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A.I.L.C. prologue/episode 1
There was a planet named thasos, it was a small planet and it was all forest except for the 3 seas, a mountain called snow mountain and Lighting city.
About this creation


Lighting city had very complex and state of the art technology and many wanted the technology and fought for it but every time anyone tried they lost because Lighting city had force-fields and powerful weapons.



Lots of people lived there.



It was a very large.



With all the cool stuff a city would have.



The city was surrounded by forest. they thought they were safe but that will all change...







Up in orbit there was a ship entering the city's force-field line.



The shield-line guards open a com-link.



Guard 1: State your business here.



Clang captain: I want your planet!



Guard 1: Ummm... What?



Clang captain: Get out of my way and I won't destroy you!



Guard 2: Right... why don't you just fly away or I will destroy you!



Gaurd 2: Well?



Clang captain: You will be destroyed!



Guard 1: No I wont...



...



Guard 1: Okay safe travailing!





Clang captain: Prepare to fire!







Guard 1: They hit us! Our shields are off-line!

Guard 2: Send a distress call and fire back!



Clang captain: FIRE!!







Clang 3: There gone!



In Lighting city.

City guard 2: We've been sent a distress call!



City guard 1: Open it.



Distress call: A ship has opened fire on us I tshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... *static*



City guard 3: It was cut off!




City guard 1: We need to send fighters to help!

City guard 2: I've sent word and they are on there way.

City guard 1: Good.











Fighter 1: Charge weapons and fire at that ship!



Fighter 2: Were locked on.



fighter 1: Good then fire!



Clang 2: Fighters coming to us



Clang captain: Fire at them!



Fire!



After some fighting the fighters were destroyed.

Clang 2: They're destroyed.

Captain: Good.




Guard 2: They destroyed the fighters!

Guard 1: Send in the Fly Bird!



Clang 3: There's a ship coming toward us!





Fly bird captain: Fire at them!




Clang captain: Fire!









Fly bird captain: Fire the coon canons!

Fly bird commander: Yes sir!




Clang captain: FIRE!!



Fly bird captain: FIRE!!



The fly bird was destroyed.



Clang captain: Take out the shields and take us to the city!



Guard 3: The fly bird has been destroyed!



City guard 1: Charge city weapons and fire!




Clang captain: Fire at the city guns!



City guard 1: Evacuate the people to the underground city!








Clang captain: This planet is mine!



The city was destroyed. the people are in the underground city and the city was now called Clang city.


to be continued....


Next episode


A.I.L.C. stands for: Adventures In Lightning City.

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Comments

 I like it 
  July 17, 2014
Great story! 5/5
 I like it 
  July 2, 2013
I loved it . I thought the lead fighter piolet was going to be the hero and then he was killed and I was bumed out . I really got into it . Loved the miniature city . Off to # 2
 I made it 
  June 25, 2013
Quoting El Barto ! Cool stuff, Dude! I suggest going back and editing some of the text for grammar and spelling, when you get a chance. Nifty special effects!
you should check out some of the other episodes! :)
 I made it 
  March 28, 2013
Quoting cyberfrank 2010 there are still more fixing to be done in the writing, your concept is cool, the miniature scenes add tremendously to the whole, it s well structured, I d certainly like to see another story from you, perhaps not about this though, good effort!
I will probably make another story some time but I still want to Finish this one but thanks!
 I like it 
  March 28, 2013
there are still more fixing to be done in the writing, your concept is cool, the miniature scenes add tremendously to the whole, it s well structured, I d certainly like to see another story from you, perhaps not about this though, good effort!
 I made it 
  March 23, 2013
Quoting Nick C. One of the best comics I've seen here yet! I love the way you used full scale legos/miniatures! I WANT EPISODE TWO!!!
I fixed it a lot you should read it again
 I made it 
  March 23, 2013
Quoting El Barto ! Cool stuff, Dude! I suggest going back and editing some of the text for grammar and spelling, when you get a chance. Nifty special effects!
Ok I fixed most of it. you should read it again
 I like it 
  March 22, 2013
Cool stuff, Dude! I suggest going back and editing some of the text for grammar and spelling, when you get a chance. Nifty special effects!
 I like it 
  March 22, 2013
One of the best comics I've seen here yet! I love the way you used full scale legos/miniatures! I WANT EPISODE TWO!!!
 
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