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Liuss, the Tragic
About this creation

Once a young and studious scholar, Liuss was the epitome of a good Matoran. But war tore apart his village, and amidst the flames, the Turaga of the village gave the last of his power to save Liuss, and transform him into a Toa. Changed by the things he had experienced, Liuss was a sad and brooding Toa for many years, until he met three other Toa who had similar backgrounds of loss to his own. They bonded as a team, and in time Liuss became more like his old eager self.
And on a baleful midnight, a band of raiders struck a growing city, and the districts fell one by one. And there, with the flames and the wreckage, the rest of his team out of sight, Liuss found a piece of himself; and it came along with a small Matoran trapped beneath the rubble. A being of lightning, she was, but Liuss saw a bit of his own qualities reflected there. And as he moved to aid the Matoran, one of the raiders returned to ensure the fall of the Fourth Last Hope, the Cunning, as it had been seen by the Order's creations; and Liuss fought him to the last. But both were downed by the raining fire; and as Liuss lay there, the Matoran he had tried to save freed herself from beneath the rubble, and went over to him. And then, for the first time in decades, Liuss smiled; and then the Toa of Magnetism was gone, and in his place was a Turaga, and before him was a Toa of Lightning. And he said go, and so she did; and then he was alone, with only the fire, and the dark, and the bodies of Toa and raiders alike.
And again Liuss smiled, and passed on to Mata Nui.





Matoran Liuss








Toa Liuss





















Turaga Liuss






Got a problem with the cryptic backstory? Don't like the bad grammar? Good. It's supposed to be artistic, and so I don't need no grammar. Anyway, there'll be more like it, leading into a project that I'm sure some of you will like. So, as you probably know by now, this is my September BCBS MOC, posted with about an hour and a half to spare. Thanks for viewing. ;)


Oh BTW, since I didn't really like the Matoran or Turage forms all that much, I'm just leaving one pic of each up. And he's now a Toa of Magnetism, not Sonics... I decided it fit better with his color scheme. :P

Oh, and this, for Marko. :P
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Comments

 I made it 
  November 3, 2012
Quoting Aquarist Shaluub I kind of get this Toa of Sonics vibe from him.
Yeah, he's a Toa of Sonics originally. The chain and color scheme felt more in line with Magnetism, though, and besides it worked better for story reasons.
 I made it 
  September 28, 2012
Quoting R.K. Semaj Can you make time bend and the three thirds meet?
Physically? No. I was pressed for time so I had to scrap the Toa to build the other two. And storyline-wise, I wouldn't anyway, as he dies immediately after becoming a Turaga... and other reasons, haha.
 I made it 
  September 28, 2012
Quoting Dragonax lord of all things black and creepy Didn't notice this the first time, but I love that he has a gear on his back :D Very nostalgic feeling with that!
Thanks! That's what I was going for. :D
Quoting Daniel Janči Very nice. Good luck in BCBS!!!
Haha thanks, but Gale already won for this month. :P
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  September 28, 2012
Very nice. Good luck in BCBS!!!
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  September 26, 2012
Can you make time bend and the three thirds meet?
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  September 24, 2012
Didn't notice this the first time, but I love that he has a gear on his back :D Very nostalgic feeling with that!
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  September 19, 2012
Awesome mocs and the evolution looks awesome! Good luck Chro! I hope to chat soon (school... :/)
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  September 18, 2012
An awesome Entry, a nice backstory too ;) I do like the Matoran Liuss, although it does not seem much like a Matoran to me, It is a nice Moc. I also like the Toa Luiss, he is really cool, although he is very thin and the MOC lacks the armour around the legs IMO. The Turaga is awesome, no critism with that :) Good luck anyway!
 I made it 
  September 17, 2012
Quoting Deimos MOF crap. and i made a fool of myself for the *calculating* i lost count...
LOL, that's fine with me. It's just that Gray gets mad when you call him Zerk, so I was covering for him. :P
  September 15, 2012
crap. and i made a fool of myself for the *calculating* i lost count...
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  September 15, 2012
very good, like the toa the best
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  September 15, 2012
Quoting The Millennium Warrior Aaand..... we have the first winner twice in a row. :)
LOL Millsy. Nothing is certain.
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  September 15, 2012
Aaand..... we have the first winner twice in a row. :)
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  September 15, 2012
Quoting Deimos MOF Toa version looks beast! matoran and turaga are not bad but the toa is the best version! loved the story.It's propably going to be between you and zerk. Good luck!
*ahem* Zerk? Who's this Zerk you speak of? Sounds awfully similar to the self-MOC of Steve the Squid, a person who is not named Zerk.
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  September 15, 2012
Toa version looks beast! matoran and turaga are not bad but the toa is the best version! loved the story.It's propably going to be between you and zerk. Good luck!
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  September 15, 2012
Very cool. Love the Toa version. ;)
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  September 15, 2012
Even thought the Toa looks pretty darn awesome, I like the Matoran most of all :D 8 The Nuva-shoulder for mask looks cool. Great work!
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  September 15, 2012
Quite a big transformation from Matoran to Toa! Builds really emphasizes it! Cool! :)
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  September 15, 2012
I love the Toa version's weapon! Nicely done!
 I made it 
  September 15, 2012
Thanks all, glad you liked the story.
Quoting Gale Winthrope But, I do agree with the question that L.A. posed. Would you perhaps let us of the average people win one? XD
Whaaat? I maintain my normalcy! :P
 I made it 
  September 15, 2012
Quoting Patrick Mont Maybe next you should make that Toa of Lightning Liuss made.
She's already been done, photo'd, and scrapped for four months.
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  September 15, 2012
His story is somehow a bit touching, and his three forms are epic! You did awesome with this character!
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  September 15, 2012
Maybe next you should make that Toa of Lightning Liuss made.
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  September 15, 2012
That turaga is pretty cool! Good luck!
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  September 15, 2012
Nice, but a little too thin.
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  September 15, 2012
Cool evolution you made, I like that you made use of those Gelu blade. They look very cool, but have due to their color a very rare use! Good luck in the BCBS.
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  September 15, 2012
All the builds are great, but I loved that story. I relate to it in a way. My favorite of the builds though is the Toa. The other two are both great, but I just think the Toa shows more you than the others. But, I do agree with the question that L.A. posed. Would you perhaps let us of the average people win one? XD
 I made it 
  September 15, 2012
Quoting L.A. Miranda The story was beautiful! *^* Although it was a bit hard for me to understand it, I really like it.
Thank you. You especially would appreciate it, LOL.
Quoting L.A. Miranda About the MOCs, it seems that everyone is giving their bests on the Matoran form, and you aren't a exception. I love specially the feet and torso. About the Toa, I feel it as more simplier than other of your creations, the equivalent of 'build an Inika MOC' on Chronos language xD It's only my sensation, because it's really worked and all that stuff. The Turaga has a great design without using a lot of parts (great torso again), but he resembles me to have a big head. Anyways... Seriously, Mr.Omega, would you one day give us the opportunity of winning something? Normal people want to win someday, you know. e__e
Hahaha! Yes, you're right about the Turaga, and the Toa was kinda simple by my standards, as well. Anyway I'm glad you like it, but really, I easily fall under the category of "normal people". XD
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  September 15, 2012
Whoa he looks awesome! only thing is (by the Toa) that the legs and arms are a bit small compared with the body. But it still is a wonderful job!
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  September 15, 2012
Awesome. I love the design of Liuss as a Turaga. The whole flow of everything from Matoran to Toa to Turaga was very enjoyable.
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  September 15, 2012
The story was beautiful! *^* Although it was a bit hard for me to understand it, I really like it. About the MOCs, it seems that everyone is giving their bests on the Matoran form, and you aren't a exception. I love specially the feet and torso. About the Toa, I feel it as more simplier than other of your creations, the equivalent of 'build an Inika MOC' on Chronos language xD It's only my sensation, because it's really worked and all that stuff. The Turaga has a great design without using a lot of parts (great torso again), but he resembles me to have a big head. Anyways... Seriously, Mr.Omega, would you one day give us the opportunity of winning something? Normal people want to win someday, you know. e__e
 I like it 
  September 15, 2012
Great MOCs as usual, the Matoranform has a lot of neat techniques (reminds me of Cezium :P ). Toa form is just epic, I wouldn't expect anything less from you. Turaga form is also awesome, really loving the hunch. D'awwwww, tumbleweed <3
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  September 15, 2012
Nice!
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  September 14, 2012
Quoting Nitherium Realmed Are you still working on you're Glitched-Limits MOC? Because I'm really anxious to see it!
Yeah, it's been done for a while, just that school and stuff have gotten in the way. In fact, this upload was made during the longest span of no-homework free time in the past two weeks. DX
Quoting Steve The Squid ... really the toa were just too simple for a contest IMO.
Yes, I agree. But that was purposeful, as I really don't want to win this month, considering I won the August competition.
Quoting Steve The Squid You should totally make the toa of lightning :P
Believe me, this project is already farther along than you think. ;)
 I like it 
  September 14, 2012
I love what you did with this MOC, Especially the matoran Version. Oh Could I ask you for a favor, Could You Kinda help me get a little bit more people to "Add me to their favorite builder list" (If I counted right, I only have 23)
 I made it 
  September 14, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid VVVV Funny story lolwut? Loved the story, expertly written as usual.
I think he meant that it was funny that he was looking at my MOCs while I posted a new one... XD
 I like it 
  September 14, 2012
You should totally make the toa of lightning :P
  September 14, 2012
VVVV Funny story lolwut? Loved the story, expertly written as usual, loved the turaga's hunch, though the others, really the toa were just too simple for a contest IMO. But a great character all the same.
  September 14, 2012
Are you still working on you're Glitched-Limits MOC? Because I'm really anxious to see it!
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  September 14, 2012
Nice, I think the matoran is very cool.
 I made it 
  September 14, 2012
Quoting Jeremy Shepherd These look great funny story though I was actually looking through your MOCs when I got a message through email saying you uploaded a new moc
Thanks, LOL. You must be subconsciously psychic. :P
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  September 14, 2012
These look great funny story though I was actually looking through your MOCs when I got a message through email saying you uploaded a new moc
 
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