Balast was a black smith that didn't particularly enjoy the company of others. So much so that he moved away to the temples of the silverstone beings. He like his brother dextrix, Learned the ways of the ninja and samurai. Now he uses his blacksmith knowledge to make new and unusual weapons to combat evil.
About this creation
I would like critic on this moc. I know it wasn't my best but I want to know what I can change for the future.
I actually think this is awesome. For improvements I'd say maybe throw a few tiny pieces on the thighs under the armor to fill it up so it doesn't have the awkward spaces in it. Also pictures of the back would be nice because as it is I can't picture it fully in my head as a 3 dimensional model. Besides that maybe replace the hat on his head with something that covers his head a little better and bends down over it. Otherwise this is a great moc.
Not bad, there are a few things I would change though. Namely, the torso and the armor piece on the head. For the torso all I would really do is remove the hero factory piece and replace it with something different. Hope my comment can help a bit.