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Coruscant, sewer system, 10:12 a.m....


"Master, it's a dead end."
"Yes; I see the culvert."
"But the trail ends here..."

"I'm going to try the Jedi temple; I'm not sure we can get a signal down here, though... Master Zen, this is Malachai Yoren. Do you copy?"

"Master Livedd, this is Malachai Yoren. Can anyone hear me?"

"Blast! The signal's not getting through."

"Looks like we'll have to head back to the surface before we can contact them."

"But ought we not to continue our search, master? We were tasked with finding master Taril's killer and so far we've found... well, nothing, master."

"We've not found nothing, my young padawan. It is clear that master Taril had been to Odain's apartment and slain him, sadly with the loss of Clast Opalind... Did you know him, Donovan?"

"No, master. He was in the class above me."

"Hmm... Well, with both Clast and Silen slain and Odain already dead, it leaves little doubt that someone Odain knew is behind it... next of kin, perhaps."

"Did Artemis Odain have a son?"

"Not that the Jedi knew of, though that seems to have been the case, based upon the wanted posters we found. And if what the droid salesman told us is true, the boy - Athorus Odain - has every bounty hunter on the planet searching for him - these Dojo Kenji included."

"Well we seem to have found the Kenji, master. At least "part" of them," Donovan said, smirking.

"We have found parts of some of them, but these few droids and the ones back up the tunnel are not all of the Kenji."

"There is no sign of the droid leader, Dojo Kai, nor that of the boy. Always be mindful of your surroundings, my young padawan; not just what you can see."
"Yes, master."

"There is more to the world than meets the eye, Donovan. More to the force, as well... I presume you've mastered the simpler arts; manipulation, for one?"
"Yes, master Yoren."





"Very good, Donovan. Your ability to move many objects without losing focus may be impeded in the future, however, so you must always maintain control."

"Yes, master."
"And you may call me Malachai. I'd prefer "Mal" but we'll stick to formalities for now. We'd best get moving; they must have doubled back and turned off somewhere."

"Wait, master; look there!"

"A lightsaber."



"Hmm... This is master Taril's lightsaber... The boy must have taken it after he killed him."

"They may still be around here; I don't think they doubled back, master."

"They must have, unless..."

"Where does this ladder lead?"

TO BE CONTINUED...

Episode 6 - Episode 8



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  March 11, 2013
Quoting David . I suspect with the website back up you will continue?
YAY!!! lol I'm so happy the site is back up. Episode 8 is on the way. Let me know if you want me to change anything about Troge for the next episodes. I think you'll really like 8.
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  March 10, 2013
I suspect with the website back up you will continue?
  March 4, 2013
You bring epic news, master. ;D
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  March 4, 2013
Quoting David . Yes, Master Ronin, all seems to be going well. ;D You'll have enough for an army of Jedi! Okay, uhm, I'm not too sure what my name is, I'll probably come up with one in the writing of this comment. :P I think I have it: Troge Diode. I'm assuming you want older faces and parts for his body and face. :) So, he's human, (of course) and his face is clean shaven when young, and shaven when hes older, but when he's older, it's not clean shaven, it's more of a stubble beard. A scar would be nice too, but that would be kind of copying Athoros. So like the new Jango fett Head, only old and yellow. :D (And you can decide in the scar) If you have black pants with a belt printed, I'll take those, if not, black or (The new) dark brown pants will work dandy. :D For the torso, a darker color (Ie: Dark brown, black, grey, ect) With gadgets for assassination printed on it. Kind of a bounty hunter torso. Sorta. And IF and only IF you have one to spare, a jet-pack. He doesn't really need one, so this too is entirely up to you. I'm glad you liked the mentor idea! I don't want to hold you up on the development of this series, I'm really enjoying it. May The Force Be With You! ~ Troge.
Right on, I'll see what I can do. Episode 8 should be up in a couple days.
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  March 4, 2013
Yes, Master Ronin, all seems to be going well. ;D You'll have enough for an army of Jedi! Okay, uhm, I'm not too sure what my name is, I'll probably come up with one in the writing of this comment. :P I think I have it: Troge Diode. I'm assuming you want older faces and parts for his body and face. :) So, he's human, (of course) and his face is clean shaven when young, and shaven when hes older, but when he's older, it's not clean shaven, it's more of a stubble beard. A scar would be nice too, but that would be kind of copying Athoros. So like the new Jango fett Head, only old and yellow. :D (And you can decide in the scar) If you have black pants with a belt printed, I'll take those, if not, black or (The new) dark brown pants will work dandy. :D For the torso, a darker color (Ie: Dark brown, black, grey, ect) With gadgets for assassination printed on it. Kind of a bounty hunter torso. Sorta. And IF and only IF you have one to spare, a jet-pack. He doesn't really need one, so this too is entirely up to you. I'm glad you liked the mentor idea! I don't want to hold you up on the development of this series, I'm really enjoying it. May The Force Be With You! ~ Troge.
 I made it 
  March 4, 2013
Quoting David . Tis series is getting better and better, try and have fewer action sequence photos, to make it seem fast moving, if you can. (Just a suggestion!)
I'm trying for the perfect balance of action so I don't have to explain what each character is doing constantly but I'll keep working on it :)
 I made it 
  March 4, 2013
Quoting David . Hmmm... This story is getting good! Is Donovan my character? He's perfect if he is, as I see a potential for...Dark training? In his future. I wish purple was an option( :( ) but blue will work as well. :D Tis series is getting better and better, try and have fewer action sequence photos, to make it seem fast moving, if you can. (Just a suggestion!) Can't wait for the next episode! Sorry I didn't comment on the last one, we've been away for the weekend.
Thanks, man! It's all starting to come together. Sorry, though; Donovan's just a plot character. I'm working on the next episode, though, and your character comes in with the Sith and meets Athorus that way. I liked your mentor idea. I'm going to wait until you give me a good idea of what he looks like, name, etc. before I start "filming" lol So far all I know is he's a little older than Athorus and he has a blue lightsaber (sorry I don't have purple :( I'm going to order a BUNCH off bricklink in a month or two so you can change down the line). Let me know what name, face and hair style, and Sith outfit you'd like. You can even build your guy, if you want, so I can try to build him as close as possible. Thanks again!
 I made it 
  March 4, 2013
Quoting Chris . Nice! The story is getting really good!
Thanks a lot!
 I like it 
  March 3, 2013
Hmmm... This story is getting good! Is Donovan my character? He's perfect if he is, as I see a potential for...Dark training? In his future. I wish purple was an option( :( ) but blue will work as well. :D Tis series is getting better and better, try and have fewer action sequence photos, to make it seem fast moving, if you can. (Just a suggestion!) Can't wait for the next episode! Sorry I didn't comment on the last one, we've been away for the weekend.
 I like it 
  March 3, 2013
Good work
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  March 3, 2013
Nice! The story is getting really good!
 I made it 
  March 3, 2013
Quoting Beardless Dwarf Great story! I like the addition of Donovan and his master. I feel like Donovan and Athorus will have a large showdown sometime in the future.
Thanks a lot! Maybe ;)
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  March 3, 2013
Great story! I like the addition of Donovan and his master. I feel like Donovan and Athorus will have a large showdown sometime in the future.
 
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