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Neevak
Just a MOC I made out of boredom in a day.
About this creation


About the MOC
This is a MOC I tinkered together in one session/morning-afternoon. I was feeling the need to MOC but didn't have any plans, so I sat down and started tinkering with some of the parts I got from Witch Doctor, and out came this guy. I initially wanted to use just Hero Factory parts(minus pins and connector type parts that are essential), but I quickly found this MOC was going to be severely lacking if I had done that. So I opted for using bionicle and system parts, but with an emphasis on a HF build.
I kinda built this guy too fast. he's all done, and I had no time to think up a name or back story. For now he's just a nameless fighter. With some feedback from you guys, I'll go back and add his name and background, thusly finishing the edit and character. :D

He's probably gonna come apart once I need any of his parts, but I'll go ahead and turn on the critique for this MOC to get some feedback on the simpler HF build aspect of things.

Bio
Name suggested by Gale Winthrope. Neevak was temporarily known as "nameless Warrior"
Neevak is an excommunicated member of the Order Of Mata Nui. He was Exiled after questioning the order's leader, Helyx and refusing to follow orders when told to kill some rogue members who simply wanted to leave. Neevak will still protect Matoran and assist toa who bear no threat to him, but is not above killing toa or order members who try to assassinate or capture him.
Neevak is a very skilled warrior when it comes to hand to hand combat, but it's come at a price for him. He has very little control or use of elemental energy as he's spent his lifetime versing himself in hand to hand combat. His size also means he's not very strong, even for a toa. He relies on skills and tactics more than anything, and with this he's able to survive the assassination attempts and attacks by Makuta and Dark hunters. Neevak mostly spends his time wondering place to place, not staying in one place for too long. Most know him as "the nameless fighter," or "the mute warrior." Neevak is able to speak, but seldom does. He makes Kopaka seem chatty in comparison.



Comments

 I made it 
  December 21, 2012
Quoting Banjax 2077 Great work Dave I like the contrast the eye color has with the rest of him(not that you had much of a choice). Glad to see your still posting here.
Thanks Banjax. Yeah I've increased my frequency of coming here and posting a little more. I'm still mostly keeping to myself, replying to comments though. Haven't really branched out to commenting on other people's MOCs. Maybe I will who knows. :/ I did like that to. I wasn't sure about the Matoro head, but people are saying this is the first time they've seen it used as a head where it doesn't actually just look like Matoro. :D Not sure how I pulled that off but what ever, I'll take it. XD
 I like it 
  December 19, 2012
Great work Dave I like the contrast the eye color has with the rest of him(not that you had much of a choice). Glad to see your still posting here.
  December 19, 2012
I appreciate your encouragement, but I don't really think that I'd fit in well at DA. I haven't seen that much of it, but from what I have seen, there are a lot of MOCers with much higher skill levels than I currently possess. :/
 I made it 
  December 19, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope Hahaha, wow. Thanks, glad you liked the name. I didn't think about it, but the name does have a familiarity with Bionicle names, so the story was very fitting! The last sentence of the story though, was my favorite XD
You're welcome. :D Hehe yeah, I was laughing as I typed that. XD A chatty Kopaka, as if. XD I don't think I got to it, but you should join Deviantart and my group, post your MOCs there. I honestly don't like MP very much, but rather like your MOCs. I know its asking a lot, but DA is a nice bionicle community to, and I'd love tos ee your work there. :)
  December 19, 2012
Hahaha, wow. Thanks, glad you liked the name. I didn't think about it, but the name does have a familiarity with Bionicle names, so the story was very fitting! The last sentence of the story though, was my favorite XD
 I made it 
  December 19, 2012
Quoting Gale Winthrope I love what you did with this guy. He is somewhat simpler than your other builds, but in a way, I think it works out better. I like the torso, and the legs, those are probably my favorite part. The weapons are simple, but very well fitting. The posability looks to be spectacular too. I am however at a loss for a story, (something that is surprising considering how many ideas I normally have) but I have got one for the name. How about Neevak?
Hey there Gale. Thanks for the compliment. Take another look at him. :D I went with your name, and gave you credit for it. I filled in the back story. Since he has a Bionicle sounding name I went with a bionicle backstory. Thanks. *hug* <3
 I like it 
  December 18, 2012
I love what you did with this guy. He is somewhat simpler than your other builds, but in a way, I think it works out better. I like the torso, and the legs, those are probably my favorite part. The weapons are simple, but very well fitting. The posability looks to be spectacular too. I am however at a loss for a story, (something that is surprising considering how many ideas I normally have) but I have got one for the name. How about Neevak?
 
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