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MOC Off: Raviel -VS- Halhi 141
For this town ain't big enough for them both of us!
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Category: Wild West



Wow, I need to shoot him fast, or else the dude will reign over the town. Gotta do something, something fast!



There he is... just walking plain stupidly. I also see that he's got 2 pistols like me. You know what, I can't shoot at him from this angle... gonna have to go shoot him without me noticing...



Hello, don't even try to take the town. Or else, I will shoot you and then you'll bleed! Give it up, just go, now.





But the story was never finished... what will happen next? You decide!

Good luck Halhipoo, this MOC was fun to make. c:



Comments

 I like it 
  November 15, 2012
Cool. ;) I like western MOCs.
 I like it 
  October 28, 2012
Creativity: 8.5/10 The story was funny as the guy had a smile on his face. :) It made me laugh. Techniques: 5/5 The door was awesome IMO, the planks and the roof were all very good. And I always enjoy looking at Lego cactus'. :) Eye candy, colors, Photography: 4/4 Not ,much eye candy, except the door way, and not many colors, but the planks on the wall and your photography skills were made up those extra points. For me as a judge, and a builder, I always want to make sure my photos are crisp, (At least what it's focused on) so as it's easy to see what I took a picture of. That plays a big part for me. +1 point for being on topic. Total: 18.5 Really good job Rav!
 I like it 
  October 28, 2012
7/10 for creativity, the build was a little small and bland but the story was good. 5/5 for techniques, the arch was what won me over here. 4/4 for photography. 1/1 out of one for topic. Total 17/20.
 I like it 
  October 28, 2012
7/10 for creativity, I felt it was a little bland but the story was short and sweet. 5/5 for building techniques, the arch was what won me over on this part. 4/4 for photos, the were nice and sharp. Finally 1/1 for topic. Total 17/20.
 I made it 
  October 28, 2012
Thanks everyone! And I appreciate the score J Man!
 I like it 
  October 28, 2012
Good work! Here is your score: 7/10 for creativity: was pretty generic Western story and build. 4/5 for building- real good textures on the sand and nice use of cheese slopes for the archway could of had a little more of the building for the full 5. 4/4 for pictures and colors. +1 for staying on topic. Total score: 16/20 good job! -J
 I like it 
  October 25, 2012
The texturing of the sand is outstanding.
 I like it 
  October 25, 2012
You've improved greatly, Rav! I love the texture of the sand, and the building has many stunning details. Good luck on you MOC-Off!
 I like it 
  October 25, 2012
Awesome! Good luck Rav!
 I like it 
  October 24, 2012
Sweet. Good luck! :)
 I like it 
  October 24, 2012
Wow this is a great looking build! I especially like the cactus!
 I like it 
  October 24, 2012
nice Rav =)
 I like it 
  October 24, 2012
great build! I love that arch and roof!
 I like it 
  October 24, 2012
Well I really like this scene because of the simplicity; I also like the ground technique (not too smooth, not too bumpy). Good luck Rav!
 
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