Quoting Awsomness257 (Raith)
You just have too many colors on the MOC. And he isn't proportioned well. I understand if you are a younger builder though.
1. I am not a younger MOCer, just not professional or well immersed in pro MOCing. just new really.
2. I modeled his proportions by my unnaturally long and strong arms to show the difference between my legs vs arms.
3. I accept your kind criticism and i will try to improve on colors with my limited number of parts. Purple is my favorite color but I do not possess a lot of it so i made the primary color dark grey and black. Which of those should become the sole primary?