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MocOff - David Vs. RZM! - Moc Murder
Built for my Mocoff with Raviel Ze Moccist! Like the reflection on the pillar? (That was on purpose, BTW) WARINING: There is a gruesome murder occurring below. I'm not weak of heart, so I'm not sure who do don't think this inappropriate. So please, lemme know. :)
About this creation
My opponents homepage and his worthy entry. Good Luck!

The front of the moc. I'm sorry it looks kind of yellowish, the lighting in my room was all wacky.










A chandelier. Keep in mind that this is supposed to be an old, forgotten building, in an old alley. That's why everything is sort of old looking.










I'm very proud of this design, as I made it up myself, and am happy how it turned out. This is one of the things that made it "better" Raviel. :)










Bottom of the chandelier. I think it turned out very well. It went through various stages of design, and this is the one I thought looked the best.











Departing shot of the chandelier.










A bucket full of knives and a crossbow to shoot him with. He got one in the elbow. Ouch.










Raviel, stuck to a stone slab, with an arrow in his shoulder. I feel sorry for him. Sort of. >:)











His hands have been stabbed to the stone so he won't fall.











A bucket of guns, and some other boxes of junk.












Boxes full of money and other stuff...











A grumpy thug and his club. (Hey, that rhymed!)










Roof of the old warehouse.











Raviels' hat, which fell of when he was mugged. Didn't your mom always tell you to stay out of dark allies?











A puddle, and some filth. I wish I had the cat-woman's cat-cycle chase set, those newspapers made me mourn all the way through building this.










The wall.











The other... Wall.











Some boxes and a garbage barrel.











An old, boarded up window.









And old thug, waiting for the boss the come out.










Now, the second thing making it "better".











A street lamp. I believe I made this design up but am sure I saw something similar. Kudos to whoever came up with the inspiration! I can't remember who...










Another boarded up window.










Thug: This good boss?











*Looks at dead body, killed with a pole*










David: Yup. Here's your money.










The result.









David: *whew!* Glad that's over with!









David: Oh, what's this? A top hat!












David: Hey, it fits perfectly!











David: Neato! That Raviel should've studied up on who he was messing with!










The alley and warehouse.










And my setup, just for whoever was wondering. :D
Good Luck Raviel! Oh, and I want my cookie, man. ;D
Hope You Enjoyed! Thanks For Looking!

Please, Rate And Comment!

God Bless ~ David.


EDIT

This reached the homepage. Thanks you guys! Oh, and congrats Raviel. ;)



Comments

 I made it 
  September 19, 2012
Quoting Little Bricker of Brickington What is an MOC-off?
It is where two people decide to moc off against each other. They choose a category, size deadline, ect. And the judges, who volunteer judge them. The person with the highest scores wins the mocoff.
 I like it 
  September 19, 2012
What is an MOC-off?
 I made it 
  September 8, 2012
Quoting Joseph Shaw I like the chandelier design!
Thanks!
 I like it 
  September 8, 2012
I like the chandelier design!
 I made it 
  September 7, 2012
Quoting Raviel Ze MOCist! Haha nice dude. But why did you have to take my tophat? :c lol JK. It was a nice little MOC here, oh, and here you go. *gives cookie* :3
Thanks! *Receives cookie* It broke! ;3
 I like it 
  September 6, 2012
Haha nice dude. But why did you have to take my tophat? :c lol JK. It was a nice little MOC here, oh, and here you go. *gives cookie* :3
 I made it 
  September 4, 2012
Quoting Justin M Excellent, David! I really like how the color-scheme in this is a bit different then what you normally see:) Also, that chandelier looks great! Good luck and well done.
Thanks! I like the chandelier as well. :) I lost by one point, but thanks anyways! :D
 I made it 
  September 4, 2012
Quoting Michael Kringe Nice build! The way how to kill him is very well... creative, hehe.
Yeah, I was going to squish him with a spike while he was tied to the table, but didn't know how I was to design that in a week. : Thanks!
 I made it 
  September 4, 2012
Quoting James Mckinnon Haha I love this Davigiod. Although it may not have been the greatest idea to kill the judge, it was certainly very funny. I like the lamp design with the harpoon. I must say though I do somewhat prefer the simplicity of RZM's moc. This seemed a bit crowded honestly, but still good job on this.
Yeah, I had to add the alley to make it "better" and to fit the figures and his hat. I really wanted the building to seem like it was old, never used or tended to, with boxes of junk piled to the ceiling. Thanks!
 I like it 
  September 4, 2012
Excellent, David! I really like how the color-scheme in this is a bit different then what you normally see:) Also, that chandelier looks great! Good luck and well done.
 I like it 
  September 4, 2012
Nice build! The way how to kill him is very well... creative, hehe.
 I like it 
  September 4, 2012
Haha I love this Davigiod. Although it may not have been the greatest idea to kill the judge, it was certainly very funny. I like the lamp design with the harpoon. I must say though I do somewhat prefer the simplicity of RZM's moc. This seemed a bit crowded honestly, but still good job on this.
 I made it 
  September 3, 2012
Quoting Reynolds . Creativity: 10/10; You nailed it on that one, I especially loved the boarded window. Bricks/Building techniques: 3/5 Some of your bricks had dust on them...Visual Elements, Brick Colors, Photography skill, 3/4. I loved that main picture. Your post is on topic so...1/1. Your total score = 17/20. Great Work!
Yeah, dust does tend to settle, and I blew it off best I could. :) At least the pics were good enough to see the dust. :D Thanks!
 I made it 
  September 3, 2012
Quoting Banjax 2077 Hehe pretty good.
Hehe thanks. :)
 I like it 
  September 3, 2012
Creativity: 10/10; You nailed it on that one, I especially loved the boarded window. Bricks/Building techniques: 3/5 Some of your bricks had dust on them...Visual Elements, Brick Colors, Photography skill, 3/4. I loved that main picture. Your post is on topic so...1/1. Your total score = 17/20. Great Work!
  September 3, 2012
Hehe pretty good.
 I made it 
  September 3, 2012
Quoting Halhi 141 Great parts use! I think you beat him on the build! But I think he did a better job of presentation... Good luck!
Thanks!
Quoting ~ Caleb ~ Gruesome... But looks great!!
Yep... Thanks!
Quoting Jorden Davis Gee...very violent. I really like the walls. Your photo presentation is MUCH better than a few weeks ago! That was a good background color!
Thanks! :D Sorry about the violence, it's murder you know...
 I like it 
  September 3, 2012
Gee...very violent. I really like the walls. Your photo presentation is MUCH better than a few weeks ago! That was a good background color!
 I like it 
  September 3, 2012
Gruesome... But looks great!!
 I like it 
  September 3, 2012
Great parts use! I think you beat him on the build! But I think he did a better job of presentation... Good luck!
 
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