first, bad, then good, I m really not into the text case in the picture bd style, it distract me of the story a little, the text is small, hard to read, it forces you to put the text in bold blocks, wich make it even more difficult to read, I like seeing the whole pictures,as they are already small on my screan, positive, you do your best that they re not in the way, some are ok, you took some very good 'takes' with close ups, it draws me in, some cool effects make it sometimes look professional, the scenes you chose are particularly good and give atmosphere, all in all, you did a great job, for me, I d like you put your text over the pics just once, to see how it could look, as i did nt read the text, since it s so small, sorry, still loved what I saw!

Thoroughly digging this! Can't wait to see what happens next! Nice photos here, too!

Haha, these are great man! (BTW, I misplaced my leg a week ago, do you happen to have it in your stash? ;)

I'm so glad someone is both reading and enjoying this, its fairly niche I suspect.

Cheers for the support! much appreciated, really!

Another episode of nice builds, accompanied by brillianr macro photography. I'm enjoying the story and how the plot develops too. The main character speaks in a very strange, unique way. I think that you've been very creative in inventing this. Great work and I'm looking forward to the next episode.

Superb! Very good plot developpement, and I love how you use "Ole Kirk" like god. Brilliant work, looking forward to the next!