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Hi guys! Well, I finally got around to editing in the text XD. This is my second HF MOC on MOCpages, and probably second best. The cape was actually a last minute addition, I finally had the heart to dismantle/vaporize/utterly obliterate that OLD carousel set I never could figure out! Oh, and just a quick warning: I'm not feeling too well today, so sorry for any typos. Onto the build!
About this creation


Frontal view. Sorry the pictures aren't especially good quality, the lighting wasn't good, the background wasn't good... Thank goodness for the fact that I don't think any other HF builds of mine have white thus far!



Side view.



Back view with cape.



Back view without cape. Did you think I would leave the back uncovered? HA-HA! XD



Looking cool.



Lunging.



En Garde!



Farewell!




Comments

 I made it 
  November 26, 2012
Quoting Wertman 8 Nice one, dude. I like the Shield Idea. It's simplistic, but cool!
Thanks a lot! Stay tune, his revamp will be up in about thirty minutes!
 I like it 
  November 26, 2012
Nice one, dude. I like the Shield Idea. It's simplistic, but cool!
 I made it 
  November 18, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope Ahh, yes. That's what most of my pieces are stored in. And I face the same problem. And yes, there are much longer comments lol. Fenrek is one of the best bioMOCers to show up here in the past year or two. He shouldn't be too hard to find here :)
You too huh? If there are longer ones than that, then I don't want to see one XD! Yeah, I have seen his stuff now, he is fantastic!
  November 17, 2012
Ahh, yes. That's what most of my pieces are stored in. And I face the same problem. And yes, there are much longer comments lol. Fenrek is one of the best bioMOCers to show up here in the past year or two. He shouldn't be too hard to find here :)
 I made it 
  November 17, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope Haha, my comment isn't very long compared to some I've seen XD I figured you might not have such a large collection, thus my recommendation about starting with the weapons XD But, I will tell you, you do not always need a custom limb to make something epic. They are many people out there who make excellent use of hero factory pieces. (for instance, Fenrek) Anyway, posablility and playability are my favorite things to see in a MOC, so I definitely understand trying to fit that in there. :)
Woah, there are longer ones O.O? It really isn't a matter of not having an exceptionally large collection as it is a matter of not having that collection fully available for use. You see, my collection (for the most part, I do have the sorting project going on) is stored in GIANT containers: like, the kind you would use to store Christmas decorations. What's more, it is tightly packed, meaning it's extremely difficult, if not impossible, to get down to the lowest levels. I will sooner or later get to weapon making, if I ever get a nice large amount of Technic and Bio sorted. Fenrek? Who is Fenrek? I'll put that name in the search engine. Thanks again for the comment!
  November 17, 2012
Haha, my comment isn't very long compared to some I've seen XD I figured you might not have such a large collection, thus my recommendation about starting with the weapons XD But, I will tell you, you do not always need a custom limb to make something epic. They are many people out there who make excellent use of hero factory pieces. (for instance, Fenrek) Anyway, posablility and playability are my favorite things to see in a MOC, so I definitely understand trying to fit that in there. :)
 I made it 
  November 17, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope Well, since you asked for me to check it out I will be honest. I have seen better. But I like that you tried to cover up the back with some armor and the cape was an interesting touch. I think my favorite part of this is the shield, the use of the HF chest armor is pretty well done there :) but now I'm going to be slightly critical. I am not aware of the size of your collection, nor the extent of your bio building knowledge, but I am of the personal belief that you could do better that this. I'd personally start, (still don't know the size of your collection. Keep that in mind lol) by building more custom weapons. I know from personal experience, custom weapons can make even the simplistic MOC look epic. Once you become good at manufacturing weapons, I'd start trying some custom limbs. Now, I know custom is not always the way to go for building an epic MOC, but it can help with building skills that can be used elsewhere. Ok, I've deposited my two cents, and gotten my critique out if my system for the night, (I truly hate being a critique, but I felt like I should say something of value). I do really encourage you to work on those weapons though, they can be rather fun to make :)
O.O and I though I had a long comment! Anyway, yeah, I have seen better too. Really, I (at the moment) only have a small supply of good limb-making parts, which is why not one of my HF MOC's has a custom limb. Also, while I do go for good aesthetics, (XD, at least he isn't a literal rainbow warrior!) posability and playability are other focuses of mine. Actually, this guy is a modified version of an older build of mine called Icius, whose only color armor was white. I thought he looked too empty, so I changed him to what you see now. The sad part was, he had all sorts of weapons that I had to drop because they didn't go with the color scheme. Maybe once I have a sufficient amount of Technic sorted, I can give him some weapons. Thanks for the comment, and if you like loads of weapons, I think you will like my other HF ;).
 I like it 
  November 17, 2012
Well, since you asked for me to check it out I will be honest. I have seen better. But I like that you tried to cover up the back with some armor and the cape was an interesting touch. I think my favorite part of this is the shield, the use of the HF chest armor is pretty well done there :) but now I'm going to be slightly critical. I am not aware of the size of your collection, nor the extent of your bio building knowledge, but I am of the personal belief that you could do better that this. I'd personally start, (still don't know the size of your collection. Keep that in mind lol) by building more custom weapons. I know from personal experience, custom weapons can make even the simplistic MOC look epic. Once you become good at manufacturing weapons, I'd start trying some custom limbs. Now, I know custom is not always the way to go for building an epic MOC, but it can help with building skills that can be used elsewhere. Ok, I've deposited my two cents, and gotten my critique out if my system for the night, (I truly hate being a critique, but I felt like I should say something of value). I do really encourage you to work on those weapons though, they can be rather fun to make :)
 I like it 
  November 16, 2012
Very good bionicle Garrett! Though you should re-take the pics with a darker background because its kinda hard to see it but besides that great bionicle.
 
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