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The Great Experiment, Chapter 10: A wild Makuta appears
Nearly sixteen months after the previous chapter... Sorry.
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´Colossus´: Has Ten’kratt moved yet, Motax?


Motax: Not a muscle.


‘Colossus’: Good.


Motax: I suppose…


Shanra: So where are we going anyway?


‘Colossus’: The nearest Order base. I need to drop the crown off and take care of some other business.


Skakdi 1: Well, how much longer is it? My legs are killing me!


Pohtor: Complaining about it won’t make them feel any better.


Skakdi 1: Hmph… Can’t we just teleport or something? I heard you Order guys got some pretty fancy technology.


'Colossus': That is classified information.


Skakdi 1: Weak excuse...


'Colossus': Whatever you say, pal.


Skakdi 1: Hey wait, what about you? You've got jetpacks!


Shanra: I’m not going to carry you! These jetpacks aren’t made to carry heavy loads.


Motax: Yeah, like you. Probably 'cause you've got Protosteel where your brain should be.


Skakdi 1: Why you…!
Skakdi 2: Hehehe…


Skakdi 1: You want me to punch you again?
Skakdi 2: Go ahead, you…
???: I’m sorry to interrupt your highly interesting conversation, but…


Makuta: I want that crown.


Skakdi 1: Oh scrap. It’s the boss.


Makuta: You don’t have to call me that anymore. You’re too useless to be working for me.


Skakdi 2: Whatever. It’s your loss.


Makuta: Shut up and hand me the crown!


‘Colossus’: Never.
Motax: You’ll have to pry it out of our cold, dead hands!


Skakdi 1: Stop encouraging him, you idiot!


Makuta: You’re actually going to fight me? -laughs-


-fsssh-


Frosdron: You talk too much.




-ksssh-
Shanra: Frosdron!


Makuta: -chuckles- Better now?


Motax: Raaah!
'Colossus': Don't!


-sssff-
Motax: Aagh!


Makuta: Pathetic.


Pohtor: Enough, Okuta.
Okuta: How did you…?


Okuta: Out of my way, Matoran!
-ssfff-


Okuta: What?!


Pohtor: Heh, that’s not gonna work.


Okuta: You’re a...




Shanra: …Scaratax?
Scaratax: Bingo.


Okuta: I should’ve known it was you, you sneaky pest.
Scaratax: Well, apparently you’re not as smart as you think you are.
Okuta: ...Apparently I'll have to kill you now.
Scaratax: Witty.


-fsssh-


-sshhh-


-ssshh-
Okuta: Gaaah!


Scaratax: That was awfully bright.
Shanra: I don't know what's happening, but it seems to be working in our favor.


Scaratax: Let's get out of here!








???: Hello, old friend.

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Comments

 I made it 
  October 28, 2012
Quoting RICtendo (Hungry) Interesting prologue, with the traditional half-body-shown pic at the end. Good amount of humour slotted in without going overboard. I'll be following this!
Thanks. This isn't a prologue though, it's the 10th chapter =P
 I like it 
  October 28, 2012
Interesting prologue, with the traditional half-body-shown pic at the end. Good amount of humour slotted in without going overboard. I'll be following this!
 
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