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Ontant, the Unfaltering
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Ontant was a Ba-Matoran construction worker outside of a large city; he was content with his job, and had a fairly good life. But one night a few workers went missing; Ontant was concerned and petitioned his foreman to give him the night guard shift. So he waited, and though became tired, still would not leave; and at last his perseverance was rewarded. From over the far wall there came a grumbling; two thin beings slipped over the wall, drawing knives from their belts. They meandered through the shadows towards the main section of the construction site, all but invisible in the dark. Ontant stood up quietly and walked towards his colleagues. Suddenly, as a worker strayed from the group, one of the attackers leapt, whipping his dagger towards the Matoran's head; but instead it found itself stuck within the grip of Ontant, grimly standing, just before the blade was turned around, and an audible crack was heard. Ontant stepped back; the second attacker sprung while the first examined his broken wrist. Nobody knows just what happened after that; the workers went missing, Ontant was found unconscious, and one attacker was captured.
Later rewarded with a Toa Stone for his valor, and subsequently joining a team of other Toa, Ontant saw the world, and for a while he could leave his memories of his own perceived failure behind him.
Alas, for fate was not so kind; Ontant's team was called to fend off attackers at a growing city, and as the smoke rose and the flames grew, the Toa were separated. Ontant found himself facing down one of the raiders, head on, while shielding a Matoran behind his back- the one, as luck (perhaps showing regret for previous misdeeds) would have it, that was told to be the Second Last Hope, the Tenacious. And Ontant stood unfaltering, fending off the blows; but the fire and the opponent overpowered him, and as he fell Ontant let go of the bitterness he had held, his contempt for his own former failure, and with it he shot the raider away like an arrow to the sky. And turning to the Matoran, he released also his power. So while the city, its defenders and attackers alike all burned, this Matoran used his newfound power; his spirit left his body and ascended to the smoky clouds.
And thus passed Ontant, Toa of Gravity.






















Another one for the series; only two left.
Clearly this story was not as artistically written as the others, but I was going for a more straight-to-the-point style, while still being at least a little but creative... sort of like Ontant, I guess...? Hahaha. :P
Anyways, tell me what you think of the MOC.


Here's a quick (and kinda grainy) torso construction detail shot:

No secret links today, sorry. :(



Comments

[ Chro  ]
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Box Of Faces
  October 17, 2012
Wow, quite impressive! This has a stream-like feel, yet a few greebles here and there, nice balance.
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  October 17, 2012
Quoting Box Of Faces Wow, quite impressive! This has a stream-like feel, yet a few greebles here and there, nice balance.
Thanks, man. That's what I was going for.
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  October 16, 2012
Quoting Coconut Fanatic Quick thing Chro, you commented on a certain "Hatu", yes? I actually now the Builder IRL. I was the friend that helped. He doesn't have much Technic, but he is creative with what he's got.
Alright, good to know. I have a similar situation with another friend whose MOCs I, well, improve, I guess.
  October 16, 2012
Quick thing Chro, you commented on a certain "Hatu", yes? I actually now the Builder IRL. I was the friend that helped. He doesn't have much Technic, but he is creative with what he's got.
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  October 15, 2012
Quoting Andrew Mayfield Amazing moc, as usual! I just wanted to let you know that I'll be back on the pages with new creations soon, Bigger and better than ANY of my older ones. After losing all those contests, I decided I needed to work on my designs and styles before posting anything else :p
I think more than anything you lost just because of the opponents you were getting, not because of a lack of skill. But either way, if you've improved and you're back, then I'm happy to hear that! :D
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  October 14, 2012
Amazing moc, as usual! I just wanted to let you know that I'll be back on the pages with new creations soon, Bigger and better than ANY of my older ones. After losing all those contests, I decided I needed to work on my designs and styles before posting anything else :p
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  October 12, 2012
Nice! I love the purple color scheme! Amazing designs as always! Keep it up! :)
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  October 12, 2012
great color scheme and design dude :)
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  October 11, 2012
Quoting Strakk The Glatorian Nice man!
I am glad that you decisively consider this man to be acceptably adequate.
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  October 11, 2012
Nice man!
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  October 11, 2012
Hmm... I think someone had the Monster pod, judging by those 1x2 axle hole bricks ;) Great job Chro, keep being awesome.
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  October 11, 2012
lookin' good, Chro! :D
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  October 11, 2012
Well done, he looks very robotic, but I think more Toa should look like that, especially Toa of Sonics and Gravity.
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  October 11, 2012
Do I spy purple KK side armor for eyes?! That's clever, as is this entire moc! Love it, and keep it up! :D
[ Chro  ]
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The Texan Bionicle Builder
  October 10, 2012
That, is awesome!
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  October 10, 2012
Awesome MOC and nice story. :)
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  October 10, 2012
Awesome!
  October 10, 2012
Yo Chronos, I'm still waiting on the entry for the contest, it's been 2 months man. You're basicly adding more MOC's for other groups for exscuses for the Glitched-Limits entry. I'm waiting, and it better be a good MOC to make up for tht long time.
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  October 10, 2012
Thanks all, glad you like the MOC. :D
Quoting BrickBrothers 98 Another awesome work Chronos! But hurry up with the BCBS I really want to see your entry! =D
No entry this month, sorry man.
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  October 10, 2012
Very nice!
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  October 10, 2012
dude, this is one of my favorites! i like the little backpack you gave him and his stance and the colors are pretty cool!
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  October 10, 2012
I love what the purple does to this MOC. The torso, and forearm design is ingenious.
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  October 10, 2012
Awesome!
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  October 10, 2012
Make a how to! Please!
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  October 10, 2012
I quite like this moc
  October 10, 2012
Another great moc
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  October 10, 2012
Another awesome work Chronos! But hurry up with the BCBS I really want to see your entry! =D
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  October 10, 2012
Toas of Gravity are always a plus in almost every bio-moccers mind. This is no exception. The sleek armor looks great and that head design is fantastic. Those purple shoulder platings look fabulous and almost looks like fins adding to the sleek overall appearance. Love it and great work Chro.
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  October 9, 2012
Yet another superp MOC Chronos =)
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  October 9, 2012
Whoa I just said almost the same thing as Jacob! ( his comment just came up while I was posting mine.)
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  October 9, 2012
Oh. My Goodness. THIS IS SO EPIC. I like it even more because I've been planning a similar MOC for a while :D
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  October 9, 2012
Awesome job once once again the head is very intresting I like the color scheme. Great job!
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  October 9, 2012
Really nice, I like the color scheme, and that's an interesting head design. Keep it up =)
 
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