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Piece for Dragonax's Redemption story
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Dragonax, see if this could fit in.

Dragonax stumbled back as the toa prepared to stike again. He swung his weapon at the makuta but Dragonax stepped back, effortlessly avoiding the potential blow. Dragonax then lunged forward & prepared to slice the toa with his claws. He dodged once, twice then on the third, he grabbed his arm jumped in the air and kicked Dragonax in the chest. He flew back & slammed into a cold, stone wall. Now winded, he slumped down to the floor clutching his chest in agony as he watched as the the toa strode towards him.
In a desperate atempt to save himself, he managed to hold out his arm in fear for his life, something he was unsure of doing since being a makuta and fearing very little. The toa stared curiosly at his arm before slamming it away to the floor as he readied his sword. Ready to kill him. Dragonax watched the blade rise above the toa's head & he closed his eyes ready for death, for the pain, for the...
Drips of protodermis interupted his thoughts as he wondered if it was his.
It wasn't.
He gazed up at the toa, now looking at the strange point protruding from his chest. Dragonax watched the toa's expression turn from anger to terror as he realised he had been stabbed. He dropped his sword & a small moan escaped his mouth as the point turned into a blade that grew out of his chest untill a sword burst through.
The sword twisted left, right, left, right before shrinking suddenly back through the hole. A few mumbled words came from the toa that Dragonax registered as "Save me now. Save me no..." His speech was cut off as a clawed hand covered his mask.
Dragonax watched as the toa's slow, steady moans evolve into a piercing shriek of shear pain as his mask was violently ripped from his head. The shriek ended as quickly as his life did & he fell back in a heap on the floor. Dragonax's glace slowly rose from the toa's lifeless body to the legendary being that EVERY makuta had feared...


TO BE CONTINUED... (in dragonax's story, not mine :D)



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  February 23, 2013
Message from the Tournamocoff: Do not forget round 1 will start anytime soon, maybe in a day or 2. This is a message to warn everyone that the contest you joined (The Ultimate Tournamocoff), whenever registered or not, you are in the tournament. Everyone who joined the contest will get this exact same message to warn everyone that the contest will begin soon, and the Round 1 information will be posted as a moc on my page. So I wish the best of luck to all of you in the beginning of this contest! ~ Red-Eyes Rider
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  September 7, 2012
Nice presentation and editing on that photo. Your models look nice too. It would be nice to see some pictures from other angles.
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  September 3, 2012
Quoting Dragonax lord of all things black and creepy You're good at writing! Although I sadly can't use this in Redemption, I still like it. I'll try to include it in my sequel :D
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  September 3, 2012
You're good at writing! Although I sadly can't use this in Redemption, I still like it. I'll try to include it in my sequel :D
 
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