Timmy: we are going on our first mission to Vandaar to save it from the new army of Saurman the II.
About this creation
Fellowship: when are we leaving?
They headed out..
Meanwhile at Vandaar the army of Saurman's was kicking the Vandaarians butt. Most of the troops were already dead
Vandaar troops: FALL BACK!!!!
The orcs were just to many..
Troop: Cmon guys we can win..at that moment a arrow came piecrcing threw his stomach..
The Orcs advanced more
and one was carrying a bomb
And he sliced a Vandaar troop in half
another troop was killed
The orcs kept advancing
The Besherker Uruk Hai killed another troop
Orngo: This is going well....
Luke Smith'son watched from the top
and then he jumped down and killed an orc
the orc took the bomb
and threw it..
and blew up a tower.
as fire broke out from it another one of the few remaining troops were killed
troops jumped out as...
the big tower fell.....
just then the NEW FELLOWSHIP arrived
Orngo attack the king of Vandaar and the new fellowship...
and so they did..
Luke and his son watched as some orcs came rushing up the tower..
The NEW FELLOWSHIP was on a roll..
Meanwhile the Orcs attacked Luke...
and one hit him in the head...
and hit the ground with a thud and didnt move a muscle...DEAD...
NO!!!! yelled his son but he to was killled as they sliced off his head...
noo!! yelled Jarek Roy
You need to work on your photos I am sorry but their just terrible. You also need to work on your grammar and the quality of your moc as they look like sloppy and very uninteresting. You have potential but you need a lot of work.