This episode is going to be a lot shorter than the others but episode 3 is in the works.
Last time on RISING SHADOWS...
Athorus Odain, a boy of nine, lived with his father Artemis on the city-planet Coruscant.
Artemis worked as a tinker but one fateful evening a Jedi Knight and his apprentice came and accused Artemis of treason.
But Artemis was, in secret, a Sith Apprentice!
As Athorus watched from a storage compartment using force telepathy...
...a battle ensued in which Artemis slew the Jedi apprentice...
...but the Jedi Knight slew him in turn.
Now, taking up a fallen lightsaber...
...it's up to Athorus to avenge his father's death!
I mustn't underestimate him Athorus thought as he leaped threw the glass. He is a Jedi Knight. But the analytical side of him was crushed and cast aside by the rage he now let loose. What is this power? he wondered, eyes blazing. It flows through my whole being... ...and guides my movements through my emotions. This must be the force Athorus thought as he swung the lightsaber... My lightsaber. This one, now, is mine as well he thought, standing over the lifeless Jedi. He could not remember the whole fight - it had all happened so fast - but here he was... "...victorious." Athorus doused his new blades and crossed the room to where his father lay dead. "No... that is my father no longer; my father died bravely." He knelt and picked up the head of Artemis and gazed in pain at the face he knew so well. "You're coming with me, father."
"I know not where, yet, but you're going to see me do great things."
Quoting Beardless Dwarf
Not the longest episode but still a great job! I can't wait to see ep. 3! I think I'm gonna try to post the next episode of Quest for a Beard today or tomorrow. Again, nice job!
Thanks! Yeah, it was kind of short but I want to get episode 3 finished and it's a lot longer with (I think) great fight scenes. Thanks again! I'm excited for the next episode of QfaB!