The Chronicles of Mata-Robota Season One, Episdode One: The Fall of the Wolf-Lord: A LEGO® creation by Garrett A. : MOCpages.com

The Chronicles of Mata-Robota Season One, Episdode One: The Fall of the Wolf-Lord

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OK, guys, so this is my new series. Let's get on with things, shall we?

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Narrator: This is Wolfen. He is the leader of an army in service to Lord Goldfrost, the ruler of Mata-Robota. Many times he has stood against the forces of evil and won, but this battle will be different.

Narrator: He stands, contemplating his predicament, when he senses a stirring behind him.

Narrator: He whipped around to face the presence, but his face softened when he saw his captain.

Wolfen: Captain! What news do you bring?

Captain: I am sorry, Master Wolfen, but I bring grim tidings. You see--

Narrator: He was cut off by a laser. Wolfen turned to face the attacker.

Narrator: A vast shape lurked before him, taking aim at it`s next target. So great was the terror that it filled Wolfen with, that he made a choice to do something he never thought he would do.

Narrator: He fled.

Narrator: He came to the base of a large cliff, and went to sleep under a cloak. Much later he awoke.

Narrator: A sight met him that he was not prepared for: the remains of his army were scattered across the field.

Narrator: Slowly he walked through the battlefield, somberly gazing upon those who gave everything.

Narrator: There before Wolfen was his presumably dead captain.

Wolfen: Captain! Are you alive!? Speak to me!

Captian: Master Wolfen? Is that you? Ah, if you come seeking aid, I am afraid I can give none. Your legions are destroyed, your castle is in ruin, and I myself cannot go on on any longer. Goodbye....

Wolfen: And so ends the life of a valiant captain. Alas for the horrors of war! But there is no time to grieve now.

Wolfen: I must go see Lord Goldfrost!

Edit: Sorry the pictures are kinda blurry guys, they looked fine when I took them.

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Isaac The Awesome! (founder of i Brick)

March 23, 2013

Cool story! You sound a bit like my friend! (He make's HF story's and stuff!)

I like it

Thorn Marek

March 11, 2013

I think the blurry pictures add character to the story. The beginning felt really intense when it was dark, and in the morning it felt like wolfens view was blurry after waking up. Great story.

Chronos Omega

February 10, 2013

Someone shoots the captain. Wolf guy gets scared and takes a nap. Everyone's dead.

I made it

Garrett A.

January 1, 2013

Quoting Sir Seamus the 1st The pictures are blurry, but the story is the really entertaining part. Good job!

Thanks Seaumus!

I like it

Sir Seamus the 1st

January 1, 2013

The pictures are blurry, but the story is the really entertaining part. Good job!

I made it

Garrett A.

December 24, 2012

Quoting Gale Winthrope Beyond the pictures it is looking pretty good! I think perhaps from a literary stand point the narration could be better, but I can't exactly think how to do so at the moment :/ anyhoot, good job. :)

Thanks! The way I'm going to start out with this is similar to a series I never did I quite finish, but really want to. You see, I'm going to do a character intro that will last one or two episodes forr every one, and ultimately all of the different characters will converge on Golfrost's castle, thus... well, I can't just spoil it for everybody, now can I? XD, I'm glad you like it and merry Christmas =).

I like it

Gale Winthrope

December 24, 2012

Beyond the pictures it is looking pretty good! I think perhaps from a literary stand point the narration could be better, but I can't exactly think how to do so at the moment :/ anyhoot, good job. :)

I made it

Garrett A.

December 22, 2012

Quoting David the Fire Ninja Jedi I really like the Wolfen character! Nice movement with that guy!

Thanks! There will be an introduction for nearly every character like this, so stay tuned.