For many families, getting a family photo is a tradition. So I decided to build a MOC of one. I originally created a build that was too big, so I separated it into two parts. This one is for the contest entry, the other part will be a different MOC.
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December 29, 2012 |
Quoting Kenton Lanier
Thanks for participating in the Christmas Contest! 4.5/5 for originality/creativity. A great idea for a Christmas build. 6.5/10 for build quality. The partial tree on the right side works well, and the mountain makes a nice backdrop, although it's not easily recognizable as a mountain. 4/5 for presentation. The photos are clear and bright, and I think the black was a good idea for some of them, to contrast with the white build. Total score = 15/20. Nice job!
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Thanks for participating in the Christmas Contest! 4.5/5 for originality/creativity. A great idea for a Christmas build. 6.5/10 for build quality. The partial tree on the right side works well, and the mountain makes a nice backdrop, although it's not easily recognizable as a mountain. 4/5 for presentation. The photos are clear and bright, and I think the black was a good idea for some of them, to contrast with the white build. Total score = 15/20. Nice job! |
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December 29, 2012 |
Quoting LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
3.5/5 for originality. Nice idea, one which I wouldn't have thought of. However, you could have played it up more by building the photographer or a set of lights. 5/10 for build quality. I like how you chose to try forced perspective, though I feel that the mountain could use some work, such as having light grey at the bottom or including patches of greenery. The base was fairly simple, though the use of cheese slopes was effective and the half-tree turned out pretty well for the main photo. 4/5 for presentation. The photos are fairly well lit and clear. However, while the background works well in the main photo, the black/white contrast is distracting in many pictures. Total: 12.5/20 A solid entry. You're good at presentation, you just need to refine it a tad. The build itself would have been improved by more details, a larger and perhaps SNOTed landscape, and a bit more work on the FP. Still, you definitely have the potential to do great builds, and all the best in the new year!
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The contest has a size limit....so it couldn't be larger. That's also why I didn't have the photographer in it, check out the Christmas Family Photo Studio. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/349064 |
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December 29, 2012 |
Quoting Matthew Oh
Lovely entry! 5/5 for creativity, I do not think that I would have thought of that. 8/10 for build, I like the forced perspective. 3.5/5 for presentation. All in all, 17.5/20! Superb creation!
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December 29, 2012 |
3.5/5 for originality. Nice idea, one which I wouldn't have thought of. However, you could have played it up more by building the photographer or a set of lights. 5/10 for build quality. I like how you chose to try forced perspective, though I feel that the mountain could use some work, such as having light grey at the bottom or including patches of greenery. The base was fairly simple, though the use of cheese slopes was effective and the half-tree turned out pretty well for the main photo. 4/5 for presentation. The photos are fairly well lit and clear. However, while the background works well in the main photo, the black/white contrast is distracting in many pictures. Total: 12.5/20 A solid entry. You're good at presentation, you just need to refine it a tad. The build itself would have been improved by more details, a larger and perhaps SNOTed landscape, and a bit more work on the FP. Still, you definitely have the potential to do great builds, and all the best in the new year! |
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Lovely entry! 5/5 for creativity, I do not think that I would have thought of that. 8/10 for build, I like the forced perspective. 3.5/5 for presentation. All in all, 17.5/20! Superb creation! |
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December 13, 2012 |
Quoting TF Twitch
Very nicely done! I hope that you do well in the contest.
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December 13, 2012 |
Very nicely done! I hope that you do well in the contest. |
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December 12, 2012 |
Thanks guys! |
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December 12, 2012 |
Nice work, with the scene, backdrop, etc... Great! |
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December 12, 2012 |
That's a very nice vignette ;) I already wish you a merry Christmas! |
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December 12, 2012 |
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December 12, 2012 |
Great work! |
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