Maybe Techno thinks it is funny that Zertavus is repeatedly attacked. But really, the story would be better and more exciting if the other heroes did something other than get hurt or stand by randomly while Westerwave does all the work.
Sorry, but I don't get it. Why did you have to laugh at this one picture? Is there any joke I don't understand? - Sorry, aber ich kapier das nicht. Warum musst du bei dem einen Foto lachen? Gibt es da irgendeinen Witz, den ich nicht verstehe?
This is too quick for a story, plus it's not even a story! Just a bunch of random tablescraps killing other random tablescraps! Also, this is pretty bad quality. Maybe try adding to the story to make it longer, and use a better camera.