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Dark Skies: Episode 1

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Here is the first episode in my new comic series please leave your comments at the end and let me know what you think

About this creation

In the year 1346 in the land of Mistaria was at peace until a silent menace crept into their land spreading false religion and causing great disruption in the land one man though took up the quest to find this cult leader and put him down so we see this hero and his companion traveling

"Which way" asked the man with the wing shaped helmet.

"North." replied the other man.

"Are you sure?"
"No"
"Well then what are we waiting for" He says with a good hearted chuckle

So the two set off again

Meanwhile in the fortress of the Cult
"everything is almost ready" reports the man bowing
"well done my servant rise" says the hooded figure

the man stood
"When the troops have assembled inform me." says the dark figure
"yes my master" says the servant

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I like it

M2com McKinney

December 31, 2012

A bit short but it does leave us hanging! I do like the overall theme but I would put more interior details in the Master's room.

I like it

Michael Kringe

November 18, 2012

Short, but still a very good introduction. The photo quality is very good and the character designs very detailful. I like the LOTR pieces used here!

I made it

the Legionnaire

October 1, 2012

Quoting Aeridian Dal'tori Interesting start. Did you make the map? I think it's really well done.

I would like to take credit for it but I sadly cannot.

I like it

Niall L.

October 1, 2012

I love it so far! Though, when you're building the inside of a building, you could sad more details, like a table or a pot or something.

I like it

Little Bricker

September 28, 2012

This is a pretty interesting start. I hope to see more!

I like it

Aeridian Dal'tori

September 26, 2012

Interesting start. Did you make the map? I think it's really well done.

I like it

Brickbot 10

September 25, 2012

This is a good introduction! I am intrigued...

I like it

Joseph Shaw

September 25, 2012

A very good storyline!

I like it

'Essence of Randomness

September 22, 2012

I like it.....but could you try and tighten up the grammar, it's a bit messy in places. I won't be joining the group, sorry, but I've added you, it'll be nice to see this series progress.

I made it

the Legionnaire

September 21, 2012

Don't worry everybody I will make them longer this is just the pilot episode to see what you all think