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Bloodlines 09: The Two Orders
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The Jedi Temple on Coruscant, roughly two days after the events in Saviours 03: The Jedi and the Slaver .

Jedi Knight Ames Victur walked slowly into the communications room of the Jedi Order on Coruscant. As he enetered, Master Skywalkr turned and smiled at the young Jedi.

Luke Skywalker: "Ames. Come in."

Ames Victur: "You wanted to see me Master?"

Luke Skywalker: "Yes, I did indeed. Ames, you have complete trust and you are one of the Order's top spies. That is why I must ask you too complete a task for me."



Ames Victur: "Anything."

Luke Skywalker: "I need you to go to Tython and spy on Master Soru's Order. I want to know what he is planning, what hi strength is and whether he presents a danger to us."

Ames Victur: "Master? Are you sure that..."

Luke Skywalker: "I do not trust Soru Ames. I need to know what he is up too."



Luke turned quickly and began to leave the room. He stopped on the threshold however and glanced back at the younger Jedi.

Luke Skywalker: "Remember Ames, no one is too know about this mission."



Tython, two days later. Jedi Master Harash Soru takes a break from his duties of Grand Master to engage in a sparring match with his former Padawan Yurren Relm and his current Padawan, Mary Kringe.

Yurren Relm: "Your skills are certainly improving Mary!"

Harash Soru: "Indeed, you may even surpass old Master Yurren here!"

Yurren Relm: "Who are you calling old Master?"



Mary nimbly dodged an attack and smiled playfully.

Mary Kringe: "Well I did have good teachers."

A frown suddenly traced the young girl's face.



The other Jedi turned around to see a young man come stumbling out of the forest towards them.



He attempted to mouth a few words but instead fell flat on his face and lay still.



The medical centre on Tython. Following the boy's entrance, the three Jedi had taken him straight to the Temple's med-centre where Jedi Master Emilia Jannit had been looking after him.

Emilia Jannit: "Many of his wounds were not as severe as we first thought. It is most likely that he collapsed from exhaustion, not his wounds."

Mary Kringe: "Did he say anything?"

Emilia Jannit: "His name is Doron Garr, he was injured on New Alderaan before managing to make his way here."

Hara chewed his tongue thoughtfully and nodded.

Harash Soru: "You have my thanks once again Master Jannit."

As Master Jannit bowed herself out, Yurren entered the room.



Yurren Relm: "Master Soru, a word if you will?"

Harash Soru: "What is it?"

Yurren Relm: "I was speaking to Master Burl. Reports are saying that an unidentified Jedi fighter has been found hidden in the forest. Furthermore the reports of violence on New Alderaan do not appear anywhere in their updates to us."

Harash Soru: "Yes I know he is lying."



Yurren Relm: "Then shouldn't we question him?"

Hara smiled and patted his former Padawan on the shoulder.

Harash Soru: "In good time my friend. I want to see what he is up to first."



As night fell, Ames Victur slipped quietly from his bed.For the entire day he had been focusing on hiding his Force connection and he was mentally drained from the effort. However, he still had work to do.



Searching through the small room, he found a cloak and pulled it on, using the hood to hide his features.



Slowly, Ames entered the communications room and began to secure a connection to Coruscant.



Harash Soru: "A bit late for a stoll don't you think?"



Ames jumped and turned around.

Ames Victur: "Master Soru! Forgive me, I was trying to find you."

Harash Soru: "Save your cover Doron Garr. Or should I say Ames Victur?"

Ames Victur: "How did you know?"

Harash Soru: "We found your fighter and got Master Jade on Coruscant to run a scan on the number. Impressive work today by the way, you had many Jedi fooled. But I wonder why has Master Luke sent you here?"



Ames sighed, realising that Hara had uncovered both his identity and the source of his mission.

Ames Victur: "Master Skywalker does not trust your Order. He thinks your claims that the Sith are back are ridiculous and some kind of ploy to sieze power."

Harash Soru: "What do you think Ames?"

Ames Victur: "I doubt that you would lie Master Soru. But honestly I am just quite confused."

Harash Soru: "Let me show you something."



Hara took from his robes a lightsaber hilt and passed it to Ames.

Ames Victur: "A lightsaber?"

Harash Soru: "My son's. Michael was a great Jedi, ready to become a Knight. But Rovaniss, he is the Sith Emperor, seduced and turned him to the Dark Side of the Force. Unfortunately I have fought my son too many times. I keep his lightsaber with me to remind me that there is always a part of the Jedi left within him somewhere."



Ames swung the blade silently.

Ames Victur: "It is a good weapon. I heard about Michael, he sounded like a great Jedi, I would have liked to have met him before he fell."



Harash Soru: "Search my mind, you will find that the Sith have returned, you can feel their presence on me and the othr Jedi Jedi of this Temple. The Dark Side can do terrible things to people Ames. Imagine what it will do too the Galaxy if we just ignore it."



Ames passed the lightsaber backed to Hara and looked down at the floor.

Ames Victur: "I am sorry, Master Soru. I will go now."

Harash Soru: "You do not have to leave Ames. We are no less Jedi here than you are on Coruscant."



Coruscant, the following day.

Mara Jade Skywalker: "There's an incoming call from Tython."

Luke Skywalker: "Patch it through."



Harash Soru: "Luke. It is good to see you. I am well thank you. I just thought that I would let you know how Ames is getting on with his mission to spy on me and my Order."



Mara covered the speaker for a moment.

Mara Jade Skywalker: "What mission?"

Luke Skywalker: "I sent Ames to Tython."

Mara Jade Skywalker: "You did what?!"

Harash Soru: "Well, he is here to tell you himself."



Hara stepped aside and in walked Ames, fully dressed and armed in his usual robes.

Ames Victur: "Master Luke. My mission was successful, Master SOru does not pose any threat to the Republic or you. In fact he plans to save the Galaxy from the Sith. WHich is why I will be staying here on Tython."



Static sounded from the communicator as the signal was cut from the other end.

Ames Victur: "I am sorry for not believing you Master Soru."

Harash Soru: "Belief comes with knowledge Ames. And we have strived to keep the knowledge of the Sith from the rest fo the Galaxy. Welcome to our Order."



Luke through his amrs up angrily.

Luke Skywalker: "First he walks away from the Republic, then he splits the Order. Now he steals my own Jedi!"

Mara Jade Skywalker: "You are just as bad anyway, sending Ames to spy on Hara! Luke you haven't even given what he says a chance. Ames obviously saw something that made him change his mind!"



Luke stormed out of the room but not beofre he glanced back at Mara.

Luke Skywalker: "I think you understimate Soru's power to manipulate people."



Comments

Harry 863
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  September 22, 2012
Thats awesome! Teamwork!
Harry 863
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Admiral Varkov
  September 16, 2012
Very nice chapter! Interesting development with Luke's order and some great new characters as well!
Harry 863
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Arken . (Grounded)
  September 15, 2012
Can I have a character? Name: Arken (duh) Species: Human: Lightsaber color: Black, if not, dark blue, if not, normal blue. Nice storyline!
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  September 14, 2012
I am kinda surprised to see Yurren, but great idea to put him in the story. Also thanks for showing Mary in this episode! :)
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  September 13, 2012
Sweet.
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  September 13, 2012
Can I have a character Name: Alex Stones Species: Human Lightsabers: 1 green.
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  September 12, 2012
Nice!
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  September 12, 2012
Great episode Harry.
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  September 11, 2012
wow nice job. though mara could use alittle work no offence.
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  September 11, 2012
I have been keeping up with your GFW builds, so why is Yurren in here whereas the GFW takes place 30,000 years after the fall of the empire? And Luke also seems much more of a jerk than the movies led.
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  September 11, 2012
Beautiful comic, Harry! Thanks for using Ames by the way. :)
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  September 11, 2012
Wow, a comment from Cossy. You really don't see that these days. ;)
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  September 11, 2012
Not really sure I liked Luke's involvement in this episode, still a good one :) Nice to see Yurren in this episode too :D Also I think it be best you proof read your episodes, there a few mistakes in this one, anyway good work :)
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  September 11, 2012
Interesting. Can't wait to see what unfolds! :D
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  September 11, 2012
nice!
 
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