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Agnahn, the Austere

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The tale of a serious Toa of Plantlife.

About this creation

Agnahn was once a Bo-Matoran trader, a simple person, but good nonetheless. However, this would not stay so; the village was destroyed in wartime, though the people wished to remain neutral. A near-death soldier gave Agnahn a stone, which changed him physically; but changed emotionally by the things he had experienced, Agnahn distanced himself. He was a cold, quiet Toa for many years, unfitting of his race; this was changed at last when he met three Toa like himself, and Agnahn loosened up.
But one dark midnight, a city was attacked by a band of raiders. Agnahn lost sight of his fellow Toa amidst the fires, but found a single Matoran. He was from the district of stone, but Agnahn saw a similar seriousness to him as he himself had. And so Agnahn dashed forward to save this Matoran, but the raiders were treacherous, and backstabbed the Toa. And then as Agnahn toppled forward, he let out a last gasp, and a burst of power with it; and suddenly the Matoran before him became a Toa of Stone. Agnahn fell and died then in the Toa's arms; but so became the First Last Hope, the Grim, and so passed Agnahn.

Second-to-last one of this team... or is he? Hmm. Just gotta put up the companion post to the series, and finally after that I can get back to my normal MOCing... I've got a few contests to build for, including Banjax's Inhabitants Contest and Stryker's Build-A-Stryker #2 Contest. So yeah, there's that. And more MOCs on the horizon, but I can't tell you about those just yet. ;)

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Kyle Hardy

May 13, 2013

Great! I really like the body design!

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Chronos Omega

November 17, 2012

Quoting Aquarist Shaluub I see you're running out of synonyms for "serious".

Yeah.

I like it

Aquarist Shaluub

November 17, 2012

I see you're running out of synonyms for "serious".

I made it

Chronos Omega

November 5, 2012

Quoting Nitherium Realmed Story's a little sad at the end, but the MOC is interesting for it's not-so-long lasting series.

Thanks. Have you seen the other three though? The point of the story is that they all die to create the Kanau...

Nitherium Realmed

November 4, 2012

Story's a little sad at the end, but the MOC is interesting for it's not-so-long lasting series.

I like it

Steve L

November 3, 2012

Nice!

I like it

Cody G

October 25, 2012

Interesting build, I can see that you're experimenting with some techniques. Keep working on them, they look like they could really flow with the right combination.

I like it

12Lego Greendude

October 25, 2012

Great job Chro! Some parts look kind weird but the whole moc is great :)

I like it

Box Of Faces

October 24, 2012

Nice! The backstories always seem to involve them dying and passing on their power though... Anyone gonna live? :P

I like it

Legofreak2444 ~

October 24, 2012

Awesome job bro. :) Well done.

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 24, 2012

Quoting Gale Winthrope Well, I would, (I would SOO send you some of those purples or one of the golds, just to unload them) but I can't. Fam's got problems with me being on here as it is, (most don't know XD) so, sending someone I know from here a package by mail or other method? They'd shoot me. Then bury me before I actually died. Sorry man :/

Eh, that's alright. I understand. :P

Gale Winthrope

October 24, 2012

Well, I would, (I would SOO send you some of those purples or one of the golds, just to unload them) but I can't. Fam's got problems with me being on here as it is, (most don't know XD) so, sending someone I know from here a package by mail or other method? They'd shoot me. Then bury me before I actually died. Sorry man :/

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 24, 2012

Quoting Gale Winthrope ...not that I can actually send you any of them XD

Try me. Converse by email?

Gale Winthrope

October 24, 2012

I like the arms... >,>

Quoting Chronos Omega You want that in light blue or orange? >.>

LOL, smooth XD But hey, I got two of 'em in gold, and nine in purple, not that I can actually send you any of them XD

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Chronos Omega

October 24, 2012

Quoting ROBOCOP603- MASTER OF BLACK HOLES . I'm not overly fond of the lower arms.

Quoting RazorClaw (Skrall Razor) Pretty cool lime green and black but not very fond of the lower arms

Quoting Wertman 8 Awesome dude! The only thing is that the forearms look really wierd. Apart from that, I can't think of anything else that could be improved.

Alright guys, geez, I get it. Nobody likes the arms. :P

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Chronos Omega

October 24, 2012

Quoting Raviel . He's been nicely done, the only criticism I have is the mask. Not that it's bad, but I think it should've been a different color. ;P

You want that in light blue or orange? >.>

I like it

Raviel .

October 24, 2012

He's been nicely done, the only criticism I have is the mask. Not that it's bad, but I think it should've been a different color. ;P

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 24, 2012

Quoting Box Of Faces Nice! The backstories always seem to involve them dying and passing on their power though... Anyone gonna live? :P

No. That's kinda the point of this series, actually.

I like it

Wertman 8

October 24, 2012

Awesome dude! The only thing is that the forearms look really wierd. Apart from that, I can't think of anything else that could be improved.

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 24, 2012

Quoting Dragonax lord of all things black and creepy Epic MOC! AND I JUST POSTED THIS COMMMENT FROM MY XBOX!!! YEEHAW!

Congratulations. Turn off caps lock.

I like it

RazorClaw (Skrall Razor)

October 24, 2012

Pretty cool lime green and black but not very fond of the lower arms

I like it

Dragonax lord of all things black and creepy

October 24, 2012

Epic MOC! AND I JUST POSTED THIS COMMMENT FROM MY XBOX!!! YEEHAW!

I like it

Yomayos Sprinx

October 23, 2012

Black+Green/Lime=EPIC! Nice MOC you have there!

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 23, 2012

Quoting Coconut Fanatic You'd think with this color scheme it would be one of Fenrek's mocs :D The lower legs and the chest are my favorite, the lower arms I don't hate, don't love, dey just be lower arms to me( :(

I think if it was Aaron's there'd be no Mata green, and it would have a spine and digitigrade legs. Also, yeah, just arms, haha. Thanks. :)

I like it

Coconut Fanatic

October 23, 2012

You'd think with this color scheme it would be one of Fenrek's mocs :D The lower legs and the chest are my favorite, the lower arms I don't hate, don't love, dey just be lower arms to me( :(

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 23, 2012

Quoting Gale Winthrope Very interesting! I love those lower arms, great idea. Looking forward to the last one! :)

Seems like you're pretty much the only person who does. XD

Quoting Banjax 2077 Looks great I would ditch the mata green though and I can't wait for your entry.

Well I initially had him in just black and lime, but he needed a bit more color.

I like it

Backblast ?

October 23, 2012

Great build as usual

I like it

Avron warrior of time

October 23, 2012

my favorate one so far, looking forward to the next one

Gale Winthrope

October 23, 2012

Very interesting! I love those lower arms, great idea. Looking forward to the last one! :)

I like it

ROBOCOP603- MASTER OF BLACK HOLES .

October 23, 2012

I am absolutely loving the lower leg and torso designs! As a whole this moc is very cool, however I'm not overly fond of the lower arms. Overall I'm thinking 9/10 would be a good rating for him!

I like it

Lego Obsessionist

October 23, 2012

I love all of the armor techniques!

I like it

A. Jones

October 23, 2012

I like this moc alot

I like it

Banjax 2077

October 23, 2012

Looks great I would ditch the mata green though and I can't wait for your entry.

I like it

Ro Garcia

October 23, 2012

Dude, awesome use of parts as always! An considering we are in the contest with a few other good MOCist, this is gonna be fun >) Good luck!

I like it

Darren .Y

October 23, 2012

Always enjoyed the backstories of your mocs and the effort put into it. Which just makes your mocs all the more cooler. Love that torso and those legs are just fabulous! Well done. ^.^

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 22, 2012

Quoting Toa Likus Sweet. It's nice to see a Toa MOC with conservative greeble use that doesn't make it look cluttered. Not the biggest fan of the lower arms, but they're not bad! 4/5 I'll see you later in the Stryker contest!

Thanks Likus. I've made an effort to cut back on over-greebling in the past few months, haha. The lower arms are simple, yes, but they are like that for a reason (fits in appearance with a related MOC).

I like it

Toa Likus

October 22, 2012

Sweet. It's nice to see a Toa MOC with conservative greeble use that doesn't make it look cluttered. Not the biggest fan of the lower arms, but they're not bad! 4/5 I'll see you later in the Stryker contest!

I made it

Chronos Omega

October 22, 2012

Quoting Deimos MOF when is pirai coming! nice moc. the leg and body is great. Cant wait for your entry at the contest.

Only time will tell. And thanks, glad you like it, I hope my entry will turn out just as good. :D