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(Nar Shadda, two weeks after the events of Chapter 10)
(Crime Lord Victor Terronzi gazed out at the peaceful cityscape of Nar Shadda, pondering to himself)
Victor- And for the last time will Nar Shadda be as it is now. Soon the Hutts and all their alien minions will be no more.

(The door hissed open and three figures stepped out. The Mandalorian Xeno Tadok led the group flanked by bounty hunter Drev Av'tem and former Intelligence Director turned criminal, Fitze)
Victor- Is all in readiness?
Xeno- Yes sir, our armies are prepared. They await your signal to strike even now.
Fitze- Indeed. My master has given his full approval of the plan. Lord Sidious looks forward to the annihilation of the Hutt slime.
Victor- Excellent. My spies have reported that even now the Republic has sent several Jedi to try and stop us. However they will fail, my revolution cannot be stopped. Send out the orders, the time to strike is now.

(Meanwhile at the, Loading Docks Jedi Gulio Marcus and Karlo Yond'Ull begin their inspection)
Karlo- Master what are we doing here? Shouldn't we be fighting at the front or searching for the spy?
Gulio- There are many fronts to a war Karlo, one of those happens to be checking a seedy dock for contraband. Stay sharp everyone, I sense there is more here than we may have thought.

(As the Jedi approached the warehouse the dock manager quickly stepped out)
Manager- Ah, ahem! I'm sorry Master Jedi... we uh were not informed that we were going to have such a high-profile visit! I-
Gulio- No need to apologize manager, we simply want to have a look inside the warehouse.
Manager- Well, uh I'm afraid that's not possible.

(Stepping forward, Gulio waved his hand, subtly influencing the manager's mind)
Gulio- You will let us into the warehouse.
Manager- Actually you know what, I think I'll let you take a look around.
Gulio- Good. Now you will give your workers the day off and go home.
Manager- Hey everybody! Clear out! I'm going to head home.
Gulio- Good, we'll look after the place while your gone.

(Inside the warehouse a group of Mandalorians negotiated the final aspects of their deal with a representative of Victor)
Negotiator- Alright I'll give you 10,000 credits a crate! But that's my final offer!
Mandalorian- Took you long enough...wait. Is that a door breach!

(Lightsaber in hand, Gulio burst through the door, force pushing one of the thugs into the wall)
Mandalorian- What the! Men kill the Jedi! Protect our cargo!

(The Mandalorians opened fire, their blasts flying wildly about the room)

(As his men fell the Mandalorian leader took out a sword and swung at Gulio)
Mandalorian- Blasters may be no good against a Jedi, but let's see how well you can duel!
Gulio- Better than you I'm afraid!

(Pushing Gulio back the Mandalorian ran out into the dock only to be surrounded by the clones)
Karlo- Feeze right where you are scum! You're under arrest!
Mandalorian- Grrrr! I'll kill all of you!

(Quickly sidestepping the Mandalorian's attack, Karlo swiftly decapitated him)

Karlo- Well that was exciting for a moment.
Gulio- Indeed, now let's see what they were so eager to die for.

(The Jedi walked back into the warehouse, the center crate was opened, inside was a battle droid)
Clone- The rest of these crates are filled with droids, weapons, grenades, you name it it's all here.
Karlo- They're preparing for war!
Gulio- So it would seem.
(A small beeping went off from Gulio's comlink)
Gulio- Alinta, we've just come upon a warehouse full of battle droids. We think that Victor may be preparing to start a war.

Alinta- Gulio this thing's just gotten far worse than we could possibly have imagined.
Gulio- Why's that?

Alinta- He's not preparing for a war. The war has already begun.
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Evan Constantine October 10, 2012 |
Wow, you're photography is outstanding, and that lead-photo is something right out of a comic book. Great MOC, and thanks also for my first review on MOCpages! |
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October 2, 2012 |
Good work! I really like how well built the settings are with all the extra little details you put in. Those really make the scene stand out so nice job on that. Keep up the good work! 5/5 -J. |
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October 2, 2012 |
Wow great work Varkov! Really love the battle scenes! |
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John Smith October 1, 2012 |
Great comic Varkov. I like the density of the situation, but I am not sure about the Mandalorians. |
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October 1, 2012 |
Great job Varkov loved the whole thing |
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September 30, 2012 |
Impressive! The set builds are great! |
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September 30, 2012 |
Great job! |
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September 30, 2012 |
Great work! I loved the ending |
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September 30, 2012 |
Very suspenseful! |
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