This looks OK... But legs look too long, there's too many colors outside of black, grey and dark green (stick to three colors MAX in a MOC. Although, I have yet to see a MOC that's only two colors either...), and your camera is too shaky to really see anything outside of a dude on stilts with a crazy color scheme and a big staff. I suggest, toning the colors down (stick to dark green, black, and grey), and finding some sort of box, canister lid, plastic bin or whatever to balance your camera on (if you're using your cell-phone like crazy nith, balance your hand on something). If you fix those, you should be well on your way to becoming a excellent MOCist!