despite simplicity.



Torso. My favorite part. I love this thing. I do wish to mention that Oblivious the Hero has used a similar design, and while I guarantee that this is my own design, I will give him credit for the basic idea.



Inside of arms.



Outside of arms.



Pose!



Blocking.



Come at me.



Raising to strike.



Strike!



For Elohm!



The classic me pose.



Pose without weapons. Because really, an epic MOC doesn't need weapons to kick butt.



Fists.



Final shot.


Creator's Comments: Well, since this is a repost, or update of the old, I can't rightly remember what I had here. But, I do want to suggest that You should listen to Dark Horses by Switchfoot as you're looking at this. Might make it that much more awesome.

Auf Wiedersehen!








Comments

 I made it 
  December 6, 2012
Quoting John-117 Gonzalez Could you please show some torso concepts? I will give you credit.
Umm, while I am thrilled you asked about this one, it being still one of my favorite MOCs I've made; an opinion evidenced by the fact that he is still alive, I probably will not do that. I apologize, but it is simply something I do not have the time for.
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  December 6, 2012
Could you please show some torso concepts? I will give you credit.
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  September 3, 2012
Quoting ~Oblivious the hero Hey ! It's my torso design ! Otherwise, cool MOC
Oh geez! I'm sorry! I knew that it felt familiar when I built it, but I couldn't think why. I assure you it is my own design, but I'll credit you anyway :)
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  September 3, 2012
Hey ! It's my torso design ! Otherwise, cool MOC
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  August 17, 2012
Quoting David Alexander Smith The posing on this one is a lot of fun. Great armoured feel too.
Thank you, as much for the fav as for the kind words :)
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  August 17, 2012
The posing on this one is a lot of fun. Great armoured feel too.
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  August 16, 2012
Quoting Wertman 8 Hi, I'm sorry, MOCpages isn't letting me reply to your comment about Neatchat. It's just a chatting Website. You can Join in other people's convo's by clicking on their link, or create your own chat here: http://www.neatchat.com/ Nice MOC, btw :)
Oh, ok. I'll look into it more. Thank you.
 I like it 
  August 16, 2012
Hi, I'm sorry, MOCpages isn't letting me reply to your comment about Neatchat. It's just a chatting Website. You can Join in other people's convo's by clicking on their link, or create your own chat here: http://www.neatchat.com/ Nice MOC, btw :)
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  August 13, 2012
Quoting toa olympios taylor snowden Oh plus the torso at the least would have been perfect for an onukira revamp just with more black.
Onukira? I'm not sure what that is...
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  August 13, 2012
Quoting toa olympios taylor snowden Awesomeness!!!!! And this is only one example as to why I faved you.
Thank you. I'm glad then, I'd hate to be a one hit wonder XD
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  August 13, 2012
Quoting Terilis the Dark Angel Fanfiction is a website where you write... fanfictions. Fictional stories about a fictional series that you are a fan of. I'm writing one right now, titled "The Dark Angel". Guess what that's about, lol.
LOL I can't imagine what that's about XD hmm, I'll think about it, but no garuntees lol.
  August 13, 2012
Oh plus the torso at the least would have been perfect for an onukira revamp just with more black.
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  August 13, 2012
Awesomeness!!!!! And this is only one example as to why I faved you.
  August 13, 2012
Fanfiction is a website where you write... fanfictions. Fictional stories about a fictional series that you are a fan of. I'm writing one right now, titled "The Dark Angel". Guess what that's about, lol.
 I made it 
  August 13, 2012
Quoting Daniel Janči OK. This moc is really nice and you are great builder.
Thank you. You are too. I hope I did not offend you, I meant no harm.
  August 13, 2012
OK. This moc is really nice and you are great builder.
 I made it 
  August 13, 2012
Quoting Daniel Janči You think that I´m bugg....
No! I don't! Bugger is my substitute for swear words since I don't like saying them. I was thinking about how to change the details on the waist so as not to attract unwanted attention XD I would not call anyone a bug, I don't usually call anyone names. I just read there mind and walk away while they are stunned XD
  August 13, 2012
You think that I´m bugg....
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  August 13, 2012
Quoting Vorred 03 He looks very strong due his powerful legs and arms, and the use of those thin leg plates on his body is amazing! Great work on him, together with that weapon he really looks like a guardian!
Thank you. I was hoping he would but it's kinda funny, I meant for him to be tall but he ended up about a stud shorter than my normal build size LOL.
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  August 13, 2012
He looks very strong due his powerful legs and arms, and the use of those thin leg plates on his body is amazing! Great work on him, together with that weapon he really looks like a guardian!
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  August 13, 2012
Quoting Daniel Janči OMGGG!!! This is amazing. His body is so cool!!! But between his legs is something like two ... and something like.... But this MOC is really nice. Good job!!!
Thank you. LOL, well, I didn't see it like THAT until you said something! *sigh* I guess I'm going to have to fix that huh? Bugger...
  August 13, 2012
I didn´t want be rude or... Please do not take it badly.
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  August 13, 2012
OMGGG!!! This is amazing. His body is so cool!!! But between his legs is something like two ... and something like.... But this MOC is really nice. Good job!!!
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  August 13, 2012
Quoting Toa Infernum I resized them. I just had to restart my computer and then it worked fine. Thanks for your help. Sorry my other comments were weird, I was in a hurry. :)
Okeyday, glad it's running fine. :)
  August 12, 2012
I resized them. I just had to restart my computer and then it worked fine. Thanks for your help. Sorry my other comments were weird, I was in a hurry. :)
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  August 12, 2012
Quoting Toa Infernum Yeah, I've pictures that when I try to upload won't work. :(
I'm assuming since you came to me for help you've already tried resizing?
  August 12, 2012
Yeah, I've pictures that when I try to upload won't work. :(
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  August 12, 2012
Quoting Toa Infernum Nice! I love the complexity of the body and legs! I'm not so sure about the arms though. I'm having some trouble and I know you've helped people with the same problem before, so could you help? :)
Thank you. I'm going to presume that you are having trouble uploading pics? That's the only thing I know how to help with LOL.
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  August 12, 2012
Nice! I love the complexity of the body and legs! I'm not so sure about the arms though. I'm having some trouble and I know you've helped people with the same problem before, so could you help? :)
 I made it 
  August 12, 2012
Thank you guys. I'm glad you like him. :)
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  August 12, 2012
Awesome job on this Gale :)
Gale Winthrope
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  August 11, 2012
Fantastic work! Love the look!
Gale Winthrope
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Suspicious Chicken
  August 11, 2012
Very nice back story you have there! Of course, it's also awesome MOC. I love the torso! And don't worry about the non-custom limbs, they look great!
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  August 11, 2012
Very good job! I really like the shape the Chirox armor and that mahri armor looks. I ordered some of the chirox peices, but i thought they were both silver, but one was black. Ah well. Good job!
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  August 11, 2012
Great MOC, not too fond of the upper arms, but the torso makes up for it.
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Great job. Love the torso. ;)
Thank you, as stated, I do as well ;)
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  August 11, 2012
Great job. Love the torso. ;)
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting StoveTop Creator Yes, Gaaaaale... we've all figured it out! YOU REALLY LIKE THIS GUY! And, so do we! :)
Well good, I'm glad I got that message across, I was worried people wouldn't get it ;) Thanks Topsy!
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting Terilis the Dark Angel Great work Gale! My favorite part is the Torso, Fitting the axles through the Chirox leg armor is clever. I need to work on finding those connections. Also, the lower arms add a mechanical feel to him, that's cool too. I also have a quick suggestion. You are really good at writing, I think you should write the story of the garden on Fanfiction.
Thank you. I do enjoy writing, it has become a hobby of mine, but I don't know what Fanfiction is...
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting Talonmagic ~ Excellent!! Enough said!
Thank you. Enough said lol.
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  August 11, 2012
Yes, Gaaaaale... we've all figured it out! YOU REALLY LIKE THIS GUY! And, so do we! :)
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  August 11, 2012
Great work Gale! My favorite part is the Torso, Fitting the axles through the Chirox leg armor is clever. I need to work on finding those connections. Also, the lower arms add a mechanical feel to him, that's cool too. I also have a quick suggestion. You are really good at writing, I think you should write the story of the garden on Fanfiction.
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  August 11, 2012
Excellent!! Enough said!
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  August 11, 2012
Excellent!! Enough said!
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting Austin W Nice job, I love all the little greeblings on him. My only complaint is the back of the arms look a little odd, also I don't really like the look of the feet, they seem a little flat.
Really? I was quite pleased with the arms as a whole. Hmm, the flat can be fixed, I'll work on that. Thank you.
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  August 11, 2012
Nice job, I love all the little greeblings on him. My only complaint is the back of the arms look a little odd, also I don't really like the look of the feet, they seem a little flat.
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting ariklego ...The Director! Very nice! I'm drooling over those lower arms right now. They make him look like he could knock a Toa of stone senseless. The torso is great, and I also like the upper arms a bit. The legs need work in my opinion, and I'd agree with L. A. Miranda that the shoulder armor could be better (though not by much), It's all-around pretty awesome. Also, try something a bit different with the staff. It's cool, but probably not very functional in reality. Make it about 50% longer, or maybe add some kind of point or blade to make it into a pike or halberd would really improve it. Boy am I long-winded...
LOL, he probably could! Ok, I'll work on some other form of upper arm armor. Really? I kinda liked the staff. I didn't necessarily want to look functional but rather be a big stick to "whack-a-mole" with. I tried many types of points and blades on it but I settled with this. I am happy with this. Thank you though, and I enjoy longer comments rather than shorter ones anyway ;)
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  August 11, 2012
Very nice! I'm drooling over those lower arms right now. They make him look like he could knock a Toa of stone senseless. The torso is great, and I also like the upper arms a bit. The legs need work in my opinion, and I'd agree with L. A. Miranda that the shoulder armor could be better (though not by much), It's all-around pretty awesome. Also, try something a bit different with the staff. It's cool, but probably not very functional in reality. Make it about 50% longer, or maybe add some kind of point or blade to make it into a pike or halberd would really improve it. Boy am I long-winded...
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting Toa Likus Nice. Mechanical looking with all the Technic parts and the greebles work too.
Thank you. I didn't really try for the greebles, they just kinda happened XD
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  August 11, 2012
Nice. Mechanical looking with all the Technic parts and the greebles work too.
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting Steve99 L Nice!
Thank you.
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  August 11, 2012
Nice!
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting L.A. Miranda No no. The upper arms doesn't need work, in my opinion. It's only I don't like how it turned the Metru feet with the Nuva shoulders... And show me a MOC you didn't build great, I dare you!
Oh, yeah, I didn't like that at first, but it grew on me XD well, I want to state that you guys only see about one out of every five MOCs I make. Most of those ones that don't get up here are bad XD but of the ones I've posted Liam and Mutoh are probably my worst lol. Your free to look at those XD
  August 11, 2012
No no. The upper arms doesn't need work, in my opinion. It's only I don't like how it turned the Metru feet with the Nuva shoulders... And show me a MOC you didn't build great, I dare you!
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  August 11, 2012
Quoting L.A. Miranda Hmmm... You have been able to create a silver and black MOC with a Tryna that doesn't rememeber Dystrax XD Well, I really like the torso design (that greebled waist! <3), and the legs are also pretty good, but I don't like very much the upper arms. But the staff! Oh dear, so simple, and so beautiful! Well, good job, my dear, as always =P
Oh my gosh your right, it doesn't look like Dystrax! XD Thank you, I know the upper arms need work, but I will take care of that in the future. Not always, but thanks anyway ;)
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  August 11, 2012
Hmmm... You have been able to create a silver and black MOC with a Tryna that doesn't rememeber Dystrax XD Well, I really like the torso design (that greebled waist! <3), and the legs are also pretty good, but I don't like very much the upper arms. But the staff! Oh dear, so simple, and so beautiful! Well, good job, my dear, as always =P
 
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